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View Full Version : Champ: Cashius vs. Jabari Black {Jabari Black wins}


~RustyGunZ~
09-20-2018, 09:09 PM
NBL Season 11
Week 5

Due TUESDAY 9/25/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

Cashius Jabari Black

Jabari Black
09-24-2018, 08:21 AM
Check. 14-16 cool?

Cashius
09-24-2018, 11:25 AM
Yup.

~RustyGunZ~
09-25-2018, 04:47 PM
Cashius Jabari Black

Jabari Black
09-25-2018, 09:48 PM
14 sent to Knuck Cashius

Cashius
09-26-2018, 12:16 AM
Sent.

Jabari Black
09-26-2018, 07:22 AM
You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/
Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/

You faggot new cats can get shot for nothin’...I’ll put holes all through you, my G
Got strong aim, call me Lebron James...I’ll Open Up the ‘New School’ for free

Catch him on a drive by! Shotty hanging out the window...these slugs be hot/
I’ll pull somethin...pick em off, then put the petal on the floor like she loves me not/
All played shit in ya verses. Even flipped my line...we see the resemblences/
I raise the bar...you just spin a bar and get a pass like subway entrances/
Jimmy Neutron...my metal barkin. Since you dissed the new school - let’s get wild/
Big desi - this shit loud! U’ll hear a bird coming from the head of the class - Miss Fowl/
Chest open, heart exposed...medics find you in the worst way dummy/
So when docs stapling Cash on his chest...it ain’t Birthday money/
He politick to win battles. But I got a .40 that’ll leave this boy exposed/
Since you try not to vote on battles...let’s see if you can avoid this poll/
Niggas be dickriding Cashius. So I’m killing every fan that step round me/
Razor come out...I’ll let a gemstar run through ya cheerleaders like a pep rally/
Racist bitch! It’s crime scene when the 9 squeeze. Then the medics watch ya life leave/
Blanket over the dead body...but you should be used to being covered in white sheets/

Cashius
09-26-2018, 07:58 AM
This is a hobby and a way for me to improve until I decide if I want to make a career out of it

Reaaaaaallly?

And with that profession...how much cash do you plan to stack in a year?
You fucking idiot...even ACTUAL battle rappers don’t list battle rap as their “career”
Go ahead and try to battle for a living...1 year there’s a slim chance that you’re even alive
It’s funny, in rap you’ve never Benefactor...and THAT’S what your family gonna need to survive
Wrote a wall after your peers criticized you...My crew gon’ bust this suckers eye in
It’ll be like the podcast...4 dudes bringing you down, followed by a bunch of fucking crying
I watch football while you write gun bars...but they’re STILL not good, you’re just garbage
Your shit is just awful and lame...Couldn’t be ‘sitting on top of the game’ if you were Booger McFarland
You’ll get left covered in blood...and then I’m buckin’ all your crew, B
Shit, even Black Widow gonna be Scarlett...like it’s a fucking Marvel Movie
Every line is about the ghats you holding...but you ain’t actually bustin’em off
I don’t give a fuck about the guns ‘Jabbering’...when this faggot is ‘nothing but talk’
I’ll put the knife straight to your chest...and then I’m lettin’ it grind, my dude
Won’t need to read your whack verse to know one Slash be the ‘end of the line for you’

Score
09-26-2018, 04:44 PM
Catch him on a drive by! Shotty hanging out the window...these slugs be hot/
I’ll pull somethin...pick em off, then put the petal on the floor like she loves me not/

fuck with this


All played shit in ya verses. Even flipped my line...we see the resemblences/
I raise the bar...you just spin a bar and get a pass like subway entrances/

cool flip


Jimmy Neutron...my metal barkin. Since you dissed the new school - let’s get wild/
Big desi - this shit loud! U’ll hear a bird coming from the head of the class - Miss Fowl/

fire to me. some ppl may not know what the fuck u talkin bout tho


Chest open, heart exposed...medics find you in the worst way dummy/
So when docs stapling Cash on his chest...it ain’t Birthday money/

nah


He politick to win battles. But I got a .40 that’ll leave this boy exposed/
Since you try not to vote on battles...let’s see if you can avoid this poll/

wish u didnt say battle twice. this ok


Niggas be dickriding Cashius. So I’m killing every fan that step round me/
Razor come out...I’ll let a gemstar run through ya cheerleaders like a pep rally/

ok


Racist bitch! It’s crime scene when the 9 squeeze. Then the medics watch ya life leave/
Blanket over the dead body...but you should be used to being covered in white sheets/

ok cool

Reaaaaaallly?

And with that profession...how much cash do you plan to stack in a year?
You fucking idiot...even ACTUAL battle rappers don’t list battle rap as their “career”

wish u didnt say battle rap twice, idk... just messes it up for me. would have better to just "that as their career" maybe its just me. ok bar


Go ahead and try to battle for a living...1 year there’s a slim chance that you’re even alive
It’s funny, in rap you’ve never Benefactor...and THAT’S what your family gonna need to survive

weird to me ive never seen that wp, but i cant hold it against u lol. fire

Wrote a wall after your peers criticized you...My crew gon’ bust this suckers eye in
It’ll be like the podcast...4 dudes bringing you down, followed by a bunch of fucking crying

got em


I watch football while you write gun bars...but they’re STILL not good, you’re just garbage
Your shit is just awful and lame...Couldn’t be ‘sitting on top of the game’ if you were Booger McFarland

lil obscure, some may not get it. i like it tho


You’ll get left covered in blood...and then I’m buckin’ all your crew, B
Shit, even Black Widow gonna be Scarlett...like it’s a fucking Marvel Movie

fuck w it


Every line is about the ghats you holding...but you ain’t actually bustin’em off
I don’t give a fuck about the guns ‘Jabbering’...when this faggot is ‘nothing but talk’

yup


I’ll put the knife straight to your chest...and then I’m lettin’ it grind, my dude
Won’t need to read your whack verse to know one Slash be the ‘end of the line for you’

nice

fire battle but cash got em

Flow
09-27-2018, 04:20 AM
Catch him on a drive by! Shotty hanging out the window...these slugs be hot/
I’ll pull somethin...pick em off, then put the petal on the floor like she loves me not/
I get this bar or I think I did.. But I don't get how the petal has a double meaning??if it did it be fire but I don't see it so it's a miss sorry
All played shit in ya verses. Even flipped my line...we see the resemblences/
I raise the bar...you just spin a bar and get a pass like subway entrances/
creative personal. Nice. I'd be hitting this angle again though an making one that's a bit more direct an harsh
Jimmy Neutron...my metal barkin. Since you dissed the new school - let’s get wild/
Big desi - this shit loud! U’ll hear a bird coming from the head of the class - Miss Fowl/
obscure but creative. Set up does enough. Not sure the wording direct enough but creativity passes it. Coo bar
Chest open, heart exposed...medics find you in the worst way dummy/
So when docs stapling Cash on his chest...it ain’t Birthday money/
do people staple cash to people's chest? Again doesn't work both ways for me. An cash bars are always risky bro
He politick to win battles. But I got a .40 that’ll leave this boy exposed/
Since you try not to vote on battles...let’s see if you can avoid this poll/
light but ok an a nice angle. Could of done more but hits
Niggas be dickriding Cashius. So I’m killing every fan that step round me/
Razor come out...I’ll let a gemstar run through ya cheerleaders like a pep rally/
too many references my British mind doesn't get. I can make a guess but not sure how I feel about it either way not at your level anyway
Racist bitch! It’s crime scene when the 9 squeeze. Then the medics watch ya life leave/
Blanket over the dead body...but you should be used to being covered in white sheets/coo end

jab still had a lot of gun bars which may hurt him. He had some dope creativity in there and actually a fair amount of personal angles that were mixed in their approaches. In on way I think this was a big step up for Jab bringing a fresher approach however I felt in exchange jab let himself down on a few things he usually gets spot on. Still a learning curve an was still a solid showing overall. Potentially even stronger if one or two references weren't lost on me

Vs

Reaaaaaallly?

And with that profession...how much cash do you plan to stack in a year?
You fucking idiot...even ACTUAL battle rappers don’t list battle rap as their “career”
lol funny personal opener
Go ahead and try to battle for a living...1 year there’s a slim chance that you’re even alive
It’s funny, in rap you’ve never Benefactor...and THAT’S what your family gonna need to survive
not seen this wordplay nice
Wrote a wall after your peers criticized you...My crew gon’ bust this suckers eye in
It’ll be like the podcast...4 dudes bringing you down, followed by a bunch of fucking crying
wouldn't have worked but given jabs response to the magcast this is actually a pretty solid personal
I watch football while you write gun bars...but they’re STILL not good, you’re just garbage
Your shit is just awful and lame...Couldn’t be ‘sitting on top of the game’ if you were Booger McFarland
lost on me sorry. I can tell that is probably a good bar but I don't know the bloke well enough to pass it. Guessing he a big football player or pundit
You’ll get left covered in blood...and then I’m buckin’ all your crew, B
Shit, even Black Widow gonna be Scarlett...like it’s a fucking Marvel Movie
has no one done this idea before. Haha shit was dope especially with the nameflip
Every line is about the ghats you holding...but you ain’t actually bustin’em off
I don’t give a fuck about the guns ‘Jabbering’...when this faggot is ‘nothing but talk’
were you trying for jab bring? I like this bar but it's a bit of reach
I’ll put the knife straight to your chest...and then I’m lettin’ it grind, my dude
Won’t need to read your whack verse to know one Slash be the ‘end of the line for you
pretty sure I did the slash angles on him to death in one of our first battles so felt played to me’

cash was pretty brutal here in his directness. Bar two near the end this was a very consistent showing with a nice mix of wordplay and personals. A few Lols. Yeah cash got this


Vote cash

Victor.
09-28-2018, 01:45 PM
Catch him on a drive by! Shotty hanging out the window...these slugs be hot/
I’ll pull somethin...pick em off, then put the petal on the floor like she loves me not/
...dope idea . Pretty slick
All played shit in ya verses. Even flipped my line...we see the resemblences/
I raise the bar...you just spin a bar and get a pass like subway entrances/
...dope
Jimmy Neutron...my metal barkin. Since you dissed the new school - let’s get wild/
Big desi - this shit loud! U’ll hear a bird coming from the head of the class - Miss Fowl/
...nah
Chest open, heart exposed...medics find you in the worst way dummy/
So when docs stapling Cash on his chest...it ain’t Birthday money/
...eh
He politick to win battles. But I got a .40 that’ll leave this boy exposed/
Since you try not to vote on battles...let’s see if you can avoid this poll/
...fireeeeee
Niggas be dickriding Cashius. So I’m killing every fan that step round me/
Razor come out...I’ll let a gemstar run through ya cheerleaders like a pep rally/
...almost maybe
Racist bitch! It’s crime scene when the 9 squeeze. Then the medics watch ya life leave/
Blanket over the dead body...but you should be used to being covered in white sheets/
....eh I did this maybe it’s why I am like nahhh


Reaaaaaallly?

And with that profession...how much cash do you plan to stack in a year?
You fucking idiot...even ACTUAL battle rappers don’t list battle rap as their “career”
...ok
Go ahead and try to battle for a living...1 year there’s a slim chance that you’re even alive
It’s funny, in rap you’ve never Benefactor...and THAT’S what your family gonna need to survive
....nah man . Played to me
Wrote a wall after your peers criticized you...My crew gon’ bust this suckers eye in
It’ll be like the podcast...4 dudes bringing you down, followed by a bunch of fucking crying
.....ok
I watch football while you write gun bars...but they’re STILL not good, you’re just garbage
Your shit is just awful and lame...Couldn’t be ‘sitting on top of the game’ if you were Booger McFarland
...eh
You’ll get left covered in blood...and then I’m buckin’ all your crew, B
Shit, even Black Widow gonna be Scarlett...like it’s a fucking Marvel Movie
...dope
Every line is about the ghats you holding...but you ain’t actually bustin’em off
I don’t give a fuck about the guns ‘Jabbering’...when this faggot is ‘nothing but talk’
...forced kinda like nah man . Good try. Lol u spelled gatt which a h
I’ll put the knife straight to your chest...and then I’m lettin’ it grind, my dude
Won’t need to read your whack verse to know one Slash be the ‘end of the line for you’
....cool but someone just did it





I got Jabari


Hard to call this one


The voting bar was line of the battle to me

Ryno
09-29-2018, 07:20 PM
Catch him on a drive by! Shotty hanging out the window...these slugs be hot/
I’ll pull somethin...pick em off, then put the petal on the floor like she loves me not/
All played shit in ya verses. Even flipped my line...we see the resemblences/
I raise the bar...you just spin a bar and get a pass like subway entrances/
Chest open, heart exposed...medics find you in the worst way dummy/
So when docs stapling Cash on his chest...it ain’t Birthday money/
He politick to win battles. But I got a .40 that’ll leave this boy exposed/
Since you try not to vote on battles...let’s see if you can avoid this poll/
Niggas be dickriding Cashius. So I’m killing every fan that step round me/
Razor come out...I’ll let a gemstar run through ya cheerleaders like a pep rally/
Racist bitch! It’s crime scene when the 9 squeeze. Then the medics watch ya life leave/
Blanket over the dead body...but you should be used to being covered in white sheets/

Reaaaaaallly?

Go ahead and try to battle for a living...1 year there’s a slim chance that you’re even alive
It’s funny, in rap you’ve never Benefactor...and THAT’S what your family gonna need to survive
Wrote a wall after your peers criticized you...My crew gon’ bust this suckers eye in
It’ll be like the podcast...4 dudes bringing you down, followed by a bunch of fucking crying
You’ll get left covered in blood...and then I’m buckin’ all your crew, B
Shit, even Black Widow gonna be Scarlett...like it’s a fucking Marvel Movie
I’ll put the knife straight to your chest...and then I’m lettin’ it grind, my dude
Won’t need to read your whack verse to know one Slash be the ‘end of the line for you’

v/JB.. dope battle. I thought jabari went in this week. very consistent. i think he had the harsher quotes as well

~RustyGunZ~
09-29-2018, 08:16 PM
Tied 2-2
Aero Killing Spree Jabari Black Blue Bayou Cashius Listen John Dillinger ORC DynamiCz Plot Twodrop Cred Destroyer

John Dillinger
09-30-2018, 12:11 AM
Catch him on a drive by! Shotty hanging out the window...these slugs be hot/
I’ll pull somethin...pick em off, then put the petal on the floor like she loves me not/
Dope
All played shit in ya verses. Even flipped my line...we see the resemblences/
I raise the bar...you just spin a bar and get a pass like subway entrances/
Tight
Jimmy Neutron...my metal barkin. Since you dissed the new school - let’s get wild/
Big desi - this shit loud! U’ll hear a bird coming from the head of the class - Miss Fowl/
This is cool
Chest open, heart exposed...medics find you in the worst way dummy/
So when docs stapling Cash on his chest...it ain’t Birthday money/
Not feeling as much
He politick to win battles. But I got a .40 that’ll leave this boy exposed/
Since you try not to vote on battles...let’s see if you can avoid this poll/
Dope
Niggas be dickriding Cashius. So I’m killing every fan that step round me/
Razor come out...I’ll let a gemstar run through ya cheerleaders like a pep rally/
I like this
Racist bitch! It’s crime scene when the 9 squeeze. Then the medics watch ya life leave/
Blanket over the dead body...but you should be used to being covered in white sheets/
Cool

Reaaaaaallly?

And with that profession...how much cash do you plan to stack in a year?
You fucking idiot...even ACTUAL battle rappers don’t list battle rap as their “career”
Aight
Go ahead and try to battle for a living...1 year there’s a slim chance that you’re even alive
It’s funny, in rap you’ve never Benefactor...and THAT’S what your family gonna need to survive
Dope
Wrote a wall after your peers criticized you...My crew gon’ bust this suckers eye in
It’ll be like the podcast...4 dudes bringing you down, followed by a bunch of fucking crying
Cool
I watch football while you write gun bars...but they’re STILL not good, you’re just garbage
Your shit is just awful and lame...Couldn’t be ‘sitting on top of the game’ if you were Booger McFarland
I dig it
You’ll get left covered in blood...and then I’m buckin’ all your crew, B
Shit, even Black Widow gonna be Scarlett...like it’s a fucking Marvel Movie
Tight
Every line is about the ghats you holding...but you ain’t actually bustin’em off
I don’t give a fuck about the guns ‘Jabbering’...when this faggot is ‘nothing but talk’
Nameplay doesn’t work for me bro
I’ll put the knife straight to your chest...and then I’m lettin’ it grind, my dude
Won’t need to read your whack verse to know one Slash be the ‘end of the line for you’
Not bad


Good & close battle here


Y’all both brought it


I think Jabari had the better of the two verses though


Weren’t many bad lines from each just think JB hit harder

Cred
09-30-2018, 05:52 PM
All played shit in ya verses. Even flipped my line...we see the resemblences/
I raise the bar...you just spin a bar and get a pass like subway entrances/
Jimmy Neutron...my metal barkin. Since you dissed the new school - let’s get wild/
Big desi - this shit loud! U’ll hear a bird coming from the head of the class - Miss Fowl/
He politick to win battles. But I got a .40 that’ll leave this boy exposed/
Since you try not to vote on battles...let’s see if you can avoid this poll/


vs


Wrote a wall after your peers criticized you...My crew gon’ bust this suckers eye in
It’ll be like the podcast...4 dudes bringing you down, followed by a bunch of fucking crying
Every line is about the ghats you holding...but you ain’t actually bustin’em off
I don’t give a fuck about the guns ‘Jabbering’...when this faggot is ‘nothing but talk’
I’ll put the knife straight to your chest...and then I’m lettin’ it grind, my dude
Won’t need to read your whack verse to know one Slash be the ‘end of the line for you’


This battle was pretty dope with the lines I quoted above. After reviewing bars I got it tied in
quotes. This one honestly jus came down to personal preference and I thought that spin the bar joint
was fye. Cash had that carry him by 4 which was pretty good too, but JB had LOTB.

Vote - Jabari

Listen
09-30-2018, 07:37 PM
Catch him on a drive by! Shotty hanging out the window...these slugs be hot/
I’ll pull somethin...pick em off, then put the petal on the floor like she loves me not/
Nice.

All played shit in ya verses. Even flipped my line...we see the resemblences/
I raise the bar...you just spin a bar and get a pass like subway entrances/
Haha dope.

Jimmy Neutron...my metal barkin. Since you dissed the new school - let’s get wild/
Big desi - this shit loud! U’ll hear a bird coming from the head of the class - Miss Fowl/
Eh. I get it, just not really my kinda bar.

Chest open, heart exposed...medics find you in the worst way dummy/
So when docs stapling Cash on his chest...it ain’t Birthday money/
Okay.

He politick to win battles. But I got a .40 that’ll leave this boy exposed/
Since you try not to vote on battles...let’s see if you can avoid this poll/
Not bad.

Niggas be dickriding Cashius. So I’m killing every fan that step round me/
Razor come out...I’ll let a gemstar run through ya cheerleaders like a pep rally/
Dope.

Racist bitch! It’s crime scene when the 9 squeeze. Then the medics watch ya life leave/
Blanket over the dead body...but you should be used to being covered in white sheets/
Okay.


And with that profession...how much cash do you plan to stack in a year?
You fucking idiot...even ACTUAL battle rappers don’t list battle rap as their “career”
lol. Okay, okay.

Go ahead and try to battle for a living...1 year there’s a slim chance that you’re even alive
It’s funny, in rap you’ve never Benefactor...and THAT’S what your family gonna need to survive
Nice.

Wrote a wall after your peers criticized you...My crew gon’ bust this suckers eye in
It’ll be like the podcast...4 dudes bringing you down, followed by a bunch of fucking crying
Ok.

I watch football while you write gun bars...but they’re STILL not good, you’re just garbage
Your shit is just awful and lame...Couldn’t be ‘sitting on top of the game’ if you were Booger McFarland
No.

You’ll get left covered in blood...and then I’m buckin’ all your crew, B
Shit, even Black Widow gonna be Scarlett...like it’s a fucking Marvel Movie
Ok.

Every line is about the ghats you holding...but you ain’t actually bustin’em off
I don’t give a fuck about the guns ‘Jabbering’...when this faggot is ‘nothing but talk’
Ok.

I’ll put the knife straight to your chest...and then I’m lettin’ it grind, my dude
Won’t need to read your whack verse to know one Slash be the ‘end of the line for you’
Dope.


Pretty good battle fellas. Even the misses were really just compared to the rest of the material, which is indicative of really well crafted material.

I have JB edging him here.