Ryno vs Blue Bayou - BLUE WINS

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SOL Season 1
Wk 4

Due Thursday, Feb 14

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[Blue Bayou]

god fucking damnit

[Ryno]

god fucking damnit

I’m sick of ur ass lol i’ll post in a few

[Ryno]

Revolver aimed at ya brain...clutch shot so insane w/ the pain
Once the barrel ‘spin, move’ tf out the way, Think LeBron James in the lane
Decapitate ya dome, on the right day dawg I’m psycho w/ a nice blade
Swipe lames! It won’t take a therapist to see his head ain’t in the right place
He ain’t loyal to his crew...he’ll flee the scene once the clip let em fly
If he’s running w/ a new crowd, I bet a thou he left his homies there to die
Leave ya bish throat sore, coke whore, dawg I pipe her like she’s mine
Had my cock ‘Blue on a Friday’, then ended the night w/ shots & some lines
This aint staged, i bang k’s, see ur performance got me loadin’ it now
I’ll clap at this clown! Switchin arms till he folds like he was takin’ a bow
Run ya pockets nigga, pump in the air got ya squad face down bro
For the cash I’m leaving bodies across the floor...no bank heist hoe
Rep my gang for life, our aim is nice, it’s a fatality whenever we greet ya
On some mileena shit...if the bandanna comes off I’ll feast on ya features
Dawg I’m killin’ this slime, the clocks tickin’ & ya life’s on the line
Knife wreckin’ this guy! ‘Put the point to his wrist’ while he’s begging for time

[Blue Bayou]

in the past i’ve run right thru em & i’ve rendered him wack
but this week he’s really putting me in my place.... the contendership match
you love sucking black dick & call the feeling amazing
Bro D on ya tongue so much, Body will accuse you of stealing his saying
kill the noise pussy you never have a matic drawn
Firesticks?! yaaa, if were talking what's plugged into ur TV made by Amazon
scope extended for range. testin the K & we’ll dead em for thrills
my Mens Rea be locked on his Mind. trust me there will be Intention to Kill
faggit i always make the grade, you? well ur job is wack
my work is Triple A. ur the guy that tows my beamer when i got a flat
barrel pressed against your dome when i let the trigger go
‘Flame on the back of ur Head’– it's goin Bam Bam boyy u've never hit a Bigalow
my dick keeps girls coming back for more, the bitches just love it
ladies can’t get enough a malaise.. round you they're just sick to their stomachs
smash his chin. his crews pussy & i laugh at them
shit the support this kid has makes Finny's children feel like Kardashians

[Sinacog]

Ryno -

Dope verse here, a lot of good lines. I enjoyed the opening line, the bow line, and the therapist line the most. pretty nice work for the most part, props!

Blue -

good verse here, i enjoyed it. your verse was nice with wordplay and schemes. was it enough? maybe..but maybe it missed ryno's..let's see..

overall - dope battle but i got to give it to ryno here..

v/ ryno

[DMS]

Revolver aimed at ya brain...clutch shot so insane w/ the pain
Once the barrel ‘spin, move’ tf out the way, Think LeBron James in the lane

Cool

Decapitate ya dome, on the right day dawg I’m psycho w/ a nice blade
Swipe lames! It won’t take a therapist to see his head ain’t in the right place

This was nice

He ain’t loyal to his crew...he’ll flee the scene once the clip let em fly
If he’s running w/ a new crowd, I bet a thou he left his homies there to die

Cool

Leave ya bish throat sore, coke whore, dawg I pipe her like she’s mine
Had my cock ‘Blue on a Friday’, then ended the night w/ shots & some lines

Cool

This aint staged, i bang k’s, see ur performance got me loadin’ it now
I’ll clap at this clown! Switchin arms till he folds like he was takin’ a bow

This was nice

Run ya pockets nigga, pump in the air got ya squad face down bro
For the cash I’m leaving bodies across the floor...no bank heist hoe

Been done before, worded not to it’s fupl potential.

Rep my gang for life, our aim is nice, it’s a fatality whenever we greet ya
On some mileena shit...if the bandanna comes off I’ll feast on ya features

I don’t get the reference sorry.

Dawg I’m killin’ this slime, the clocks tickin’ & ya life’s on the line
Knife wreckin’ this guy! ‘Put the point to his wrist’ while he’s begging for time

Meh









in the past i’ve run right thru em & i’ve rendered him wack
but this week he’s really putting me in my place.... the contendership match

Nice opener

you love sucking black dick & call the feeling amazing
Bro D on ya tongue so much, Body will accuse you of stealing his saying

Once again nice,

kill the noise pussy you never have a matic drawn
Firesticks?! yaaa, if were talking what's plugged into ur TV made by Amazon

Worded awkwardly

scope extended for range. testin the K & we’ll dead em for thrills
my Mens Rea be locked on his Mind. trust me there will be Intention to Kill

I don’t get the reference

faggit i always make the grade, you? well ur job is wack
my work is Triple A. ur the guy that tows my beamer when i got a flat

Cool

barrel pressed against your dome when i let the trigger go
‘Flame on the back of ur Head’– it's goin Bam Bam boyy u've never hit a Bigalow

Nice

my dick keeps girls coming back for more, the bitches just love it
ladies can’t get enough a malaise.. round you they're just sick to their stomachs

Nice

smash his chin. his crews pussy & i laugh at them
shit the support this kid has makes Finny's children feel like Kardashians

Nice ender




V/ Blue overal more solid w/ less misses and better wording. It really came down to the openers and ender here.

[Useless]

Revolver aimed at ya brain...clutch shot so insane w/ the pain
Once the barrel ‘spin, move’ tf out the way, Think LeBron James in the lane
...Lesnar used a similar barrel role line against me but ur flip and direction was different. This strait...
Decapitate ya dome, on the right day dawg I’m psycho w/ a nice blade
Swipe lames! It won’t take a therapist to see his head ain’t in the right place
...eh...
He ain’t loyal to his crew...he’ll flee the scene once the clip let em fly
If he’s running w/ a new crowd, I bet a thou he left his homies there to die
...eh...
Leave ya bish throat sore, coke whore, dawg I pipe her like she’s mine
Had my cock ‘Blue on a Friday’, then ended the night w/ shots & some lines
...decent but eh...
This aint staged, i bang k’s, see ur performance got me loadin’ it now
I’ll clap at this clown! Switchin arms till he folds like he was takin’ a bow
...decent...
Run ya pockets nigga, pump in the air got ya squad face down bro
For the cash I’m leaving bodies across the floor...no bank heist hoe
...feeling...
Rep my gang for life, our aim is nice, it’s a fatality whenever we greet ya
On some mileena shit...if the bandanna comes off I’ll feast on ya features
...good attempt...
Dawg I’m killin’ this slime, the clocks tickin’ & ya life’s on the line
Knife wreckin’ this guy! ‘Put the point to his wrist’ while he’s begging for time
...good closer...

Vs


in the past i’ve run right thru em & i’ve rendered him wack
but this week he’s really putting me in my place.... the contendership match
...I've used similar lines, takes the sting away for me but still true so theres that...
you love sucking black dick & call the feeling amazing
Bro D on ya tongue so much, Body will accuse you of stealing his saying
...lol...
kill the noise pussy you never have a matic drawn
Firesticks?! yaaa, if were talking what's plugged into ur TV made by Amazon
...lol...
scope extended for range. testin the K & we’ll dead em for thrills
my Mens Rea be locked on his Mind. trust me there will be Intention to Kill
...I'm missing something here might be pop culture ref but I dont get it...
faggit i always make the grade, you? well ur job is wack
my work is Triple A. ur the guy that tows my beamer when i got a flat
...heating up...
barrel pressed against your dome when i let the trigger go
‘Flame on the back of ur Head’– it's goin Bam Bam boyy u've never hit a Bigalow
...fire...
my dick keeps girls coming back for more, the bitches just love it
ladies can’t get enough a malaise.. round you they're just sick to their stomachs
...dope wp but "a" shoulda been "of" imo but still...
smash his chin. his crews pussy & i laugh at them
shit the support this kid has makes Finny's children feel like Kardashians
...lol...


Overall: Ryno made a good go at it, his verse was entertaining and had some good lines but some mediocrity too. Blues verse was more entertaining n better written


V. Bb

[Saint]

in the past i’ve run right thru em & i’ve rendered him wack
but this week he’s really putting me in my place.... the contendership match

ok opener

you love sucking black dick & call the feeling amazing
Bro D on ya tongue so much, Body will accuse you of stealing his saying

lol ok

kill the noise pussy you never have a matic drawn
Firesticks?! yaaa, if were talking what's plugged into ur TV made by Amazon

seen a firesticks play but still it was alright

scope extended for range. testin the K & we’ll dead em for thrills
my Mens Rea be locked on his Mind. trust me there will be Intention to Kill

I know men's rea but not the second meaning here>?
(pm me i may be dumb or missing something)

faggit i always make the grade, you? well ur job is wack
my work is Triple A. ur the guy that tows my beamer when i got a flat

ok cool

barrel pressed against your dome when i let the trigger go
‘Flame on the back of ur Head’– it's goin Bam Bam boyy u've never hit a Bigalow

i had a bam.bam line lol good

my dick keeps girls coming back for more, the bitches just love it
ladies can’t get enough a malaise.. round you they're just sick to their stomachs

eh ok wp.

smash his chin. his crews pussy & i laugh at them
shit the support this kid has makes Finny's children feel like Kardashians

throwaway to me but I




Revolver aimed at ya brain...clutch shot so insane w/ the pain
Once the barrel ‘spin, move’ tf out the way, Think LeBron James in the lane

wording mighta been changed here but not bad

Decapitate ya dome, on the right day dawg I’m psycho w/ a nice blade
Swipe lames! It won’t take a therapist to see his head ain’t in the right place

ok, I did a heart in place line - ok here

He ain’t loyal to his crew...he’ll flee the scene once the clip let em fly
If he’s running w/ a new crowd, I bet a thou he left his homies there to die

nah

Leave ya bish throat sore, coke whore, dawg I pipe her like she’s mine
Had my cock ‘Blue on a Friday’, then ended the night w/ shots & some lines

hmm i might not get it entirely....but from context it was ok to me tbh

This aint staged, i bang k’s, see ur performance got me loadin’ it now
I’ll clap at this clown! Switchin arms till he folds like he was takin’ a bow

ok cool but more swag&f

Run ya pockets nigga, pump in the air got ya squad face down bro
For the cash I’m leaving bodies across the floor...no bank heist hoe

eh, kinda basic6 to me

Rep my gang for life, our aim is nice, it’s a fatality whenever we greet ya
On some mileena shit...if the bandanna comes off I’ll feast on ya features

i liked this. cool swag line

Dawg I’m killin’ this slime, the clocks tickin’ & ya life’s on the line
Knife wreckin’ this guy! ‘Put the point to his wrist’ while he’s begging for time

closer straight


V BB. I preferred his approach, wording was better imo and more variety whereas ryno had a lot of attk/direct lines. It's ok tho not a bad read imo...blue had higher highs too

[Allen Knight]

Revolver aimed at ya brain...clutch shot so insane w/ the pain
Once the barrel ‘spin, move’ tf out the way, Think LeBron James in the lane
^^^ehh not feelin this opener
Decapitate ya dome, on the right day dawg I’m psycho w/ a nice blade
Swipe lames! It won’t take a therapist to see his head ain’t in the right place
^^^nice
He ain’t loyal to his crew...he’ll flee the scene once the clip let em fly
If he’s running w/ a new crowd, I bet a thou he left his homies there to die
^^^solid, concept is nice re worded woulda been fire.
Leave ya bish throat sore, coke whore, dawg I pipe her like she’s mine
Had my cock ‘Blue on a Friday’, then ended the night w/ shots & some lines
^^^cool blue flip
This aint staged, i bang k’s, see ur performance got me loadin’ it now
I’ll clap at this clown! Switchin arms till he folds like he was takin’ a bow
^^^nah
Run ya pockets nigga, pump in the air got ya squad face down bro
For the cash I’m leaving bodies across the floor...no bank heist hoe
^^^concept is dope but worded soft tbh
Rep my gang for life, our aim is nice, it’s a fatality whenever we greet ya
On some mileena shit...if the bandanna comes off I’ll feast on ya features
^^^nope
Dawg I’m killin’ this slime, the clocks tickin’ & ya life’s on the line
Knife wreckin’ this guy! ‘Put the point to his wrist’ while he’s begging for time
^^^concept is nice but worded weak


vs

in the past i’ve run right thru em & i’ve rendered him wack
but this week he’s really putting me in my place.... the contendership match
^^^Solid opener nothin crazy tho
you love sucking black dick & call the feeling amazing
Bro D on ya tongue so much, Body will accuse you of stealing his saying
^^^ehh
kill the noise pussy you never have a matic drawn
Firesticks?! yaaa, if were talking what's plugged into ur TV made by Amazon
^^^nah did this concept already so it dont hit for me
scope extended for range. testin the K & we’ll dead em for thrills
my Mens Rea be locked on his Mind. trust me there will be Intention to Kill
^^^ok
faggit i always make the grade, you? well ur job is wack
my work is Triple A. ur the guy that tows my beamer when i got a flat
^^^yea good
barrel pressed against your dome when i let the trigger go
‘Flame on the back of ur Head’– it's goin Bam Bam boyy u've never hit a Bigalow
^^^ok but i did this concept already a while back so it doesnt hit really to me
my dick keeps girls coming back for more, the bitches just love it
ladies can’t get enough a malaise.. round you they're just sick to their stomachs
^^^nicee
smash his chin. his crews pussy & i laugh at them
shit the support this kid has makes Finny's children feel like Kardashians
^^^funny but weak

v/blue but this is close can go either way imo tbh def a style preference battle, both had some nice shit, props to both in a tight one.

[Zaddy]

Revolver aimed at ya brain...clutch shot so insane w/ the pain
Once the barrel ‘spin, move’ tf out the way, Think LeBron James in the lane
wording and flow saved this, pretty cool bar
Decapitate ya dome, on the right day dawg I’m psycho w/ a nice blade
Swipe lames! It won’t take a therapist to see his head ain’t in the right place
best bar I’ve read in a while. Sick af, kinda mad I didn’t think of it. Fuck all the haters saying it’s meh. Them niggas trash
He ain’t loyal to his crew...he’ll flee the scene once the clip let em fly
If he’s running w/ a new crowd, I bet a thou he left his homies there to die
nah wasn’t feelin this
Leave ya bish throat sore, coke whore, dawg I pipe her like she’s mine
Had my cock ‘Blue on a Friday’, then ended the night w/ shots & some lines
nah another miss here
This aint staged, i bang k’s, see ur performance got me loadin’ it now
I’ll clap at this clown! Switchin arms till he folds like he was takin’ a bow
familiar concept but it was an ok bar regardless
Run ya pockets nigga, pump in the air got ya squad face down bro
For the cash I’m leaving bodies across the floor...no bank heist hoe
decent but the execution was lacking
Rep my gang for life, our aim is nice, it’s a fatality whenever we greet ya
On some mileena shit...if the bandanna comes off I’ll feast on ya features
alright I can dig it
Dawg I’m killin’ this slime, the clocks tickin’ & ya life’s on the line
Knife wreckin’ this guy! ‘Put the point to his wrist’ while he’s begging for time
had potential but didn’t fall through


Vs



in the past i’ve run right thru em & i’ve rendered him wack
but this week he’s really putting me in my place.... the contendership match
super light but decent
you love sucking black dick & call the feeling amazing
Bro D on ya tongue so much, Body will accuse you of stealing his saying
terrible
kill the noise pussy you never have a matic drawn
Firesticks?! yaaa, if were talking what's plugged into ur TV made by Amazon
played concept but decent flip
scope extended for range. testin the K & we’ll dead em for thrills
my Mens Rea be locked on his Mind. trust me there will be Intention to Kill
now this is dope and creative af
faggit i always make the grade, you? well ur job is wack
my work is Triple A. ur the guy that tows my beamer when i got a flat
woulda been dope in 2005 but it’s decent
barrel pressed against your dome when i let the trigger go
‘Flame on the back of ur Head’– it's goin Bam Bam boyy u've never hit a Bigalow
alright
my dick keeps girls coming back for more, the bitches just love it
ladies can’t get enough a malaise.. round you they're just sick to their stomachs
pretty cool
smash his chin. his crews pussy & i laugh at them
shit the support this kid has makes Finny's children feel like Kardashians
nah


At first glance I was like damn Ryno beat blue bayou and looked at the votes like wow these guys really just need an excuse not to vote against blue. But nah after carefully reading everything, aside from the bad misses on both sides, Blue was more consistent and takes it. Therapist line was LOTB easily.


Vote Blue Bayou