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bleak
02-11-2019, 02:49 PM
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Juan Dillinger Viper

Viper
02-11-2019, 06:14 PM
check gl

bleak
02-14-2019, 04:23 PM
Juan Dillinger

John Dillinger
02-14-2019, 11:56 PM
Come at me sideways or retarded & u'll catch a knife in the heart & eyes
Blade always on me, u gettin a slash after every sentence like Jabari lines
Cuck u don't handle fire, u get dressed up for gigs trappin
Cuz the only time u've dealt w/ crosshairs was braiding ur wig faggot
U type like ur jaw wired, giving up life is the best bet
Fuck venom, if ur teeth show us anything its that u inject meth
U aint a threat. Prolly a neckbeard who fears broads & women
Ironic ur the biggest White Knight here & still haven't Jumped over competition
Best believe ya girl got smashed too, it was a true hit & run
Gave Hurricane after cuz shawty was limpin like she was hit by one

Viper
02-15-2019, 02:57 AM
I cnt vibe wit broke niggas, fuk around n get checked boy
cuz wen i say im cumin for Dil’ doe i dnt mean grindin on a sex toy
ill smash yo hoe n then blam it. it’ll be the end of a shit marriage
grip blarin, catch ur baby on the bowl n let the lb dump like a miscarriage
this is a cat vs mouse game. you had a plan to win but it all fell
now there’s a birdie in ur grill - looks like the Tom was doing his job well
let the 12 sing like a church choir. if u think ur bars do the job u are not hired
you been dry, but not evn in the heart of a Cali flame cud you ever brushfire
im in w the shits. you nvr seen guns boy I been w the clips
this shits a wrap, cuz I’ll have a red dot on ur forehead like an indian bitch
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10

Incredible
02-15-2019, 10:40 PM
John Dillinger:

"Come at me sideways or retarded & u'll catch a knife in the heart & eyes*
Blade always on me, u gettin a slash after every sentence like Jabari lines"


Viper:

"this is a cat vs mouse game. you had a plan to win but it all fell
now there’s a birdie in ur grill - looks like the Tom was doing his job well"

"let the 12 sing like a church choir. if u think ur bars do the job u are not hired*
you been dry, but not evn in the heart of a Cali flame cud you ever brushfire"

This was a decent battle Dillingers crosshairs bar maybe could've be quoted too. Pretty cool flip and viper didn't start off that great in my opinion, his last 6 lines I think got him the win. Was pretty close though, props for showing.

Vote=Viper

Ryno
02-16-2019, 02:38 PM
JD:

cross hairs
Closer

Viper:

N/A

v/JD...Not trying to be harsh on viper, he had alot of old ideas & i didnt like the flips behind them.

BodySnatcher
02-16-2019, 08:27 PM
Come at me sideways or retarded & u'll catch a knife in the heart & eyes
Blade always on me, u gettin a slash after every sentence like Jabari lines
this is good
Cuck u don't handle fire, u get dressed up for gigs trappin
Cuz the only time u've dealt w/ crosshairs was braiding ur wig faggot
lmao
U type like ur jaw wired, giving up life is the best bet
Fuck venom, if ur teeth show us anything its that u inject meth
ehh
U aint a threat. Prolly a neckbeard who fears broads & women
Ironic ur the biggest White Knight here & still haven't Jumped over competition
nah
Best believe ya girl got smashed too, it was a true hit & run
Gave Hurricane after cuz shawty was limpin like she was hit by one
cool




I cnt vibe wit broke niggas, fuk around n get checked boy
cuz wen i say im cumin for Dil’ doe i dnt mean grindin on a sex toy
nah
ill smash yo hoe n then blam it. it’ll be the end of a shit marriage
grip blarin, catch ur baby on the bowl n let the lb dump like a miscarriage
decent at best
this is a cat vs mouse game. you had a plan to win but it all fell
now there’s a birdie in ur grill - looks like the Tom was doing his job well
coolish
let the 12 sing like a church choir. if u think ur bars do the job u are not hired
you been dry, but not evn in the heart of a Cali flame cud you ever brushfire
this is cool
im in w the shits. you nvr seen guns boy I been w the clips
this shits a wrap, cuz I’ll have a red dot on ur forehead like an indian bitch
nah


vote JD, good shit fellas

Useless
02-16-2019, 08:42 PM
Come at me sideways or retarded & u'll catch a knife in the heart & eyes
Blade always on me, u gettin a slash after every sentence like Jabari lines
...played...
Cuck u don't handle fire, u get dressed up for gigs trappin
Cuz the only time u've dealt w/ crosshairs was braiding ur wig faggot
...why wig instead of hair? Nice line tho...
U type like ur jaw wired, giving up life is the best bet
Fuck venom, if ur teeth show us anything its that u inject meth
...fire...
U aint a threat. Prolly a neckbeard who fears broads & women
Ironic ur the biggest White Knight here & still haven't Jumped over competition
...didnt quite hit, needed a better flip...
Best believe ya girl got smashed too, it was a true hit & run
Gave Hurricane after cuz shawty was limpin like she was hit by one
...fire...

Vs

I cnt vibe wit broke niggas, fuk around n get checked boy
cuz wen i say im cumin for Dil’ doe i dnt mean grindin on a sex toy
...fucking pause bro wait u coulda flipped that talkn bout his girl or something but wtf. Np good, flip = u gay nigga...
ill smash yo hoe n then blam it. it’ll be the end of a shit marriage
grip blarin, catch ur baby on the bowl n let the lb dump like a miscarriage
...ehh...
this is a cat vs mouse game. you had a plan to win but it all fell
now there’s a birdie in ur grill - looks like the Tom was doing his job well
...I'm missing something...
let the 12 sing like a church choir. if u think ur bars do the job u are not hired you been dry, but not evn in the heart of a Cali flame cud you ever brushfire
...nah...
im in w the shits. you nvr seen guns boy I been w the clips
this shits a wrap, cuz I’ll have a red dot on ur forehead like an indian bitch
...played to death...


V. Dillinger


Body

Blas
02-17-2019, 11:03 AM
Come at me sideways or retarded & u'll catch a knife in the heart & eyes
Blade always on me, u gettin a slash after every sentence like Jabari lines
lolz pretty cool
Cuck u don't handle fire, u get dressed up for gigs trappin
Cuz the only time u've dealt w/ crosshairs was braiding ur wig faggot
meh ok
U type like ur jaw wired, giving up life is the best bet
Fuck venom, if ur teeth show us anything its that u inject meth
ok
U aint a threat. Prolly a neckbeard who fears broads & women
Ironic ur the biggest White Knight here & still haven't Jumped over competition
not feeling
Best believe ya girl got smashed too, it was a true hit & run
Gave Hurricane after cuz shawty was limpin like she was hit by one
nice


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I cnt vibe wit broke niggas, fuk around n get checked boy
cuz wen i say im cumin for Dil’ doe i dnt mean grindin on a sex toy
no sir
ill smash yo hoe n then blam it. it’ll be the end of a shit marriage
grip blarin, catch ur baby on the bowl n let the lb dump like a miscarriage
no
this is a cat vs mouse game. you had a plan to win but it all fell
now there’s a birdie in ur grill - looks like the Tom was doing his job well
no
let the 12 sing like a church choir. if u think ur bars do the job u are not hired
you been dry, but not evn in the heart of a Cali flame cud you ever brushfire
mehhhh
im in w the shits. you nvr seen guns boy I been w the clips
this shits a wrap, cuz I’ll have a red dot on ur forehead like an indian bitch
absolutely not

v/ JD, pretty self explanatory. Few solid bars & just a clear better understanding of solid concepts & how to create punches.

Cynic
02-17-2019, 05:13 PM
Come at me sideways or retarded & u'll catch a knife in the heart & eyes
Blade always on me, u gettin a slash after every sentence like Jabari lines
Cuck u don't handle fire, u get dressed up for gigs trappin
Cuz the only time u've dealt w/ crosshairs was braiding ur wig faggot
Best believe ya girl got smashed too, it was a true hit & run
Gave Hurricane after cuz shawty was limpin like she was hit by one



let the 12 sing like a church choir. if u think ur bars do the job u are not hired
you been dry, but not evn in the heart of a Cali flame cud you ever brushfire
im in w the shits. you nvr seen guns boy I been w the clips
this shits a wrap, cuz I’ll have a red dot on ur forehead like an indian bitch

Juan had some stronger hits

Juan Dillinger