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For Battling
11-12-2018, 07:27 AM
Tournament Rules

1. YOU MUST VOTE ON ALL BATTLES INCLUDING YOUR OWN!!!

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3. Minimum line limit is 10 / Maximum is 16

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5. Battles will be set on Sunday night or Monday morning. Verses will be due by Friday night. Voting will end on Sunday.

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- NO SWAYING


Wolverine

https://i.imgur.com/pQSP6p3.jpg


Cyclops

https://i.imgur.com/vSB9FRT.jpg

For Battling
11-12-2018, 08:44 AM
CYCLOPS HAS CHECKED IN

For Battling
11-13-2018, 07:26 AM
WOLVERINE HAS CHECKED IN

For Battling
11-16-2018, 10:28 PM
WOLVERINE HAS SENT 14

For Battling
11-17-2018, 09:02 PM
Wolverine’s Verse:


You look like a fucking scuba-diver…
With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits.
Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance,
Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand.
So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes,
Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses.
Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge,
Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends.
So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight?
Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night!
That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics,
Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status.
So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams
Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team.

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11-17-2018, 09:03 PM
Cyclops’ Verse:


Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run
X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker
Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart
Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body
Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film
You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?
Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team

For Battling
11-18-2018, 08:47 AM
You look like a fucking scuba-diver…
With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits.
nah not feelin
Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance,
Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand.
dope concept but executed a bit weird. Overall pretty cool
So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes,
Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses.
what? Lol nah
Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge,
Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends.
alright
So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight?
Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night!
nah
That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics,
Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status.
ha, slick. Good shit
So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams
Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team.
flight from a chair/prof x had crazy potential for something dope but you finished it mildly

2 good
1 ok
1 Decent
3 misses


Vs



Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run
hmm not feelin
X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker
alright, good usage
Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart
nice all around
Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body
ha alright
Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film
i mean yeah but where’s the punch? Dissing him for not having enough bald headed people in his car? Lol or are you referring to a desert eagle. Pretty indirect if you are
You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?
ha, cool
Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team
not bad

3 good
2 ok
2 misses


Good battle here. Wolverine had a pretty good verse, had some strong and weak parts to it but overall it was a decent enough showing. Cyclops made much more use of his gimmick I believe, including a lot of actual references to his opponents character. I’m not grading solely based on that, you can’t jyst type up a bunch of marvel citation statements and expect them to have impact lol. But nah Cyclops did good here and takes the battle by a decent margin.


Vote Cyclops

Ryno
11-18-2018, 09:02 PM
Wolverine’s Verse:


You look like a fucking scuba-diver…
With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits.
1/3
Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance,
Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand.
2/3
So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes,
Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses.
1/3
Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge,
Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends.
2/3
So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight?
Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night!
1/3
That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics,
Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status.
1/3
So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams
Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team.
1/3

9/21

Cyclops’ Verse:


Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run
2/3
X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker
2/3
Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart
3/3
Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body
1/3
Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film
1/3
You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?
2/3
Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team
1/3
12/21

v. Cyclops...more consistent

Qualm
11-18-2018, 10:50 PM
With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits.

kinda funny

Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance,
Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand.

solid, even though greys anatomy bars in general just feel cliche to me

So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes,
Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses.

I like the concept, not sure it was as effective as it couldve been with the execution

Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge,
Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends.

Nah

So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight?
Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night!

Kinda funny but not really hitting

That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics,
Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status.

ok

So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams
Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team.

kinda funny, ok closer.

Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run

eh

X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker

this is cool

Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart

this felt kinda corny tbh, almost made me cringe

Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body

this was ok

Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film

nah


You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?

nah

Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team

ok closer


idk I'm probably gonna go against the grain on this but I felt like wolverine's verse was better. plus 'you look like a fucking scuba diver' was probably lotb

mvgt - wolverine

bleak
11-19-2018, 02:07 AM
Wolverine’s Verse:

With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits.
No
Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance,
Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand.
Ight
So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes,
Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses.
Simple
Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge,
Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends.
No
So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight?
Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night!
Oh ok
That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics,
Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status.
Incisor status eh
So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams
Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team.
Ok

Cyclops’ Verse:


Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run
Hey my name is in this cool
X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker
Like the rhyme
Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart
Ok
Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body
Statement
Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film
He got a bald head I see you
You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?
Wolverine a savage tho
Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team
What is a cyke eval

Cyclops had some cool stuff and better structure I guess neither was harsh but that's hard in this shit I guess

Cyclops

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11-19-2018, 10:41 AM
3-2 Cyclops

Needs more votes

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sral
11-19-2018, 03:10 PM
Wolverine’s Verse:


You look like a fucking scuba-diver…
With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits.

Okay, could have been harder though

Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance,
Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand.

Loved it, even down to the use of “bub” tbh

So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes,
Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses.

Nice

Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge,
Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends.

Okay, coulda been better though

So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight?
Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night!

straight

That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics,
Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status.

I fuck with it yo

So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams
Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team.

Decent, could have been better, seemed like you were struggling a little for concepts

sral
11-19-2018, 03:14 PM
Cyclops’ Verse:


Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run

okay

X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker

nice reference

Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart

dope shit bruh

Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body

just okay

Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film

ehhhh didn’t like this as much if I’m honest

You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?

nah

Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team

coo closer

This is close to be real, some real nice ish in both verses along with a few dry spots each

I actually have Wolverine winning here, just seemed to be more I liked to be real

Cyclops had some shit though, can see it going either way

For Battling
11-19-2018, 09:58 PM
Oh well

Cyclops Wins 3-2