I got jerked vs Cred [Archive]

Sharp

01-31-2019, 10:12 PM

I reverse the Tide, don’t talk pods I’m probably meaner
One spray and your insides pour out like laundry cleaners
I ‘produce’ with my ‘keypad’ a ‘mastery mix’, my ‘instrument’ll’ leave you without your guts.
So If this ‘pussy cat’ wanna ‘scratch fight’ its death by 1,000 cuts.
I could end this dudes life, none of these fags will miss you.
Off ‘em and ‘tell cred it karma’ like a financial issue.
He uses firearms to write his bars so much, this dawg’s become a weapon talking.
He got large toys? Thas all noise, and the only time I met a ‘gun barking.’
Lyrically kill him, when the ‘ill eagle hits’ land, I plainly beat ya.
You’ll get a ‘shot in your dome’ like a saints receiver.

~RustyGunZ~

01-31-2019, 10:15 PM

Fucking trash verse

DMS

01-31-2019, 10:16 PM

Fucking trash verse

Bet you couldn’t expo the lyrics js

SHECK WES

01-31-2019, 10:18 PM

Verse wasn’t trash

~RustyGunZ~

01-31-2019, 10:18 PM

Bet you couldn’t expo the lyrics js

My toddler could

~RustyGunZ~

01-31-2019, 10:18 PM

Verse wasn’t trash

What was good about it?

DMS

01-31-2019, 10:20 PM

My toddler could

I fucking dare you to break down my second bar

SHECK WES

01-31-2019, 10:21 PM

What was good about it?

Opener & closer.

Wasn’t done perfectly but you gotta give some credit

~RustyGunZ~

01-31-2019, 10:23 PM

Opener & closer.

Wasn’t done perfectly but you gotta give some credit

Opener was a good concept but we all know it was done like 25 times 2 years ago. Wasn’t worded well enough. The closer was not good. Literal dog shit.

SHECK WES

01-31-2019, 10:24 PM

Opener was a good concept but we all know it was done like 25 times 2 years ago. Wasn’t worded well enough. The closer was not good. Literal dog shit.

He’s 16 years old man give em a break

DMS

01-31-2019, 10:24 PM

Still don’t see my second bar being expo’d js

~RustyGunZ~

01-31-2019, 10:25 PM

I fucking dare you to break down my second bar

It’s a garbage bar where you tried way to hard to use a dozen connecting words to a central theme that ended in a punch with no sting. You just played word association and thought that gave it depth. It’s legit sad you think it’s intricate enough to go over anyone’s head. Your mom must’ve been drunker than your dad when you were cooking.

DMS

01-31-2019, 10:27 PM

It’s a garbage bar where you tried way to hard to use a dozen connecting words to a central theme that ended in a punch with no sting. You just played word association and thought that gave it depth. It’s legit sad you think it’s intricate enough to go over anyone’s head. Your mom must’ve been drunker than your dad when you were cooking.

You missed some things in this expo

~RustyGunZ~

01-31-2019, 10:29 PM

You missed some things in this expo

No I didn’t. It’s not deep. Scratch/producer/DJ is played. Cat Scratch/pussy isnplayed. Anything relating someone being a pussy to a cat is played actually. It’s a bunch of shit ideas mashed into a bad bar. Having levels to something doesn’t mean anything when no single layer stands out and the whole thing doesn’t work.

Saint

01-31-2019, 10:29 PM

fire verse you won w that laundry shit

SHECK WES

01-31-2019, 10:31 PM

There’s an urban legend type shit where you’ll automatically die on your 1000th cut

I know this because I’m DMS

Qualm

01-31-2019, 10:31 PM

tbh my aero/dynamicz wright brothers bar got slept on more, but im not aero ftr

~RustyGunZ~

01-31-2019, 10:31 PM

DUDE DO LIKE PRODUCERS MAKE MUSIC? WITH LIKE UH YO INSTRUMENTS? KEYPADS MAYBE OR DRUMS HMMM OR WAIT THEY MAKE MEUIC WOTH MUSIC LIKE THEY SCRATCH RECORDS TO LIKE KEYPAD SOME DRUM INTRUMENTS TO PRODUCE LIKE CUTS LIKE DH CUTS LIKE CUTS LIKE SCRATCHES LIKE RHCKING CATS DUDE CATS TEAV PUSSY THAT WORKS OH GEAH THAR WORKS

DMS

01-31-2019, 10:32 PM

No I didn’t. It’s not deep. Scratch/producer/DJ is played. Cat Scratch/pussy isnplayed. Anything relating someone being a pussy to a cat is played actually. It’s a bunch of shit ideas mashed into a bad bar. Having levels to something doesn’t mean anything when no single layer stands out and the whole thing doesn’t work.

First off, bet

Second off, bet

Thirdly, bet

DMS

01-31-2019, 10:33 PM

There’s an urban legend type shit where you’ll automatically die on your 1000th cut

I know this because I’m DMS

Death by 1,000 cuts is also a Chinese Hell

I believe you may see the connections

Plus the bar references the idiom in its structure

SHECK WES

01-31-2019, 10:39 PM

Yea

bleak

01-31-2019, 10:46 PM

What does a Chinese idiom have to do with a DJ? Are u connecting Chinese people with cats?

Geno

01-31-2019, 10:49 PM

Dooky

Sharp

01-31-2019, 11:16 PM

Opener was coo. Cred's circle the block bar was better. Keeping it 100, on that Chinese shit, I'm not a fan of that many quotes in a bar. One, maybe two, okay, but that many makes it clunky to me. On top of that, if you need your reader to understand a centuries old Chinese torture to be able to fully understand your bar, that's on you. Here's the idioms you're up against:

https://i.ibb.co/862T43W/Screenshot-2019-01-31-23-11-16.png

At least make it clear what I should Google by making that the emphasis. No one could quote the bar because it trips over itself before really landing

Diode

01-31-2019, 11:18 PM

Wording was Diode-esque

No thx

bleak

02-01-2019, 12:00 AM

http://www.netcees.org/forumdisplay.php?f=70

Not a troll, ur at the level where this will take you to the next

All the stickies

~RustyGunZ~

02-01-2019, 12:22 AM

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=6169

Good resource too

Destroyer

02-01-2019, 12:52 AM

Garbage verse and zelph should die as usual

El Muffin

02-01-2019, 10:58 PM

Cred it karma was pretty cool I guess

Even tho it's slightly forced

El Muffin

02-01-2019, 10:59 PM

I've seen way better dome/ saint lines

The rest of the verse aside from credit karma was booty tbh

Blue Bayou

02-01-2019, 11:02 PM

Cred's Kiki dancebar will forever ruin any arms swingin / body references for me

shit was dope & cant be topped

Dope girl

02-01-2019, 11:03 PM

Look, everyone has different cup of tea I respect that.

~RustyGunZ~

02-01-2019, 11:05 PM

Cred's Kiki dancebar will forever ruin any arms swingin / body references for me

shit was dope & cant be topped

What was it? Did one myself when that dropped but can't remember what verse

Blue Bayou

02-01-2019, 11:14 PM

What was it? Did one myself when that dropped but can't remember what verse

Cred

I cant remember the exact line cuz im fukked... but I remember writing "u'll get the picture, once ur heart opens up like a personal locket' line & thinking poty... then he dropped his and I was like fuck me

~RustyGunZ~

02-01-2019, 11:15 PM

word I found it, was against Bar in the 1-2 must be why i never saw it

Blue Bayou

02-01-2019, 11:27 PM

word I found it, was against Bar in the 1-2 must be why i never saw it

repost?

~RustyGunZ~

02-01-2019, 11:32 PM

Blue Bayou

02-01-2019, 11:38 PM

Got a drum n don’t need a band. Twin glocks won’t let this geek advance
Squeeze the cans. 2 arms put that heart outside ur chest like the Keke dance

such slick wording, I knew it as the shiggy challenge but did a heart out your chest flip, was struggling on how to word it and he nailed it

yeahh that's so dope

I remember Bar having a cool line as well, but not to that extent

quick 12? u were always good for a dope quick 6..

~RustyGunZ~

02-01-2019, 11:46 PM

yeahh that's so dope

I remember Bar having a cool line as well, but not to that extent

quick 12? u were always good for a dope quick 6..

i'm supposed to write for bar tonight lol

wanna do a match next week in SOL since our last one was a tie

Blue Bayou

02-01-2019, 11:50 PM

i'm supposed to write for bar tonight lol

wanna do a match next week in SOL since our last one was a tie

nah I got 2 late votes no?

anyways fair fair, I wanna see that tbh

~RustyGunZ~

02-02-2019, 12:08 AM

nah I got 2 late votes no?

anyways fair fair, I wanna see that tbh

I think flow one line hate voted 3 seconds after I called him a faggot and silver saw it and voted lmao

bout 2 months after it had been in the archives and called

Blue Bayou

02-02-2019, 12:10 AM

I think flow one line hate voted 3 seconds after I called him a faggot and silver saw it and voted lmao

bout 2 months after it had been in the archives and called

mightttt be true lol

didn't play that close of attention... next week is cool

I also want Resin tho for 30

~RustyGunZ~

02-02-2019, 12:11 AM

mightttt be true lol

didn't play that close of attention... next week is cool

I also want Resin tho for 30

we can do the week after if you wanna hit him up next week

in no rush lol