Shia Labruh vs Blas - BLAS WINS

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SOL Season 1
Wk 5

Due Thursday, Feb 21

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[Shia Labruh]

Yay! :)
I'm going 21

[Blas]

10's good unless you really want to go more, lmk when you wanna drop by

[Shia Labruh]

I'm ok with 12.

[Blas]

12's cool, gl. wanna drop by tonight?

[Shia Labruh]

That would be awesome.

[Blas]

Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right
Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you
Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to
Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved
So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved
2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all
You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall
Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude
Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you
Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered
Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either

[Shia Labruh]

We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help.
Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.."
Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern
When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs
If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping
Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in
u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause..
Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off.
I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans
Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance
Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast
These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas

[Blas]

bump

[Resin M-I-C]

although war/cards is old this execution was good
chick that got away coulda been used a lil better, still solid
wasnt feelin tesla at all
wasnt feelin the wall punch, seen too many and it gotta be creative
shy wordplay was a lil simplistic
merkes/ethered is just lazy lol.. this concept coulda been fire, wasnt feelin the execution

vs

opener was weird, nahhh
fracture urns lol.. the punch was alot to deal with but i fucked with it
seen these lines before but execution was nice
from the setup on wasnt feelin proximity mine
do your mans.. this line was gay af haha
wasnt feelin the closer


this was close.. alot of takeways, but blas was a lil smoother to read, shia had lows that were really bad

v Blas

[DynamiCz]

Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right

Nice opener

Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you
Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to

Okish nothing hard hitting tho

Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved
So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved

Nahhh didn't like this one

2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all
You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall

lol funny hit imo

Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude
Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you

Could have been more detailed

Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered
Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either

Ok ender, wording a little basic tho


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We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help.
Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.."

Wasn't feeling this bro

Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern
When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs

This is ok

If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping
Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in

Wording could have been better, concept is dope tho

u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause..
Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off.

Nice

I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans
Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance

This is ok at best

Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast
These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas

Could have made closer hit way harder, miss for me tho


Props to both I got Blas taking this

V-Blas

[Zaddy]

Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right
i mean..you literally have no possible idea what card you’re going to draw when playing war. Wasn’t feelin this
Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you
Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to
nah
Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved
So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved
???
2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all
You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall
lol ok
Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude
Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you
this is decent, had potential for more
Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered
Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either
nah


Vs


We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help.
Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.."
this is not ok
Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern
When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs
what?
If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping
Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in
this was good
u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause..
Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off.
good again
I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans
Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance
nah
Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast
These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas
nah


A lot of misses in this battle. Both gotta step it up but I have Shia with the better hits.

Vote Shia Labuff

[bleak]

2-1 up

[Cynic]

Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right
Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude
Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you


If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping
Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in
u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause..
Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off.


yo idk here, you guys were kinda all over the place. blas had more wordplay but didnt always connect so hard with it. shia was crazy hit or miss, liked his bars i quoted more tho

shia

[Sharp]

Jabari Black Flow Cyrax Ryno BodySnatcher Blue Bayou Infiltrate Incredible

[Saint]

Didn't feel much from this battle tbh..
a lot of light hits & misses..
Shia had better wording to me
& Proximity, Sonic lines were his standouts..
Closer could have hit to w/ revision.
Opener was a wasted me..
& last four missed

Blas - Boarder line was an almost
ShyA was almost too
closer I did before & better
You were more consistent here..
Not as many big misses or highs


V blas, but cointoss imo

[Flow]

Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right
tell me if I'm wrong but this feels an extremely lose card game play here and they are done to death an need to be Uber creative
Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you
Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to
they want to got away? You mean get away. Wording hurt this
Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved
So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved
not very hard hitting or clever but I'll pass this as ok
2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all
You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall
best one yet
Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude
Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you
doesn't work both ways an calling him shy is sub par in terms of sting
Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered
Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either
ok

Vs

We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help.
Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.."
I get the idea an well done for referring to recent claims for a personal angle but I felt this was lacking in execution an you could of done more with this
Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern
When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs
tbh I thought this was going to be fire. Should of gone
Uppercut meets poverty an that's what I'm on about/
Teeth clicking together like he spitting african, he's living with the hand to mouth //

Something like that would of been doper thr. Adds another element to it

If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping
Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in
I mean. Yeah I get it. Not the best execution of the idea brah
u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause..
Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off.
this was okish
I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans
Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance
again everything dope til the second half the punch. Fusion dance. Honestly bro that was the best thing you could come up with. Even something as weak as wanna be Zelph so bad he's offered a pound of flesh. Off top my head that but that actually could be dope with the right set up. Anyway yeah every thing good just poor choice of execution
Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast
These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas
nah pal

Tough call this one. Misses a plenty but potential from both. Tbh Shia looks like he will pick up on this slot quicker and has lots of potential. Worded alot of his stuff mostly in the set up nicely an could see him being enjoyed by the new cats style here. However I did feel blas had a bit more consistency even if they punches were meh in sting.

I'll re read again an edit in who I think won this in a few minutes

Having reread going to give the W to Blast for a slightly better consistency

[Jabari Black]

Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right

(Subtle wp in the set up was cool. I think the war card game concept is a little basic but executed very well. Solid opener)

Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you
Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to

(Lol this is pretty funny. I thought the flip was pretty clever)

Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved
So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved

(I like the concept but I think the execution woulda had to be damn near flawless to make this work because how you had to weave the Tesla concept into the him not wanting to fight in person concept. Ambitious punch but didn’t quite execute it imo)

2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all
You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall

(Lol this just okay imo. Got a lil chuckle but there’s been a lot of trump wall punches and some that have had boarder/border flips. Good execution but concept kinda basic. Okay overall)

Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude
Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you

(Cool. The wp isnt crazy but it’s cool. The horrible trait part only works one way. You set this up very well though - that’s what makes it land)

Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered
Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either

(This is pretty nice. Debate and the all evidence part and dope tie ins. I like the straw man flip. Ended the punch well. All around this is a nice, witty punch)


We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help.
Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.."

(This one is a bad miss. The set up didn’t really relate to the punch. The punch kinda doesn’t work and even still it just comes off very corny)

Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern
When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs

(It’s unclear what you trying to say here. Not sure what the set up was trying today either)

If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping
Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in

(Ha! I like the concept. If you coulda changed the “with the quick service” to something that ties in a lil better, this woulda been a haymaker. As is, this was still a good line though)

u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause..
Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off.

(Alright I like this one. Much needed pause in the set up lol. Pretty good flip. You flipped a pretty lengthy phrase. Overall good line)

I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans
Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance

(Eh this is okay at best. The concept is a little too basic here. Woulda need more tie ins and a better set up to make this land heavy)

Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast
These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas

(Good concept. I think the strongboxing (the ing part) made it a bit a stretch. I still like the contain a blast part. This was okay)

I got Blas taking this by a decent margin. He was just way more polished than Shia. Shia had some dope concepts but he had a REALLY bad miss with that opener and his execution was okay in most lines but sloppy on quite a few lines.

Big fan of the subtle punches from Blas. Very solid writer with a lot of witty punches. Only thing you were lacking were the big haymakers. Still, very solid consistent verse.

Mvgt Blas

[Blue Bayou]

Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right
liked the idea, but the "ur losing unless" part made this soft & not as threatening as it couldve been.. cool tho
Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you
Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to
lol i cant recall seeig a "one that got away" play tbh so i liked this
Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved
So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved
attempt needed rewording
2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all
You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall
lol dece
Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude
Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you
ehh, easy np not really feeling
Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered
Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either
good set-up and tie-ins.. fresh idea, this was cool


Vs


We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help.
Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.."
no.. if this was a swag attempt it failed
Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern
When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs
man this throw up sets flip couldve been fire with the click together idea but the way the punch was worded at the end killed it imo
If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping
Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in
nice, this was cool
u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause..
Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off.
wording was weird.. the prox mine idea was a cool attempt but this couldve been real dope
I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans
Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance
dont get it, sorry
Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast
These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas
cool idea, again tho this couldve been delivered a lot better


All in all this is pretty close imo, Shia had some cool ideas, Sonic was dope but wording hurt him alot to me and the concepts seemed under-developed...with some reworking of his concepts this mightve been a diff story, but Blas edged this to me with consistency and the better delivered verse.. props to both

Vote - Blas