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Inno
10-01-2018, 08:39 PM
NWL:Season I: Week III



Verses ares due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30

Voting on 2 battles is required.


TOPIC:

THIS WEEK IS HAIKU GUNBAR WEEK PRETTY SELF EXPLANATORY. FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO DONT KNOW WHAT A HAIKU IS. ITS A JAPANESE FORM OF POETRY CONSISTING OF 17 TOTAL SYLLABLES.FIRST LINE IS 5, SECOND LINE IS 7 AND LAST LINE IS 5. SINCE ITS ONLY 3 LINES, THIS WEEK YOU HAVE WRITE 3 SEPARATE GUNBAR HAIKUS, SO A TOTAL OF 9 LINES. PRETTY EASY. VOTING WILL BE EXPLAINED IN THE MAG.

GOODLUCK.


@knuclehead Sharp

Sharp
10-01-2018, 09:22 PM
here we go

Sharp
10-03-2018, 09:20 PM
Killer. Unfeeling,
cold as ice. Ironic, the
heater fires often.

Aiming at your squad.
Rounds, like repressed memories,
embedded in minds.

Chrome remove any
trace of your existence. That's
Incognito mode.

~RustyGunZ~
10-07-2018, 07:16 PM
Bullets dance about
Spin midair, Ballerinas
Those heatseeking rounds

Best armor up kid
And you betta check ya brakes
Metal on metal

Headshot with the snub
Put noodles outside mugs
And this ain’t craft day

Adonis
10-08-2018, 01:57 AM
Sharp: First haiku ends in 6 syl. to me.

just cause you put a coma, in the
middle of a sentence don't make
it haiku. What's unfeeling?





Knock: First 'ku is the best of this battle.

Craft day was a shitty rhyme other than a few nice cuplets.


Honestly....I had hoped you guys strung the 3 haiku's into 6 bars or so and punch with some swag and flow type shit....aint that why you signed in here? With that said, Knuck had the better 3

v/Khead

Inno
10-08-2018, 08:02 PM
Thought knucks first ku was his best one. Thought sharps second ku was his best. Out of the 2 I got Knuck edging it out with a bit more smoothness. Feel like knucks was more comfortable with the topic and it kind of showed. Thanks for showing up fellas

Knuck wins