Round 2: Black Lives Matter vs. KKK - BLM WINS

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Tournament Rules

1. YOU MUST VOTE ON ALL BATTLES INCLUDING YOUR OWN!!!

2. You will post your vote on your normal name, and explain your vote. Please let’s not be complete lazy bastards and drop dog shit votes, put some effort into that shit. When you vote on your own battle, try not to make it so obvious as to who you are - personally idc but it’s for your own benefit tbh.

3. Minimum line limit is 10 / Maximum is 16

4. ONLY ONE EXTENSION ALLOWED PER BATTLER! NO EXCEPTIONS! You will have ample amounts of time each week to post your verses, all battles will always be posted on time and on schedule, no excuses. So if you need an extension, PM a mod, don’t post in your thread.

5. Battles will be set on Sunday night or Monday morning. Verses will be due by Friday night. Voting will end on Sunday.

- NO BITING
- NO RECYCLING
- NO CHEATING
- NO SWAYING


Black Lives Matter:

http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r497/jeshkaspeaks/5E14BAF2-173F-4CA9-82E3-15A75DF04070_zpsd5epzajs.jpg


KKK:

http://i1168.photobucket.com/albums/r497/jeshkaspeaks/8F3ADD8B-6698-4DD8-A5FA-B4974F7A682F_zpst0rgfyi9.jpg

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BLM HAS CHECKED IN

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KKK HAS CHECKED IN

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BLM’s Verse:


You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose
Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell
Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail
Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst
Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse
I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious
I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians

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KKK’s Verse:


Black Lives Matter?

You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair
Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear
I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows
The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street
Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard
2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin.
Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot.

Since when?

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You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose
lmao dope
Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell
Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail
ahh nah you completely messed this one up
Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst
Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse
ok but loses points as a standard line
I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious
aright
I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians
lol ok


Vs


You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair
Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear
i think I get what you were going for with the whole jungle book concept but you didn’t do it well enough to make it clear
I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows
lol nice
The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street
nah
Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard
hmm this is OK. Wording was a bit weird
2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin.
Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot.
nah


BLM had a pretty good verse, some lines felt like they were more for a standard battle but there was only 1 clear miss imo. That opener was LOTB and gave you s good advantage. I definitely feel like you could have done more with dissing your gimmick but all in all it was a cool verse. KKK your verse was ok, you had some cool concepts but were often hurt by wording that didn’t quite get the punch across in the way it should have. I also feel you could’ve done more with dissing your gimmick. I’ve got BLM pretty comfortably here.


Vote BLM

[Flow]

Close battle. KKK only really miss for me is the uh oh bar. Closer leaned me. Opener I'm giving benefit of doubt. Rest got a lol.
BLM opener and last two bars were solid. Others fell flat for me.

It's close but more Lols with KKK so he edges it

Vote kkk

[Ryno]

BLM’s Verse:


You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose
Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell
Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail
Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst
Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse
---Opener was nice. Wasnt feeling 69. Marvel was eh.
I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious
I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians
---unconscious was eh, wording was clunky. I like the closer.

KKK’s Verse:


Black Lives Matter?

You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair
Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear
I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows
The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street
---Opener didnt hit. I fks w/ Metallica shows. Flacco bar was worded bad.
Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard
2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin.
Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot.
---Sunken place had potential but it missed. Closer was tight.

Since when?

v.kkk...this was close. Really could go either way as both had a few bars i fucked w/ but i think kkk executed alil cleaner. Misses & all.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...



You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose
I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious
I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians

I felt that this was a consistent verse. Opener was line of the battle in my opinion.


I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows
The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street
Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard

Your wording is somewhat weird to me. I get what youre saying but the wording took the sting out a lot of your punches.

Vote- BLM, just more polished...

Bye...

[bleak]

The brackets around KKK's verse is stupid imo but the verse itself I like. Really liked Fade to Black and the branch shit, I guess you are referencing the monkey kingdom in the Jungle Book shit? If so I fuck with it, I remember the scene where they carry him around. A Way Out has been done a million times, not terrible.

BLM had some good stuff here, really liked the opener. 69 is current i suppose, idk much about the shit but you get one google its 2018. I feel like the last half kinda dropped off, although the closer was decent. Marvel was a throwaway in a 10 line battle imo might be the difference here

KKK

[Diablo]

You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose

lol kinda cool, kinda predictable though

Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell
Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail

nah far too simple for me

Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst
Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse

missed for me tbh

I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious

yeah I liked this one a lot conceptually

I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians

lol nice idea again, definitely picked up towards the later end of your verse


vs


You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair
Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear

just okay

I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows

kinda okay, kinda feels like an older idea revamped/twisted to make it applicable lol

The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street

straight

Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard

okay

2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin.
Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot.

just okay, felt a bit flat tbreal


I'm kinda tied on this one, Flacco line didn't do much for me, I enjoyed the Metal;lica line but it felt kinda.. done already? I know that's odd sounding but it just feels like a stale idea given a revamped twist to make it applicable to me. I dunno. Well hung was okay, woke nigga was nice, closer was nice. More of that please.

I've got Black Lives Matter here

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Needs more votes please
Jit Destroyer Ghost1 uh-oh dull boy Infiltrate Qualm Victor.

[dull boy]

I read them.

V - BLM

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Literally need 1 vote to decide this battle


Crazy

[Kill Spree]

Noise was dope rest of BLM’s verse I didn’t like much tbh. That 69 shit was wack but the chimp bar was decent just worded bad.


KKK I thought was more consistent and had better hits. Got fit 6 niggas and your closer was dope

V/kkk

[John Dillinger]

BLM’s Verse:


You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose
Cool
Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell
Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail
Cool
Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst
Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse
Nah
I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious
Cool
I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians
Tight

KKK’s Verse:


Black Lives Matter?

You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair
Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear
Ok
I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows
Cool
The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street
Eh
Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard
Ok
2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin.
Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot.
Cool
Since when?

I got BLM here. Feeling theirs a bit more

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Lol now I need one more

Aero please, it’s on you.

[Ghost1]

KKK’s Verse:


Black Lives Matter?

You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair
Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear

pimp flair stupid forced to rhyme the scheme. I get the reference to king louie but hows this a diss to blm aside from referring to them as monkeys ....seems like ur criticizing them for not agreeing with our worthless capitalist system ... by admitting that its worthless....?

I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows

dece

The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street

end rhyme left me underwhelmed....concept was light

Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard

nice here

2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin.
Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot.

drawn an quartered....jesus man this some ancient ass racism....too obscure....especially when all u have to do is walk around the block for 5 min to find something modern u could have flipped.....drawn an quartered who tf is the alias on this account...14th century king of England? lol

prolly lars looool

Since when?

BLM’s Verse:


You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose

eh simple...okish

Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell
Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail

eh

Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst
Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse

lol is this actually karaoke? ill be gone

I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious

fire

I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians

not bad



sunken place and metallica vs staywoke and kardashians

tough call cuz i like kardashians the least of the quotes but I also liked staywoke the most of the quotes.........so with that in mind looking at the rest of the verses id probably lean to blm with less misses. coin flip here.

v blm

[sral]

6-3 BLM

let’s close it up and get next round underway

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BLM Wins