CHAMP MATCH: Diablo vs Master Rock

[Diablo]

Let’s go

Due in a week

Innovator to provide us a topic

[Master Rock]

Yo, since you haven't participated in the league how does this justify you earning a shot? Furthermore, if the last match was a champ match I believe that may conclude the season. If Inno doesn't start a new season or another week I'll definitely entertain your proposal for a topical battle. However, if Inno does proceed to create another week the participants in ranking deserve their due respect.

[sral]

lmao bitch STFU

I was the last champ we had before i signed out undefeated

i run this league

prepare to lose pussy

[Master Rock]

Settle down little man.

[sral]

topic threads up

pick your poison

[Diablo]

post tomorrow?

[Master Rock]

I prefer to have a week...but I will attempt get started tonight if not next Friday night.

[Master Rock]

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[sral]

ready when you are faggot Master Rock

[sral]

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Let’s look at the foot of the evolutionary ladder
on the cusp of our cousins first choosing to clamber.
Quadrupeds had gradually learned to stand steady and soldiered
while using their balance to set the bi-pedals in motion.
Sahelanthropus Tchadentis decided to walk like no primate before
but what lead to the moment chosen to climb from the floor?
Its environment’s thought to be one factor as the forests depleted
so they had to find new resources using what’s in their region.
It’s possible even the paleoclimate led their pursuit to this end
as male hominins freed up their hands to carry more food for their set.
This was mutually beneficial for males geared with this gait
with a move toward sexual exclusivity with their mates.
The transfer from trees to terrain meant new movement to master
as their appearances changed to better suit the savannah.
Soon they had stature which brought with it a raised head
for viewing the vaster area and it’s hidden terrain threats.
As bigger became better beneath the sweltering sun
a similar change beckoned as well within some.
The fur fell from their frontages in multiple places
exposing the genitals fully and further encouraging mating.
It could be debated the hair loss assisted more than just that
with hunting-related running, their status, and reinforcing commands.
From the tallest of canopies to us leading land lives
took one small step for man, but one giant leap for man kind...

[Master Rock]

Upon the conception of Genesis's eve, God planned out creation initiating its weave
atoms began to helix from the data received, hovering above the ground electrons fire, instantiating, it breathes
proceed, life gleams, primordial flesh that it breeds, pristine bloodlines conceived
knowledge anguished through fruition's feed, harvested seed serpent deceives
these lies damaging our molecular structure, every bit..apart of us gets ruptured
remixed the double helix, innate development of evil draws out jealousy and hate
stone to the dome, blood drips to the ground the earth moans, its fate
enabled, embedded in every single one of our traits
instructing every cell that passed, and locked down the sequence of the code's math
at an expense, the ties that bind, rewind, remind me of every bit of crime, every bit of shine, every bit of what is mine condensed
The continued struggle ill-nature is what we fight against
formulation of mine, past tense, ancestry dense, the suspense of my genes coils, predosed routines and habits
strand of my facet, destiny plans inhabit, Cells locked behind bars predisposed plans genetic disorders are static
We in the dirt climbing the ladder high attempting to reach for the sky to elevate
yet adaption is in every one of our traits, babel scattered dispersion of fate
spread out the genome is relative to us running the race
the motherland it all relative to it all our trace
evolution's theory is flawed, Darwinism equates to a man on an island hollering at his ball
castaway deceptions thralled, polar opposites debate the fish, missing link and the crawl
we in a different time where geneticists discuss future of mankind
another ladder to climb pondering about green pastures on the other side
clones, gene manipulation, designer babies, genetic engineering, playing God is the strive
splicing, editing genes, biotech trans-humanism theorize
how can our race evolve with science and tech on its side the ascension of mankind is fully realized?

[sral]

Unfortunately Master Rock posted after the deadline and as we have to move into next week, Diablo is therefor champ.

Thanks for showing guys.

Congratulations to Diablo on becoming the new Netcees Writers League champion!

[Master Rock]

Unfortunately Master Rock posted after the deadline and as we have to move into next week, Diablo is therefor champ.

Thanks for showing guys.

Congratulations to Diablo on becoming the new Netcees Writers League champion!

Let's get some votes people. This dude is talking nonsense.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Unfortunately Master Rock posted after the deadline and as we have to move into next week, Diablo is therefor champ.

Thanks for showing guys.

Congratulations to Diablo on becoming the new Netcees Writers League champion!

lmfao man

this dude lars can't help himself to mod/create leagues to make himself champ

jussie smollett of NC

[Zaddy]

Lmaoooooo

[Pharaohs Army]

Let's get some votes on this. I'll vote tomorrow or the next day

[Pharaohs Army]

So Lars, or Diablo, not your best work.
Frankly I'm a little bored by this account of humans beginning to walk and hunt and mate.
Technically it's fairly sound per usual.

Master Rock, you're kind of all over the map with your verse.
This part was very generic:
at an expense, the ties that bind, rewind, remind me of every bit of crime, every bit of shine, every bit of what is mine condensed

And this part is poorly written:
the motherland it all relative to it all our trace

Not liking either verse but I'm gonna give it to V/ Lars for some smoother wording.

[Master Rock]

And this part is poorly written:
the motherland it all relative to it all our trace


I must of skimmed over it quickly, because when I was performing it, it came out as, "the motherland is all relative to our trace". A slight oversight.

[Pharaohs Army]

I must of skimmed over it quickly, because when I was performing it, it came out as, "the motherland is all relative to our trace". A slight oversight.

Don't worry it's not THE reason I'm voting against you.

I looked at the totality.