Objective vs Incredible - INC WINS BY NS OPEN FOR FEED

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 4

Due Thursday, Feb 14

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

[Objective]

here, going 12.

[Incredible]

12s good

[Incredible]

I got 8 so far I can finish tonight if your posting tonight, if not ext. granted...

[Incredible]

Fuck it here's 12

Try to act like a party animal the Rifle will bust, it's even killed a deer
When the 40cal put his head back multiple times, he ain't chugging a beer
Bullets bigger than a rock, make a B line to where ur standing
Guarantee when I drop back, it's a straight shot to OBJ unlike Eli Manning
This text battling shit ain't for you, this kid will suck forever
Thought he was heaven sent in the "diablos the greatest" thread guess he really ducked a devil
Topical head trying to branch out his expertise, man it's so sad
Only topic you get is a post on my IG dead......that's a trend, but no fad
That finny child support thread showed on that subject you have all the info
I got two and was able to post on time, you working OT to pay that dumb ho
Kill you vividly with descriptive verbs that's how I explain malice
Wouldn't understand txt if I smacked you with 52 books, guess this is a bagged challenge

Objective

[bleak]

Objective closing at 3est when i get to work

[Zaddy]

Try to act like a party animal the Rifle will bust, it's even killed a deer
When the 40cal put his head back multiple times, he ain't chugging a beer
this was actually pretty good bro
Bullets bigger than a rock, make a B line to where ur standing
Guarantee when I drop back, it's a straight shot to OBJ unlike Eli Manning
wow this was a dope concept, but damn it woulda hit a lot better if you said “like Eli Manning” instead of unlike. Still a good hit though
This text battling shit ain't for you, this kid will suck forever
Thought he was heaven sent in the "diablos the greatest" thread guess he really ducked a devil
this was ok, not too hard hitting but def a decent personal
Topical head trying to branch out his expertise, man it's so sad
Only topic you get is a post on my IG dead......that's a trend, but no fad
nah lol
That finny child support thread showed on that subject you have all the info
I got two and was able to post on time, you working OT to pay that dumb ho
good current event concept but it wasn’t executed too well. Def had potential if it had went a different route
Kill you vividly with descriptive verbs that's how I explain malice
Wouldn't understand txt if I smacked you with 52 books, guess this is a bagged challenge
not bad here, good concept but the ending wasn’t the best


Yo this was a huge improvement from what I’ve read from you as of late, your concepts and wording are getting A LOT better and your setups are nice and sweet, not overly worded or corny. Good verse here, shame you got no showed.