Suthaveli vs Blue Bayou - BLUE WINS BY NS, OPEN FOR FEED

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SOL Season 1
Wk 2

Due Thursday, Jan 31st

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Suthaveli Blue Bayou

[Blue Bayou]

Going 40

[Suthaveli]

Yea, ard..

[Blue Bayou]

Cool glad we agree

[Blue Bayou]

Ready when you are

[bleak]

Suthaveli 16 in my inbox

[Suthaveli]

100.
I wasn't even going to show.
Let me get the extendo.

[Blue Bayou]

no show swag, feed the beast



my heart is mean truly. this beamed uzi will rip til you bleed oozing
aim for ur heart & ‘Dump on ya Chest’. it’s that Not Another Teen Movie
ur broke as fuck man, while i'm rich from all the merch i sell
looks like you got the wrong end of the stick... i bet that gun butt hurt like hell
my eyes are sore & inflamed, i see ur writing & i’m sort of ashamed
fuck Fumbling over ur words. its like u broke ur arm & the other team scored on the play
these hooks’ll destroy you. head shots no kidney’s bitch
we’ll see more Soft Tissue coming off ur face then Zelph watchin Disney flicks (pussy)
never done dope in ya life, that’s not why i use this lingo fag
the term Basehead still applies. ur girl gets to that part of ur cock w/out a single gag
you got a 3’’ penis, & still u wonder why i bone ya dime?!
she gives you Headbored. i give'er concussions banging her dome from mine
there’s a beam on the shotty. bolt-action, it’s green & it’s gotti
fuck encouragement – if i'm sayin ‘that's the spirit’ ya soul's finally leavin ur body
he’s no gangsta, he sells out when he speaks to coppa's
pressure on he gets Shook. this ‘Rattle Break’ faster than a cheap maraca

[Zaddy]

my heart is mean truly. this beamed uzi will rip til you bleed oozing
aim for ur heart & ‘Dump on ya Chest’. it’s that Not Another Teen Movie
lol, first line iffy but I like the concept..good here...pretty cool bar lol decent
ur broke as fuck man, while i'm rich from all the merch i sell
looks like you got the wrong end of the stick... i bet that gun butt hurt like hell
a fresh and surprising take on a gun/stick bar. I liked it, good shit
my eyes are sore & inflamed, i see ur writing & i’m sort of ashamed
fuck Fumbling over ur words. its like u broke ur arm & the other team scored on the play
thats played
these hooks’ll destroy you. head shots no kidney’s bitch
we’ll see more Soft Tissue coming off ur face then Zelph watchin Disney flicks (pussy)
bitch. Bar sucked thx
never done dope in ya life, that’s not why i use this lingo fag
the term Basehead still applies. ur girl gets to that part of ur cock w/out a single gag
lol’d, good humor I like it
you got a 3’’ penis, & still u wonder why i bone ya dime?!
she gives you Headbored. i give'er concussions banging her dome from mine
had to sit and think about this for a few mins. Cool bar
there’s a beam on the shotty. bolt-action, it’s green & it’s gotti
fuck encouragement – if i'm sayin ‘that's the spirit’ ya soul's finally leavin ur body
dope
he’s no gangsta, he sells out when he speaks to coppa's
pressure on he gets Shook. this ‘Rattle Break’ faster than a cheap maraca
foh w this


Overall cool verse and I hate when people no show you, you deserve better than that. I’m gonna find the guy who did this to you and make him pay, Mark my words. Some refreshing stuff in here and a good dose of humor, that’s the spirit bar was nice af. Eat a dick bitch fuck u

[Flow]

Headboard was cool but think you could of polished it s bit better. That's the spirit was top notch. Barehead was solid. Zelph line was a miss for me. The sports reference was over my head (I'm guessing it's a American football thing) gun butt was at least a new angle on a played concept. Wasn't keen mind. Opener was my fav. Well worded and fresh idea.

Overall solid showing Blue. Two misses, one of which is my lack of knowledge, the other tbh is just because I've spent my own recent time insulting the poor dude for similar angles so lost its edge. Oh did I mention the closer. That was a clever idea. I didn't like the end rhyme but presume it works with your accent. But yeah that was dope.


Nice shit man

[DynamiCz]

my heart is mean truly. this beamed uzi will rip til you bleed oozing
aim for ur heart & ‘Dump on ya Chest’. it’s that Not Another Teen Movie

Fiya opener here!

ur broke as fuck man, while i'm rich from all the merch i sell
looks like you got the wrong end of the stick... i bet that gun butt hurt like hell

Dope again here! Fiya!

my eyes are sore & inflamed, i see ur writing & i’m sort of ashamed
fuck Fumbling over ur words. its like u broke ur arm & the other team scored on the play

This is ok here! Light effective

these hooks’ll destroy you. head shots no kidney’s bitch
we’ll see more Soft Tissue coming off ur face then Zelph watchin Disney flicks (pussy)

Lmao funny, then he added pussy @ the end!!! Lmaooo dead

never done dope in ya life, that’s not why i use this lingo fag
the term Basehead still applies. ur girl gets to that part of ur cock w/out a single gag

Humor hit here! Lol nice

you got a 3’’ penis, & still u wonder why i bone ya dime?!
she gives you Headbored. i give'er concussions banging her dome from mine

Ehh, cant really get with this one

there’s a beam on the shotty. bolt-action, it’s green & it’s gotti
fuck encouragement – if i'm sayin ‘that's the spirit’ ya soul's finally leavin ur body

Again Fiya to me here!

he’s no gangsta, he sells out when he speaks to coppa's
pressure on he gets Shook. this ‘Rattle Break’ faster than a cheap maraca

Light ender! Lol now Blue you know you better then this shit


Woo overall dope verse Blue, wish Suth would have made the deadline, this would have been a dope ass matchup here! Good shit tho Blue!

[Aero]

Everything was good that’s the spirit Lololololol