John Dillinger vs Flow FLOW WINS BY NS

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 5

Due Thursday, Feb 21

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May God have mercy on your souls Juan Dillinger

[Flow]

bleak oi pussy I thought I was facing you - the fuck.

[Flow]

Ext

[bleak]

Juan Dillinger

[Flow]

I got bars but I don't see him showing bleak

[John Dillinger]

I got bars but I don't see him showing bleak

Drop them then

[Flow]

blade always on me, u gettin a slash after every sentence like jabaris lines
Im backslashing which figures its the end of the line for you

Roll up on yo street, you gettin cut like the end of a scene
leave you bleeding on a curb with your whole Hood talking like Lightning Mcqueen
he'll be screaming and scared, feels the fear when im near
dump john in the 'middle of nowhere' cus for Juan theres 'no W here'
n concepts arnt for sharin doofus, still sharkin when you do it
you just Ape what came before you man like the chart of evolution
i swig whiskey n swing machetes at any who question my powers
watch me put JD on the Rocks n leave him Armless like 127 hours
damn right im sour! but stealing from dudes is what faggots will do
shit, youve got more suspect pieces on the board then a game of Clue
pussy its true, make your own concepts an give ours a rest
he needs US cus Juans hitting a wall like Trumps a success
fuck wearing a vest i aim for the head an fill it with lead
ill leave his voice Horse when i get a Canter ahead

[Flow]

Fucking pussy!

[Blas]

right when he said "drop them then" it was kinda obvious what was about to go down,

Roll up on yo street, you gettin cut like the end of a scene
leave you bleeding on a curb with your whole Hood talking like Lightning Mcqueen
ok
he'll be screaming and scared, feels the fear when im near
dump john in the 'middle of nowhere' cus for Juan theres 'no W here'
ok concept
n concepts arnt for sharin doofus, still sharkin when you do it
you just Ape what came before you man like the chart of evolution
lolz
i swig whiskey n swing machetes at any who question my powers
watch me put JD on the Rocks n leave him Armless like 127 hours
w/ the JD on the rocks wordplay ur saying ur gonna get him drunk essentially as the double meaning? idk how hard that hits i love the concept tho
damn right im sour! but stealing from dudes is what faggots will do
shit, youve got more suspect pieces on the board then a game of Clue
very dope & i love the concept, ur best bar
pussy its true, make your own concepts an give ours a rest
he needs US cus Juans hitting a wall like Trumps a success
dece, relevant
fuck wearing a vest i aim for the head an fill it with lead
ill leave his voice Horse when i get a Canter ahead
dece

cool verse, clue line would have been LOTB most likely.. sry u got noshowed but cool shit.

[Resin M-I-C]

opener was nasty.. concepts are pretty tight.. good shit Flow

[Zaddy]

Roll up on yo street, you gettin cut like the end of a scene
leave you bleeding on a curb with your whole Hood talking like Lightning Mcqueen
ha this was nice
he'll be screaming and scared, feels the fear when im near
dump john in the 'middle of nowhere' cus for Juan theres 'no W here'
clever play on words, wasn’t the most hard hitting but was still cool
n concepts arnt for sharin doofus, still sharkin when you do it
you just Ape what came before you man like the chart of evolution
dope af lol
i swig whiskey n swing machetes at any who question my powers
watch me put JD on the Rocks n leave him Armless like 127 hours
i had to look this one up, pretty obscure movie reference but it’s decent at best for me
damn right im sour! but stealing from dudes is what faggots will do
shit, youve got more suspect pieces on the board then a game of Clue
damn this shit was nice lol
pussy its true, make your own concepts an give ours a rest
he needs US cus Juans hitting a wall like Trumps a success
alright pretty cool
fuck wearing a vest i aim for the head an fill it with lead
ill leave his voice Horse when i get a Canter ahead
terrible


Damn Flow, really good verse here. I think he said “post ur bars first” so he can decide if he wants to no show or not, and this made him say fuck it. Only 2 bars I didn’t like, closer was the weakest and I have the clue bar as LOTB. Good shit

[Sharp]

Drop them then

Gone

This was pretty good, Flow. I'll be more thorough in the mag, but that clue bar stands out the most to me as a dope punch that was very stylistically you

[DynamiCz]

Roll up on yo street, you gettin cut like the end of a scene
leave you bleeding on a curb with your whole Hood talking like Lightning Mcqueen

Oh this is fiya opener here!

he'll be screaming and scared, feels the fear when im near
dump john in the 'middle of nowhere' cus for Juan theres 'no W here'

This is creative

n concepts arnt for sharin doofus, still sharkin when you do it
you just Ape what came before you man like the chart of evolution

Lol ok-ish

i swig whiskey n swing machetes at any who question my powers
watch me put JD on the Rocks n leave him Armless like 127 hours

Coo here, not heavy on execution side tho

damn right im sour! but stealing from dudes is what faggots will do
shit, youve got more suspect pieces on the board then a game of Clue

Nice

pussy its true, make your own concepts an give ours a rest
he needs US cus Juans hitting a wall like Trumps a success

Lmao funny

fuck wearing a vest i aim for the head an fill it with lead
ill leave his voice Horse when i get a Canter ahead

Ok-ish to end it...


Good read Flow, Juan would have had a problem on his hand this week for sure. Good shit bro

[Ryno]

Lightning mcqueen
nowhere
clue
trump

this was a really solid verse from you. Shame JD didnt show, but i think you'd have won with this. good shit