PDA

View Full Version : Champ: Jabari Black vs. Blue Bayou - Blue Bayou WINS


~RustyGunZ~
09-30-2018, 09:09 PM
NBL Season 11
Week 5

Due FRIDAY 10/5/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

Jabari Black Blue Bayou

Jabari Black
10-01-2018, 02:04 PM
Check. 14 cool?

Blue Bayou
10-03-2018, 09:33 AM
something like that

g'luck JB

Blue Bayou
10-04-2018, 02:53 PM
Sent 18 to Knuck.

Jabari Black
10-05-2018, 06:21 PM
Ext

Jabari Black
10-06-2018, 11:14 PM
Savage mind! I’ll hijack em...You either come out the car or I blast the 9/
When Black take the whip from a white boy...it ain’t a Cashius line/
Ya gun bars? I ain’t buyin it! Smith off the hip - bitch you dyin quick/
After I line the shit...It’ll be 15 spitting out the 40 like ya first time tryin it/
You in my PMs every time I vote against you. Now u crying to Vic? This nigga triflin/
You got ya whole style from Barcotic...hell, you even started bitching like him/
Every time you battle Cred, he bestin ya...so fuck it nigga - the Wesson tucked/
I’ll get retarded when I Take Em 2 School...38....you’ll see a Special Buss/
You think ya niggas gon’ back you? I’ll let the ‘matic pop at cowards/
You’ll see his niggas skate when I put the Auto on his squad like Rocket Power/
Im strapped with wild toys. You let ya niggas gas you - now the cal poised/
Ya chaps spurred you on....now the metal spinnin off the boot like a cowboy/
Old colt - the tool brittle. Switch guns and copped the new pistol/
Now the desi point...I’ll let a bird talk to a vet like Dr. Dolittle/
I know bout the blue. I didn’t bang, but my whole block was crippin...slumpin cats/
My niggas moved around the block for the 6 point like running backs/
Is it NCs or RB? We can’t even tell. Stomach shot - I’ll leave him stretched from a shell/
If it’s money on ya head...I’ll leave a RB nigga’s side lined for the cash...LeVeon Bell/

~RustyGunZ~
10-08-2018, 08:51 AM
Blue Bayous Verse

Jabari on his Idol
It’s probably no surprise, but my biggest influence is Rum Nitty. I was always a fan of punchers but when I first saw him, I’d never seen anyone drop back to back haymakers like him and I was amazed. It was literally set up, haymaker, Set up, haymaker back to back.


pipes & grips?! plzzz ur quite the bitch that's light w/ hits..
its sad really...for a guy that copies so much Rumble you REALLY can’t fight for shit
bullets left em a cripple. nerve damage once da shells hit em in the core..
now everytime Jabawakii's reminded of the time i left his 'Head Spinnin on the Floor'
a wannabe Pusha. don't believe this fake player heeds base ya'll..
if theres any ‘Rockies movin thru Chicago’ its only in reference to major league baseball
smoke this fiend. say farewell to all his hopes and dreams..
‘One-Push on the Metal’ & i'll have Black on Ice quicker than a Freestyle Coke Machine
ur wack w/ the writtens. i rap w/ precision so ur girl's snatch was a given..
she gave me a Handyman... while u were off makin $8an hour doin THAT for a livin
ur style's BORING. gun flip after flip has got me sawing logs..
but we can Pull Sticks...you’ll be Coming up Short like u suck at Drawing Straws
hitchu high with clip after clip until ur whole team is in a lull..
head shots – i'm ‘Splitting Hairs’ like my bullets had a Disagreement w/ ur skull
then i'll slit ur girls throat w/ a knife & start maiming her bitch tits..
leave her to Rot… ‘Ex's-stench'll’ be sooo bad it'll have you Contemplating Existence
my Hungers Growing. but u turn pussy when there's vultures round..
Tool to ur Stomach & i'll ‘expose a Little Bitch’ faster then Destroyer's wife's Ultrasound

Ryno
10-08-2018, 03:35 PM
Savage mind! I’ll hijack em...You either come out the car or I blast the 9/
When Black take the whip from a white boy...it ain’t a Cashius line/
2/3
Ya gun bars? I ain’t buyin it! Smith off the hip - bitch you dyin quick/
After I line the shit...It’ll be 15 spitting out the 40 like ya first time tryin it/
1/3
You in my PMs every time I vote against you. Now u crying to Vic? This nigga triflin/
You got ya whole style from Barcotic...hell, you even started bitching like him/
2/3
Every time you battle Cred, he bestin ya...so fuck it nigga - the Wesson tucked/
I’ll get retarded when I Take Em 2 School...38....you’ll see a Special Buss/
1/3
You think ya niggas gon’ back you? I’ll let the ‘matic pop at cowards/
You’ll see his niggas skate when I put the Auto on his squad like Rocket Power/
3/3
Im strapped with wild toys. You let ya niggas gas you - now the cal poised/
Ya chaps spurred you on....now the metal spinnin off the boot like a cowboy/
1/3
Old colt - the tool brittle. Switch guns and copped the new pistol/
Now the desi point...I’ll let a bird talk to a vet like Dr. Dolittle/
1/3
I know bout the blue. I didn’t bang, but my whole block was crippin...slumpin cats/
My niggas moved around the block for the 6 point like running backs/
3/3
Is it NCs or RB? We can’t even tell. Stomach shot - I’ll leave him stretched from a shell/
If it’s money on ya head...I’ll leave a RB nigga’s side lined for the cash...LeVeon Bell/
3/3
17/27
Blue Bayous Verse




pipes & grips?! plzzz ur quite the bitch that's light w/ hits..
its sad really...for a guy that copies so much Rumble you REALLY can’t fight for shit
2/3
bullets left em a cripple. nerve damage once da shells hit em in the core..
now everytime Jabawakii's reminded of the time i left his 'Head Spinnin on the Floor'
3/3
a wannabe Pusha. don't believe this fake player heeds base ya'll..
if theres any ‘Rockies movin thru Chicago’ its only in reference to major league baseball
2/3
smoke this fiend. say farewell to all his hopes and dreams..
‘One-Push on the Metal’ & i'll have Black on Ice quicker than a Freestyle Coke Machine
1/3
ur wack w/ the writtens. i rap w/ precision so ur girl's snatch was a given..
she gave me a Handyman... while u were off makin $8an hour doin THAT for a livin
1/3
ur style's BORING. gun flip after flip has got me sawing logs..
but we can Pull Sticks...you’ll be Coming up Short like u suck at Drawing Straws
2/3
hitchu high with clip after clip until ur whole team is in a lull..
head shots – i'm ‘Splitting Hairs’ like my bullets had a Disagreement w/ ur skull
2/3
then i'll slit ur girls throat w/ a knife & start maiming her bitch tits..
leave her to Rot… ‘Ex's-stench'll’ be sooo bad it'll have you Contemplating Existence
2/3
my Hungers Growing. but u turn pussy when there's vultures round..
Tool to ur Stomach & i'll ‘expose a Little Bitch’ faster then Destroyer's wife's Ultrasound
2/3
17/27

v. blue bayou...tie as far as the bars i like but i think JB misses were way worse then blues imo

Meth
10-08-2018, 10:14 PM
Blue Bayous Verse




pipes & grips?! plzzz ur quite the bitch that's light w/ hits..
its sad really...for a guy that copies so much Rumble you REALLY can’t fight for shit
Nice
bullets left em a cripple. nerve damage once da shells hit em in the core..
now everytime Jabawakii's reminded of the time i left his 'Head Spinnin on the Floor'
Fire
a wannabe Pusha. don't believe this fake player heeds base ya'll..
if theres any ‘Rockies movin thru Chicago’ its only in reference to major league baseball
Dig it
smoke this fiend. say farewell to all his hopes and dreams..
‘One-Push on the Metal’ & i'll have Black on Ice quicker than a Freestyle Coke Machine
Ok nice
ur wack w/ the writtens. i rap w/ precision so ur girl's snatch was a given..
she gave me a Handyman... while u were off makin $8an hour doin THAT for a livin
Eh ok. Usually not a fan of punches that directly refer to the play. 'That' plus ive seen the wp. Wording was crisp tho
ur style's BORING. gun flip after flip has got me sawing logs..
but we can Pull Sticks...you’ll be Coming up Short like u suck at Drawing Straws
Ok
hitchu high with clip after clip until ur whole team is in a lull..
head shots – i'm ‘Splitting Hairs’ like my bullets had a Disagreement w/ ur skull
Got em
then i'll slit ur girls throat w/ a knife & start maiming her bitch tits..
leave her to Rot… ‘Ex's-stench'll’ be sooo bad it'll have you Contemplating Existence
Fuck man nice wp. U always know when and when not to break up ur wp to make sure no one misses it.
my Hungers Growing. but u turn pussy when there's vultures round..
Tool to ur Stomach & i'll ‘expose a Little Bitch’ faster then Destroyer's wife's Ultrasound
Eh nahh

Savage mind! I’ll hijack em...You either come out the car or I blast the 9/
When Black take the whip from a white boy...it ain’t a Cashius line/
Ok cool
Ya gun bars? I ain’t buyin it! Smith off the hip - bitch you dyin quick/
After I line the shit...It’ll be 15 spitting out the 40 like ya first time tryin it/
Fire
You in my PMs every time I vote against you. Now u crying to Vic? This nigga triflin/
You got ya whole style from Barcotic...hell, you even started bitching like him/
Nah could have done more w that imo
Every time you battle Cred, he bestin ya...so fuck it nigga - the Wesson tucked/
I’ll get retarded when I Take Em 2 School...38....you’ll see a Special Buss
Got em/
You think ya niggas gon’ back you? I’ll let the ‘matic pop at cowards/
You’ll see his niggas skate when I put the Auto on his squad like Rocket Power/
Fuck yeah
Im strapped with wild toys. You let ya niggas gas you - now the cal poised/
Ya chaps spurred you on....now the metal spinnin off the boot like a cowboy/
Yup
Old colt - the tool brittle. Switch guns and copped the new pistol/
Now the desi point...I’ll let a bird talk to a vet like Dr. Dolittle/
Eh, not feelin this one as much
I know bout the blue. I didn’t bang, but my whole block was crippin...slumpin cats/
My niggas moved around the block for the 6 point like running backs/
Nice
Is it NCs or RB? We can’t even tell. Stomach shot - I’ll leave him stretched from a shell/
If it’s money on ya head...I’ll leave a RB nigga’s side lined for the cash...LeVeon Bell/
2 rb lines to finish the verse is kind of weird lol. Shoulda seperated imo. This is ok

Got blue by a quote this a fire battle man. I thought there was no way jb had a chance after i read blues verse but he came with heat. Didnt know won on first read had to read again and count quotes. Good shit. Either could take it.

Blue

John Dillinger
10-11-2018, 09:48 AM
Savage mind! I’ll hijack em...You either come out the car or I blast the 9/
When Black take the whip from a white boy...it ain’t a Cashius line/
Tight
Ya gun bars? I ain’t buyin it! Smith off the hip - bitch you dyin quick/
After I line the shit...It’ll be 15 spitting out the 40 like ya first time tryin it/
Tight again
You in my PMs every time I vote against you. Now u crying to Vic? This nigga triflin/
You got ya whole style from Barcotic...hell, you even started bitching like him/
Not as strong but still a nice bar
Every time you battle Cred, he bestin ya...so fuck it nigga - the Wesson tucked/
I’ll get retarded when I Take Em 2 School...38....you’ll see a Special Buss/
Fire
You think ya niggas gon’ back you? I’ll let the ‘matic pop at cowards/
You’ll see his niggas skate when I put the Auto on his squad like Rocket Power/
Fire
Im strapped with wild toys. You let ya niggas gas you - now the cal poised/
Ya chaps spurred you on....now the metal spinnin off the boot like a cowboy/
Tight
Old colt - the tool brittle. Switch guns and copped the new pistol/
Now the desi point...I’ll let a bird talk to a vet like Dr. Dolittle/
Cool not as strong but I liked it
I know bout the blue. I didn’t bang, but my whole block was crippin...slumpin cats/
My niggas moved around the block for the 6 point like running backs/
Coulda done more w/ it imo. Came off as more self hype to me
Is it NCs or RB? We can’t even tell. Stomach shot - I’ll leave him stretched from a shell/
If it’s money on ya head...I’ll leave a RB nigga’s side lined for the cash...LeVeon Bell/
Cool



pipes & grips?! plzzz ur quite the bitch that's light w/ hits..
its sad really...for a guy that copies so much Rumble you REALLY can’t fight for shit
Tight
bullets left em a cripple. nerve damage once da shells hit em in the core..
now everytime Jabawakii's reminded of the time i left his 'Head Spinnin on the Floor'
Tiiight
a wannabe Pusha. don't believe this fake player heeds base ya'll..
if theres any ‘Rockies movin thru Chicago’ its only in reference to major league baseball
I like it but not the baseball/base yall rhyme.
I still dug this though.
Coulda been better w/ a better ending to the setup
smoke this fiend. say farewell to all his hopes and dreams..
‘One-Push on the Metal’ & i'll have Black on Ice quicker than a Freestyle Coke Machine
Dope
ur wack w/ the writtens. i rap w/ precision so ur girl's snatch was a given..
she gave me a Handyman... while u were off makin $8an hour doin THAT for a livin
Lol dope
ur style's BORING. gun flip after flip has got me sawing logs..
but we can Pull Sticks...you’ll be Coming up Short like u suck at Drawing Straws
Tight
hitchu high with clip after clip until ur whole team is in a lull..
head shots – i'm ‘Splitting Hairs’ like my bullets had a Disagreement w/ ur skull
Not digging it as much
then i'll slit ur girls throat w/ a knife & start maiming her bitch tits..
leave her to Rot… ‘Ex's-stench'll’ be sooo bad it'll have you Contemplating Existence
this is dope
my Hungers Growing. but u turn pussy when there's vultures round..
Tool to ur Stomach & i'll ‘expose a Little Bitch’ faster then Destroyer's wife's Ultrasound
Not bad but coulda closed it sronger imo

Had both missing a couple times but I think Bayou came a lil more diverse and creative, and of punches that landed he had the better hits.

Jabari didn't come bad but I think Blue had a more consistent drop

Saint
10-18-2018, 06:59 AM
Cool battle, after a leave glad to see activity still..
Although I had an existential w/p & kicking myself for not using it.

Some good punches, solid jabs on both sides & a cpl misses. Don't have to count my vote since I been gone a minute but I have blue, edged it a few more in each area...wording helped and variety in attks...liked rumble & jabawocki was fire an existential was fresh....jb had 15/40, rocket, boot.. close kindve

V blue