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View Full Version : Round 2: 1. Jabari Black vs 9. Plot - JB WINS


Jabari Black
09-18-2018, 12:14 AM
IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding
- Votes must be at least ONE sentence with a decent explanation.
- ONLY 1 EXTENSIONS ALLOWED THE ENTIRE PLAYOFFS



MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 2 BATTLES


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VOTING ENDS MONDAY
ROUND 3 UP BY MONDAY NIGHT

Jabari Black Plot

Plot
09-22-2018, 02:45 AM
Ext

Jabari Black
09-22-2018, 06:47 AM
You’re out of extensions homie. I’ll grant you this one though since it’s me but get you bar on as soon as possible. Plot

Plot
09-22-2018, 02:35 PM
Gunbarz lol.
You aint got diss ability Jab, coz when I get retarded the steel becomes a disgrace
A Stuttering problem? Nah, but this stupid bastard will just keep repeating in your face.

Jabari Black
09-22-2018, 07:26 PM
Catch him slipping at a red light! Soon as I creep up this wimp fucked/
Revolver lift up...you’ll see a barrel spinning in traffic like a cement truck/

Diablo
09-23-2018, 06:07 AM
I got Jab here

liked Plot’s idea for real just happened to like Jabs that bit more conceptually and wording wise

Big Bolo
09-23-2018, 07:45 AM
Think they both put some good twists on gun bars here so that's cool wasn't a landslide skill wise but think JB got it here, better wording which allowed me to picture what he was saying better, so yeah got JB

Destroyer
09-23-2018, 08:58 AM
I’m going plot because while I’ll take gun bars seriously, not ones involving a revolver in 2018

V/plot

Hush
09-23-2018, 09:16 AM
I like both
Since it’s only one bar I feel I gotta grade ten harsher


And plot was vague
He didn’t really set the bar up in the 2 lines

He had to tell us it was a gun bar in the intro portion


Jb was More concise


V black

Amen
09-24-2018, 09:43 AM
I thought this was close both being gun bar attack lines.

JB's was kind of a reach. The barrel doesn't spin on a revolver. The cylinder does. So wording right there kind of hurt the bar for me, all though many wouldn't know that and I knew what you where you were TRYING to go with this - I did enjoy the imagery your bar provided. Plot's setup had a lot going on, I think he could've cleaned that up a bit to help his concept have more of an impact.

This is mad close but I think from a technical aspect and enjoyment factor Jab will get my vote here barely.

v/Jabari Black

BodySnatcher
09-24-2018, 10:15 AM
Dope read fellas, I got JB here with a hot gunbar. Plot was cool too, I honestly think you should've led with ur opener and finished different but either way good 1-2 fellas.

John Dillinger
09-24-2018, 10:23 AM
Digging Plot here more

Both were cool just thought Plot brought it more

Jabari Black
09-24-2018, 10:50 AM
JB up 6-2.

Needs more votes.
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DynamiCz
09-24-2018, 11:41 AM
Dope on both ends...

I got JB here tho with the cement truck joint, creative! Plot shit was nice to as well, but overall I just think Jabari line hit a lil tougher. Good shit to both

V-JB

Jabari Black
09-25-2018, 06:02 PM
JB wins 6-2