Cynic vs Flow - FLOW WINS

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 3

Due Thursday, Feb 7

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Max - 16 lines
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[Flow]

10 or 12

[Cynic]

12

[Cynic]

12..

he got jokes, but nice in a scrap? not even true, b
wen real punches fly, the comedian's gettin tossed like the Watchmen movie
ill snap on your whole fam. throw a punch n it's 'excuse me?'
C clap back, bear down, n put ya birds head in a backpack. Banjo Kazooie
i was off last week. now im coming back to end your shyt, bitch
didnt put my best foot forward. i planted it to roundhouse kick you out of fuckin existence
this my bars vs your bullshit. tryin is useless
faggot youre enough light work to employ an electricians union
diva pussy. you all talk, bitch. aint know about that raw shyt
bullets goin thru you is music to my ears. so when the K-Pop it's all hits
got my squad on ya. Move funny n they end your lame ass
my shooters Jimmy Neutron. Any smart ideas n you'll get your brainblast
Flow

[Flow]

Give it up kid, I've never seen someone who battles so bad
N I thought surely a cynic would be able to recognise when his own bars are trash
Old ass out of touch when your this shit n about to 'rust'
Its no wonder lol, i can C Y nic gets broken down so much
outta luck when I pull out my Glock quick, so fast the peice is never seen
Bitch all you'll see is the steel pop out from my fist like wolverine
n take me light in a fight an you'll find your life ending fast
He can act Rash, but he fadin away soon as i stick him with glass
I write to harm all, my skills the complete package your just a parcel
Cynical End game? Only if we mean hes got bodys missing from his arsenal
Sinful? Yeah on minimal concepts, shit my key topping your efforts any day
I just threw so many lines over your head you should be in the thread "who's hairline is it anyway


Think that's 12 Sharp open it up G

[veritas]

I liked cynics banjo kazooie line. But I liked flows wolverine bar even better. Close battle. Slight edge to flow

Mvgt flow.

[Ryno]

12..

he got jokes, but nice in a scrap? not even true, b
wen real punches fly, the comedian's gettin tossed like the Watchmen movie
OK
ill snap on your whole fam. throw a punch n it's 'excuse me?'
C clap back, bear down, n put ya birds head in a backpack. Banjo Kazooie
OK
i was off last week. now im coming back to end your shyt, bitch
didnt put my best foot forward. i planted it to roundhouse kick you out of fuckin existence
OK
this my bars vs your bullshit. tryin is useless
faggot youre enough light work to employ an electricians union
MISS
diva pussy. you all talk, bitch. aint know about that raw shyt
bullets goin thru you is music to my ears. so when the K-Pop it's all hits
OK
got my squad on ya. Move funny n they end your lame ass
my shooters Jimmy Neutron. Any smart ideas n you'll get your brainblast
MISS
Flow


Give it up kid, I've never seen someone who battles so bad
N I thought surely a cynic would be able to recognise when his own bars are trash
HIT
Old ass out of touch when your this shit n about to 'rust'
Its no wonder lol, i can C Y nic gets broken down so much
MISS
outta luck when I pull out my Glock quick, so fast the peice is never seen
Bitch all you'll see is the steel pop out from my fist like wolverine
MISS
n take me light in a fight an you'll find your life ending fast
He can act Rash, but he fadin away soon as i stick him with glass
MISS
I write to harm all, my skills the complete package your just a parcel
Cynical End game? Only if we mean hes got bodys missing from his arsenal
OK
Sinful? Yeah on minimal concepts, shit my key topping your efforts any day
I just threw so many lines over your head you should be in the thread "who's hairline is it anyway
OK


Think that's 12 Sharp open it up G

v. Cynic...i could be wrong but this felt like a rushed verse from Flow. I didnt enjoy the middle of his verse. Wolverine had potential, needed more tie ins but the others i just werent feeling. Better showing from Cynic.

[BodySnatcher]

he got jokes, but nice in a scrap? not even true, b
wen real punches fly, the comedian's gettin tossed like the Watchmen movie
this was dope only because I know what ur talking about
ill snap on your whole fam. throw a punch n it's 'excuse me?'
C clap back, bear down, n put ya birds head in a backpack. Banjo Kazooie
dope
i was off last week. now im coming back to end your shyt, bitch
didnt put my best foot forward. i planted it to roundhouse kick you out of fuckin existence
cool, worded odd
this my bars vs your bullshit. tryin is useless
faggot youre enough light work to employ an electricians union
light jab
diva pussy. you all talk, bitch. aint know about that raw shyt
bullets goin thru you is music to my ears. so when the K-Pop it's all hits
basicish, cool tho
got my squad on ya. Move funny n they end your lame ass
my shooters Jimmy Neutron. Any smart ideas n you'll get your brainblast
this is good but could've been so much better


Give it up kid, I've never seen someone who battles so bad
N I thought surely a cynic would be able to recognise when his own bars are trash
cool line, kinda light
Old ass out of touch when your this shit n about to 'rust'
Its no wonder lol, i can C Y nic gets broken down so much
ehh, ahhh, ok
outta luck when I pull out my Glock quick, so fast the peice is never seen
Bitch all you'll see is the steel pop out from my fist like wolverine
dope
n take me light in a fight an you'll find your life ending fast
He can act Rash, but he fadin away soon as i stick him with glass
huh?...i missed something, edit: aight looked it up and it fits but its still just st8
I write to harm all, my skills the complete package your just a parcel
Cynical End game? Only if we mean hes got bodys missing from his arsenal
bodys missing from his arsenal, soccer bar? maybe? idk
Sinful? Yeah on minimal concepts, shit my key topping your efforts any day
I just threw so many lines over your head you should be in the thread "who's hairline is it anyway
cool recent event type bar here, lines twice in ender was ehh tho

I definitely thought Flow was gonna take this but it seems he ran into someone's alias.
vote Cyn, good shit brodies.

[bleak]

Up over feed

[Zaddy]

he got jokes, but nice in a scrap? not even true, b
wen real punches fly, the comedian's gettin tossed like the Watchmen movie
meh
ill snap on your whole fam. throw a punch n it's 'excuse me?'
C clap back, bear down, n put ya birds head in a backpack. Banjo Kazooie
idk what this is and it’s all over the place
i was off last week. now im coming back to end your shyt, bitch
didnt put my best foot forward. i planted it to roundhouse kick you out of fuckin existence
nah, no punch
this my bars vs your bullshit. tryin is useless
faggot youre enough light work to employ an electricians union
decent
diva pussy. you all talk, bitch. aint know about that raw shyt
bullets goin thru you is music to my ears. so when the K-Pop it's all hits
played
got my squad on ya. Move funny n they end your lame ass
my shooters Jimmy Neutron. Any smart ideas n you'll get your brainblast
this was pretty cool but had potential for more, wording was off


Vs


Give it up kid, I've never seen someone who battles so bad
N I thought surely a cynic would be able to recognise when his own bars are trash
good
Old ass out of touch when your this shit n about to 'rust'
Its no wonder lol, i can C Y nic gets broken down so much
nah
outta luck when I pull out my Glock quick, so fast the peice is never seen
Bitch all you'll see is the steel pop out from my fist like wolverine
alright not bad
n take me light in a fight an you'll find your life ending fast
He can act Rash, but he fadin away soon as i stick him with glass
creative concept but with only decent impact
I write to harm all, my skills the complete package your just a parcel
Cynical End game? Only if we mean hes got bodys missing from his arsenal
dope
Sinful? Yeah on minimal concepts, shit my key topping your efforts any day
I just threw so many lines over your head you should be in the thread "who's hairline is it anyway
mmm kind of corny


I got flow here with better concepts and execution. Cynic either had played lines or poorly worded stuff

Vote Flow

[Resin M-I-C]

cynic - watchmen was ok.. kazooie line straight from Ill Will vs T-top, next 4 was aight.. flow- first 6 i liked then it fell off.. this was real close and can really go either way but i gotta give it to the one with more lines i fucked with

vote Flow

[Objective]

Cynical: Definitely enjoyed the Watchmen and Kazooie lines. Felt "fuckin Existence" didn't really work that well, kinda broke up the flow a bit, concept was cool tho. Funny shit with the electricians union and the K-pop hits line was dope. Never watched Jimmy Neutron or know what it is other than remembering the intro so it might have went over my head, I understand what you're getting at tho so it's still cool to me.

Flow: Dope opener to start it off. Cool attempt with the nameplay, think it could have been executed better tho but +1 for creativity. Not quite getting the Rash line, I might be out of touch if it's something that happened on the forums or I'm just being stupid, it is what it is tho. Similar thing with the next one, not quite sure what you're getting at tbh, if you actually mean Arsenal as the team it'd be dope to have the capital letter on Arsenal to make it a bit more obvious but it would make sense so I'm sticking to it and give you the benefit of the doubt. Laughed at the closer.

Thought Cynical seemed to be a bit more consistent overall so my vote goes to him, he edges it in favor for my vote on this one. Cool battle, enjoyed both reads.

[Sharp]

3-3

[Incredible]

Flow:

"outta luck when I pull out my Glock quick, so fast the peice is never seen
Bitch all you'll see is the steel pop out from my fist like wolverine"

"Sinful? Yeah on minimal concepts, shit my key topping your efforts any day
I just threw so many lines over your head you should be in the thread "who's hairline is it anyway"

Cynic:

"ill snap on your whole fam. throw a punch n it's 'excuse me?'
C clap back, bear down, n put ya birds head in a backpack. Banjo Kazooie"

"diva pussy. you all talk, bitch. aint know about that raw shyt
bullets goin thru you is music to my ears. so when the K-Pop it's all hits"

"got my squad on ya. Move funny n they end your lame ass
my shooters Jimmy Neutron. Any smart ideas n you'll get your brainblast"

Overall was a decent battle judging the book by the cover I thought flow would take this easily but to me doesn't seem like he tried maybe he was feeling too comfortable or just didn't have the time to put in the effort. I think cynic had the more overall better verse.

Vote = Cynic

[DynamiCz]

he got jokes, but nice in a scrap? not even true, b
wen real punches fly, the comedian's gettin tossed like the Watchmen movie

Coo opener here!

ill snap on your whole fam. throw a punch n it's 'excuse me?'
C clap back, bear down, n put ya birds head in a backpack. Banjo Kazooie

Line was nice, heard the concept before, but nonetheless nothin taken away from you here.

i was off last week. now im coming back to end your shyt, bitch
didnt put my best foot forward. i planted it to roundhouse kick you out of fuckin existence

Think this could have been executed a little better to hit harder. Miss for me

this my bars vs your bullshit. tryin is useless
faggot youre enough light work to employ an electricians union

Simple, but coo

diva pussy. you all talk, bitch. aint know about that raw shyt
bullets goin thru you is music to my ears. so when the K-Pop it's all hits

Ha! This was coo

got my squad on ya. Move funny n they end your lame ass
my shooters Jimmy Neutron. Any smart ideas n you'll get your brainblast

Nahh b wasn't feeling the ender...

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Give it up kid, I've never seen someone who battles so bad
N I thought surely a cynic would be able to recognise when his own bars are trash

Lighhhht opener Flow! Rhymed cool tho I guess

Old ass out of touch when your this shit n about to 'rust'
Its no wonder lol, i can C Y nic gets broken down so much

Cool nameplay breakdown here

outta luck when I pull out my Glock quick, so fast the peice is never seen
Bitch all you'll see is the steel pop out from my fist like wolverine

Nice here!

n take me light in a fight an you'll find your life ending fast
He can act Rash, but he fadin away soon as i stick him with glass

Nahhh just seems a bit on the simple side

I write to harm all, my skills the complete package your just a parcel
Cynical End game? Only if we mean hes got bodys missing from his arsenal

Lol Fiya!

Sinful? Yeah on minimal concepts, shit my key topping your efforts any day
I just threw so many lines over your head you should be in the thread "who's hairline is it anyway

Nah, not feelin the closer here!


Overall both had the same amount of misses here, coo read tho from both! I got Flow barely edging this one with the "Wolverine bar". Kinda was the Haymaker imo for his verse. Props to both tho!

V-Flow

[Saint]

Had both misses & a cpl dece hits..

kazooie

arsenal, cy nic

V Flow.. a bit more fresher w/ concepts. wording was about even.

[bleak]

Usually I don't breakdown but kinda have to with these last 2

12..

he got jokes, but nice in a scrap? not even true, b
wen real punches fly, the comedian's gettin tossed like the Watchmen movie
-niche concept but I get it
ill snap on your whole fam. throw a punch n it's 'excuse me?'
C clap back, bear down, n put ya birds head in a backpack. Banjo Kazooie
-fire
i was off last week. now im coming back to end your shyt, bitch
didnt put my best foot forward. i planted it to roundhouse kick you out of fuckin existence
-meta punches are hard to do but this isn't terrible
this my bars vs your bullshit. tryin is useless
faggot youre enough light work to employ an electricians union
-light lol
diva pussy. you all talk, bitch. aint know about that raw shyt
bullets goin thru you is music to my ears. so when the K-Pop it's all hits
-fire
got my squad on ya. Move funny n they end your lame ass
my shooters Jimmy Neutron. Any smart ideas n you'll get your brainblast
-show is hazy but I googled this ONE, decent
Flow

Give it up kid, I've never seen someone who battles so bad
N I thought surely a cynic would be able to recognise when his own bars are trash
-too simple
Old ass out of touch when your this shit n about to 'rust'
Its no wonder lol, i can C Y nic gets broken down so much
-grind timey but not bad
outta luck when I pull out my Glock quick, so fast the peice is never seen
Bitch all you'll see is the steel pop out from my fist like wolverine
-fire
n take me light in a fight an you'll find your life ending fast
He can act Rash, but he fadin away soon as i stick him with glass
-i can't lie I don't understand this one
I write to harm all, my skills the complete package your just a parcel
Cynical End game? Only if we mean hes got bodys missing from his arsenal
-soccer I assume, capitalize Arsenal next time lol it's not terrible I googled
Sinful? Yeah on minimal concepts, shit my key topping your efforts any day
I just threw so many lines over your head you should be in the thread "who's hairline is it anyway
-simple, a bit cringey


Think that's 12 Sharp open it up G

This one is hard to call, mostly a style preference battle. Flow is more direct and to the point while Cy is imo more creative with his concepts and execution. I've always said that creativity trumps in my votes, so

V/ Cynic

Solid battle, better than i expected

[bleak]

5-5 sorry lol
Knucklehead Allen Knight Cred Blue Bayou

[Blue Bayou]

he got jokes, but nice in a scrap? not even true, b
wen real punches fly, the comedian's gettin tossed like the Watchmen movie
pretty dece concept.. cool
ill snap on your whole fam. throw a punch n it's 'excuse me?'
C clap back, bear down, n put ya birds head in a backpack. Banjo Kazooie
pretty dope vid game bar
i was off last week. now im coming back to end your shyt, bitch
didnt put my best foot forward. i planted it to roundhouse kick you out of fuckin existence
this had potential, i like these kindve bars.. but, didnt think you executed this very well..
this my bars vs your bullshit. tryin is useless
faggot youre enough light work to employ an electricians union
very played
diva pussy. you all talk, bitch. aint know about that raw shyt
bullets goin thru you is music to my ears. so when the K-Pop it's all hits
dope, this was fire
got my squad on ya. Move funny n they end your lame ass
my shooters Jimmy Neutron. Any smart ideas n you'll get your brainblast
meh, okay

vs.

Give it up kid, I've never seen someone who battles so bad
N I thought surely a cynic would be able to recognise when his own bars are trash
wording could've made this have a lot of swag & hit.. but as done, nope
Old ass out of touch when your this shit n about to 'rust'
Its no wonder lol, i can C Y nic gets broken down so much
lol, cool np
outta luck when I pull out my Glock quick, so fast the peice is never seen
Bitch all you'll see is the steel pop out from my fist like wolverine
cool, decent steel bar
n take me light in a fight an you'll find your life ending fast
He can act Rash, but he fadin away soon as i stick him with glass
pretty cool
I write to harm all, my skills the complete package your just a parcel
Cynical End game? Only if we mean hes got bodys missing from his arsenal
fire concept/np.. it's let down by a bad multi with syllables off tho, but the idea is dope
Sinful? Yeah on minimal concepts, shit my key topping your efforts any day
I just threw so many lines over your head you should be in the thread "who's hairline is it anyway
decent site punch


Flow your wording was pretty bad this week tbh, without that aresenal np/wordplay concept i think you wouldve lost this ..
i've got Flow by the slightest of margins due to consistency/less poor misses.. Cynic pretty cool drop a couple nice bars .. props to both

Vote - Flow