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God Of War
08-28-2013, 04:19 PM
text is mine now, murder everything in the ring before i climb down
the audience, the lobbyists, all you see is bodies when u sign out
ima remind clowns, when respect is done, necks get strung
im wreckless, my breakfast, is a fucking peasants lung
let aero brag about banks, till his bodies found floating next ta one
dont know what you expected son, tired of the laugh shit
this aint for show faggot, n i dont fuck wit that sho faggot
just cuz he fucked 2 dudes, it dont make this hoe savage
my flows lavish, the thrones had it, ima expose whackness
a bunch of pussies pretending to be dicks, we got our own catfish
no theatrics, we culd go bags less,i bet jail'd trip ya out
when the only bars u ever been behind, is the ones in nika's mouth
you know what this about, no insane twists, or lame spits
just a straight diss, that'll get you scalped where ur brain sits
metts is the new mario brothers, stuck in the past where there game is
joes gotta be luigi, since his green ass is envious of eryone whose made it
im tha greatest, cats get flatlined, u dudes is past prime
n tyson aint raping no one, its to fucking late for juice n nap time
never drop a whack rhyme, when i turn the net on its over
i aint trying to win,im trying to rip the fucking head off your shoulders


haahhaha


its bars over bullshit, im trying to rip the heart out you cool kids
acting like a SNITCH, makes it easy to disregard what u fools did
time for school bitch, to rip out ur spine is my mission
i just finished watching bleach, n striks got that shit on ice in his kitchen
fuck the nicest intentions, i want to see all you whores dead
if u are top ten, we are not friends, all i see is a fucking bullseye on ur forhead
u aint seen the mind of war yet, ima correct how these faggots act
you claim loyalty, then turn out more crooked the patricks back
lace this whole track with facts, this is not hype
allen knights just mad, cuz the leafblower came from his jobs site
i let bombs fly, lines clean, u cant follow my scheme
rawn'll stalk n rape a bitch, then run forensics on his own crime scene
dont fuck wit my team, pancake'll get ur throat dawg
this shit went from competition, to handshakes and blowjobs
beef? no mas, these cats is always scared n quittin
champions dont stop, at the top, they maintain n hold there positions
but u dudes is to arrogant to listen,all thats lost is respect
so fuck it, while u clown in discussions, i got the pen takin shots at ur neck

Boredom
08-28-2013, 04:34 PM
time for school bitch, to rip out ur spine is my mission
i just finished watching bleach, n striks got that shit on ice in his kitchen

wooooooooo

shit was fia God Of War

God Of War
08-28-2013, 04:50 PM
ty sir

Wise Wiggles
08-28-2013, 07:12 PM
Nice to see a drop from you bro.

Don't know if this was srs or on that lamar tip but it had its moments and flow was cool too can't front was expecting some misplaced letters but you seem to have kicked that habit since you been changing the up-the-back-blow-outs.. Maybe a little humbling ? Good jobs !

Mike Wrecka
08-28-2013, 08:10 PM
this was dope GOW.

ima remind clowns, when respect is done, necks get strung
im wreckless, my breakfast, is a fucking peasants lung

nice

i let bombs fly, lines clean, u cant follow my scheme
rawn'll stalk n rape a bitch, then run forensics on his own crime scene

this was lulz

nice piece , good flow throughout. good multis.

shameless plug time. join the WCL .

Geno
08-28-2013, 08:43 PM
this was fucking grimey. ill ass diss piece gow. fucking inspirational to say the least. CONTROL text like shit

Neighbor
08-28-2013, 10:58 PM
Rawn line went hard as fuck lmao

CopyPat
08-29-2013, 01:14 AM
well done g.o.dub. flow was smooth throughout "flows lavish" -nice word. good punches. some pretty good wordplays. this was solid no doubt, coulda used a tad more vocab/intri***y in scheming if we're getting picky but i have no complaints here, good drop

God Of War
08-29-2013, 08:34 AM
Precise it eryone ima get to peeping some shit in the on today and leaving feed

YDK
08-29-2013, 01:18 PM
Damn bruh good ta see ya droppin haymakers still lol too many bars ta quote tbh but the flow was clean. This pretty much exactly wat a real diss verse is supposed ta be. Good shit my dude

Mr. J
08-29-2013, 02:44 PM
This was nice I enjoyed the flow the multis werr strung along nicelu
Good work all around I would quote but I'm on my phone
a lot of great lines though keep writing

Allen Knight
08-29-2013, 07:49 PM
This was dope, lmaoo at the rawn line

Brian Bryan
08-30-2013, 04:17 AM
fuck the nicest intentions, i want to see all you whores dead
if u are top ten, we are not friends, all i see is a fucking bullseye on ur forhead

yup