View Full Version : Allen Knight vs BodySnatcher - BODY WINS
bleak
01-28-2019, 04:20 AM
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BodySnatcher
01-28-2019, 11:00 AM
Air MAX 95's
Allen Knight
01-28-2019, 12:49 PM
In goin 12.
Allen Knight
01-31-2019, 10:19 PM
Need ext wont be able to drop tilll morning.
BodySnatcher
01-31-2019, 10:24 PM
Word. I'll be dropping then too.
Allen Knight
02-02-2019, 12:25 AM
u ever being ranked #1's a JOKE..
get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title
ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em
u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck
stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face
tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out
ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz
BodySnatcher
02-02-2019, 12:54 AM
Nobody's laughing.
DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb
Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on
N if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo
The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out
For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay
I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’
Aight. Body...
Dogs at his temple is solid.
Hazards on ok
Sorry don't get reference on that one
This was light but creative
Kay slay ok
Closer is dope
Phones dying. I'll do aks break down when home.
But on off chance I don't get back in time.
I'm voting ak
Sinacog
02-02-2019, 05:02 AM
Allen Knight -
get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title
This was cool..needed a wordplay to put it over the top..but as it is? It was okay..niice..
ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em
This was pretty cool..nice incorporated wordplay..was fine and nice..coool bar..
u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck
This was nice and smooth..this is what you aim for..pun intended..niice one..
stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face
This is your best bar so far imo..good smooth wordplay..with good wording..nice
tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out
This could've been smoother..but this was cool and decent..assured
ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz
Cool..clean bar..very good here..niice one..good for a closer..
Bodysnatcher -
DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb
Pretty dope bar..enjoyed it..was good..good rhymes here..
Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on
Nice one here..I could dig this..cool bar..
N if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo
Cool rhymes..punch was decent..I've seen pacer wordplays before..but this was okay..
The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out
This was probably your weakest bar..could be better in ways..but it was decent
For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay
This was cool and okay..I could dig this..
I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’
Really nice one here..I dug this a lot..good bar here..
Overall - to me this was a good battle..both had good punches..Allen Knight's Selfie stick line and closer were cool..Bodysnatcher's Egyptian line and cross country line were also good..nice battle here..but I have to go with Bodysnatcher..he had the better lines here and there..niice..
V/ Bodysnatcher
Zaddy
02-02-2019, 08:15 AM
get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title
decent here
ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em
decent again here, this one more of a played concept
u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck
nah
stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face
cmon you know selfie stick is played man, decent at best
tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out
alright not bad
ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz
lol dope
Vs
DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb
shhhh fire
Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on
damn, good again
N if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo
nice
The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out
bit played but still a decent flip
For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay
ok ok
I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’
i like the idea but it fell flat for me
Bit surprised here, felt like Allen was gonna bring the business like last week but idk I felt like most of his verse was rushed. On the other hand, Body care with some dope shit, had 3 haymakers back to back. I’ve got BodySnatcher taking this pretty smoothly.
Vote BodySnatcher
DynamiCz
02-02-2019, 11:42 AM
get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title
Nice opener here!
ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em
This was fiya here!
u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck
Ehh, this was coo, the execution alittle light, but its still coo
stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face
Lol funny jab here imo! Think the self stick part could have been worded a little better but me personally I don't have no problem with this!
tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out
Nahhh, wasn't feeling this one
ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz
Fiya closer!
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DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb
Fiya opener here!
Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on
Another nice hit again! Simple, but effective!
if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo
This was nice
The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out
Ehhh, not really feeling this one
For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay
This was nice!
I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’
Ehhh, this was ok for a closer
Nice matchup here from both ends, no complaints on either verse its just about who came out swinging the hardest this match. I got Body overall with the more crucial hits. Good shit to both tho!
V-Body
Saint
02-03-2019, 02:48 AM
[QUOTE=BodySnatcher;724782]Nobody's laughing.
DMS neva heard ‘gun’s bark’ but that won’t be fiction soon,
Cuz Allen’s gonna see these ‘dogs at his temple’ like an Egyptian tomb
-cool opener....seen temple lines but never seen this iirc
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Fuck Knight riders...my G’s will blast till this bastards gone,
There’ll be lights flashing on both sides of his whip like the hazards on
-i'd love to see this reworded....not bad
N if we takin shots...I could let this nigga hold a free throw,
But he’d still leave w/a ‘Pacer in his heart’ like fans prayin 4 Victor Oladipo
cool, no misses so far
The tool will leave ur brain damage...that’s how I cop clout,
I’ma leave u w/more ‘Oregon’s failing’ than Portland students that drop-out
i didnt care for the oregon play
For the record I aint w/ the ‘Drama’...I’ma let the K spray,
Then I’ma do a drive-by w/a ‘Streetsweeper’ AFTER I let the Kay Slay
same
I sense Hispanic...Ur over the hill & wall...but it’s fine dork,
Ur life’s a ‘running joke’...cuz to u ’cross-country’ is a ‘borderline sport’
hispanic is old, not feeling tie une
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get off'd w/ the uzi faggot cuz shells abusin u is vital
i ain't throwin Caltrops but this metal is stoppin u from cruisin to the title
- hmm felt it needed more here
ur the cornest poster & these hands homi victims
fuck Bodyboarding a hook'll send'em slidin across the floor like a tsunami hit'em
-ok....not the freshest bodyboarding. wording is good enough
u ain't squat pussy...run & i'll pop the mac at ya head
u'll neva see 'Snatch Lift' the iron he jus catches metal to the back of the neck
- two metal lines, i like the snatch lift but not so much the meta tie-in
stick lines? ur butt buddys JB & Dyn'll vote, they help this disgrace
S'like ur bars sent from a Selfie Stick cuz yah'll should shot urselfs in the face
- selfie stick nahh
tone it down faggot or the uzi sparyin, it's merkin doubts
wen u wash up on a Beachbody ur ripped up chest won't be from workin out
- think its a bit played. wording is good tho
ur slut was fuckin everyone raw quick , she was up in the halls sick
had that bitch on a train gettin stamped in the face like we headin to Auschwitz
- lol i fk within
pretty close, ak wording vs bs consistent solid jabs.
V body
Blue Bayou
02-03-2019, 08:45 AM
Will edit once I get to my laptop
bleak
02-03-2019, 10:54 AM
4-1 up closing tonight
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