View Full Version : Round 2: 1. Jabari Black vs 9. Plot - JB WINS
Jabari Black
09-18-2018, 12:14 AM
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Jabari Black Plot
Jabari Black
09-22-2018, 06:47 AM
You’re out of extensions homie. I’ll grant you this one though since it’s me but get you bar on as soon as possible. Plot
Gunbarz lol.
You aint got diss ability Jab, coz when I get retarded the steel becomes a disgrace
A Stuttering problem? Nah, but this stupid bastard will just keep repeating in your face.
Jabari Black
09-22-2018, 07:26 PM
Catch him slipping at a red light! Soon as I creep up this wimp fucked/
Revolver lift up...you’ll see a barrel spinning in traffic like a cement truck/
Diablo
09-23-2018, 06:07 AM
I got Jab here
liked Plot’s idea for real just happened to like Jabs that bit more conceptually and wording wise
Big Bolo
09-23-2018, 07:45 AM
Think they both put some good twists on gun bars here so that's cool wasn't a landslide skill wise but think JB got it here, better wording which allowed me to picture what he was saying better, so yeah got JB
Destroyer
09-23-2018, 08:58 AM
I’m going plot because while I’ll take gun bars seriously, not ones involving a revolver in 2018
V/plot
I like both
Since it’s only one bar I feel I gotta grade ten harsher
And plot was vague
He didn’t really set the bar up in the 2 lines
He had to tell us it was a gun bar in the intro portion
Jb was More concise
V black
I thought this was close both being gun bar attack lines.
JB's was kind of a reach. The barrel doesn't spin on a revolver. The cylinder does. So wording right there kind of hurt the bar for me, all though many wouldn't know that and I knew what you where you were TRYING to go with this - I did enjoy the imagery your bar provided. Plot's setup had a lot going on, I think he could've cleaned that up a bit to help his concept have more of an impact.
This is mad close but I think from a technical aspect and enjoyment factor Jab will get my vote here barely.
v/Jabari Black
BodySnatcher
09-24-2018, 10:15 AM
Dope read fellas, I got JB here with a hot gunbar. Plot was cool too, I honestly think you should've led with ur opener and finished different but either way good 1-2 fellas.
John Dillinger
09-24-2018, 10:23 AM
Digging Plot here more
Both were cool just thought Plot brought it more
Jabari Black
09-24-2018, 10:50 AM
JB up 6-2.
Needs more votes.
Cashius Blue Bayou DynamiCz
DynamiCz
09-24-2018, 11:41 AM
Dope on both ends...
I got JB here tho with the cement truck joint, creative! Plot shit was nice to as well, but overall I just think Jabari line hit a lil tougher. Good shit to both
V-JB
Jabari Black
09-25-2018, 06:02 PM
JB wins 6-2
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