UH-OH vs Dynomight[HUSH WINS]

[Inno]

NWL:Season I: Week I



Verses are due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30

Voting on 2 battles is required.


TOPIC:

http://www.barbadillo.it/wp-content/uploads/2016/05/150803-hiroshima-aftermath-12p_7b60cbe2619912a12592539c8b2895c8.nbcnews-ux-2880-1000.jpg

uh-oh vs Dynomight

[uh-oh]

HEY

[Dynomight]

**a lone figure surveys the rubble that is Uh-ohs life**

[Victor.]

Crumbled to pieces .. humbled by grievance
In the aftermath of destruction your speachless
Where rubble laid covered a hundred graves
Trying to stomach the destruction brung hunger pains
The clouds were shiitake and portobello
Enter the wasteland, now the whole world a ghetto
traded flowers and trees for plants of the nuclear kind
Watched death blossom and sprout root in our mind
Learn a murderous lesson due to greed, hate, and aggression
History erased in a second beckons a new Great Depression

[Witty]

wot

[uh-oh]

YEARS OF WAR.
A GREAT NATION OF FEARLESS WARRIORS
WIELDING SWORDS
BROUGHT TO ITS KNEES BEFORE IT COULD SEAL THE DOORS
SQUEALING HORDES. DEATHLY BEFUDDLED.
SHADOWS OF THOSE WHO NEVER WITNESSED BATTLE
ETCHED IN THE RUBBLE.
A MANS TEMPTED TO CHUCKLE.
PATHS CLOSE WHILE GRIEF GRABS THOSE
LEFT TO THE STRUGGLE
AS THE MAD GLOW LETS THE MAN KNOW
WHAT HE'S LEFT TO SUCCUMB TO.

A SLOW DEATH.

[Big Bolo]

Think both could've did much much better, and went more lines.... uh oh started out better than hush. But as a overall verse and how well a picture was painted into his own picture and feel was just overall more creative and that's hush, so I'll vote for him

[Lucipher Howlz]

whos victor? I'll vote when I know whats going on lol

[John Dillinger]

Yea I think Dyno was dope w/ this one, more creative imo

Definitely 2 different styles it seems, one more poetic & one more rap-like

Both were cool in referencing the pic and incorporating it into their verses

Shiitake and portobello line was tight, all around good imagery from Dyno

I think this will come down to personal preference from voters since both were cool but I have Dyno taking it with a better verse.

[Diablo]

Traded flowers of peace for plants of the nuclear kind LOTB

Vote - Hush