View Full Version : Ryno vs Cynic CYNIC WINS
bleak
02-18-2019, 07:10 PM
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All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns
Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin
The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach
If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas
Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene
Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking
Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy
If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart
Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start
Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints
No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint
bleak
02-21-2019, 09:19 PM
Cynic
Cynic
02-21-2019, 10:58 PM
my bad been busy. i got you tomorrow
Cynic
02-22-2019, 11:06 PM
the 9? the 5th?
stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me
every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery
ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons
gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room
n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid
only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben
ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here
saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career
sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it
you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit
thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed
knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half?
Master Rock
02-23-2019, 12:54 AM
This is a tough one. These brothers put these gun bars straight at each other's dome. I felted the heat from the shots being fired. Ryno had a lyrical stylized flow the can take brothers by storm. Cynic took aim at Ryno and kept shooting and those bullets hit, personals, wordplay (nice). However, in regards to being written in a manner that shows a beast ripping flesh off its meal, Cynic you have been served to the Ryno.
Sinacog
02-23-2019, 05:47 AM
Pretty dope battle..from both here..a lot of good lines in this one..ryno..the sniper line was very well done..cynic..the hadouken line and reuben line were very well played..its down to preference for this one..but I got to give it to cynic by a smidgeoned..good battle guys..
V/ Cynic
Resin M-I-C
02-23-2019, 08:05 AM
useless was light
sniper was a hit, very nice
alien was pretty good
running start was nice
syn co pee dont work at all
vs
lottery is old af
link was a great concept but went a too simplistic route
reuben was ok
hadoukened ur whole career, ehh it was aight
aight Smollet was funny, liked that shit
closer was decent
solid quick battle, but one had more lines i fucked with
vote ryno
All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns
alright
Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin
The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach
alright lolz
If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas
Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene
ok
Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking
Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy
good concept, very poor execution
If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart
Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start
heh, cool
Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints
No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint
aight
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the 9? the 5th?
stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me
every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery
the concept is so fucking good i just don't think it's worded well
ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons
gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room
you mean light up the room? another dope concept
n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid
only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben
lmaooo if this hasn't been used it's cool, well worded too
ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here
saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career
hahaha pretty sick
sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it
you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit
heh ok
thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed
knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half?
pretty meh
Ryno was just ok to me here, had a few good lines but it was just nothing special. Cynic overall actually came quite dope to me & blue ball was LOTB for me. cool battle but Cynic go this IMO.
v/ Cynic
DynamiCz
02-23-2019, 11:41 AM
All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns
Fiya opener
Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin
The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach
lol funny, but light
If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas
Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene
Nice
Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking
Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy
Nice opener
If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart
Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start
This is ok
Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints
No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint
Nice name flip here imo
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the 9? the 5th?
stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me
every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery
Wording basic, but this was ok here
ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons
gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room
Nice
n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid
only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben
Lol funny, but extra light here on the hit
ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here
saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career
Lmaoooo hella funny
sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it
you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit
lol I took my smollett bar out this week, but this is coo
thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed
knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half?
This is a ok ender
Yooo cynic stepped it up here I see, good read from both. I got Ryno here tho, when he hit it did damage. Cynic had some nice lines and funny ones, but they were light on the damage.
V-Ryno
Saint
02-23-2019, 11:42 AM
I've got Ryno here. I liked the 'Smolett' but if idk.. Cynics verse didn't really do much for me. the wording felt lazy? idk
Hadouken line needed something a bit more but was relevant...same as the Ry bred line, imo. closer was ok. Smolett & Hadouken were the highlights
Ryno had three hits
alien, high jump
that sniper line was nicee to me
close in bars but i liked rynos as a whole better
Vote-Ryno
Zaddy
02-23-2019, 01:03 PM
All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns
solid opener here
Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin
The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach
lol alright
If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas
Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene
wasnt feelin the wording here but it was decent overall
Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking
Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy
kinda light but still ok
If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart
Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start
this was pretty cool
Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints
No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint
nah
Vs
the 9? the 5th?
stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me
every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery
pretty played here, flip is decent at best
ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons
gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room
gramatically incorrect
n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid
only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben
lmao this is so stupid it’s great
ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here
saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career
i liked this, nice
sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it
you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit
good again, dope
thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed
knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half?
decent closerr
Cynic
Tbh thought this was mad closer then the votes have gone. Hope others picked up on the rye bread. Very creative name play. Tbh I can see this going either way but I was (bar the opener) left with more of cynics bars in my mind. I think ryno had the execution mind, an it is very close, but I enjoyed the creativity from C. He gets my vote. Felt both had some played bars so I'm not going to hold either to that to keep it fair
Vote c
bleak
02-23-2019, 03:52 PM
4-3? Pending Zelph's vote or w/e up
Chamber
02-24-2019, 08:08 AM
All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns
^^^Nice opener
Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin
The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach
^^^nahh
If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas
Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene
^^^good
Sleep on ryno? I’ll blast the trey in his direction & leave this bum leaking
Once the 38 wake em ‘up,hill battle’ me to the death, & it aint gonna be easy
^^^miss
If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart
Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start
^^^nope old concept
Desert eagle stop ya blood flow, i’ll fire it off w/ no complaints
No restraint! Lets see syncope w/ a chest shot big enough to make em faint
^^^good concept wordin was soft tho
Vs
stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me
every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery
^^^ehh ok
ill make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons
gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room
^^^Nice
n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid
only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben
^^^ok i did ry bred but this was cool way to flip it
ya bars weak. last week showed you aint a soldier here
saw Blue ball on you for a KO n that shit hadoukened ur whole career
^^^fire
sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it
you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit
^^^doppee
thinkin you nice but ya trash. can get cut up for bein so gassed
knifell work fast. any hope for Ry? No. <-see how easy I can slice him in half?
^^^solid closer
V/cyn, this was a close battle but i think cynic had some nice shit tbh
the haduken & smollet lines hit hard imo, ryno had acouple nice bars to but
i felt cyn verse was better here tbh, props to both
Shia Labruh
02-24-2019, 12:55 PM
All ya verses look phony, we don’t believe u’ve got tools blastin ya bum
Homie ur punches r fkn ‘useless’, we don’t wanna hear about u poppin ya guns
Ya slut aims to get banged, she calls me cos i give her cock like its nothin
The broads a sniper, she’s in position all night to take shots on her stomach
If tools pop? He’ll start runnin, & this strap I’m dumpin from way overseas
Aim at this dweeb! Let that foreign monster burst through his chest, Alien scene
If a ‘shot put’ fear in ur heart, this long stick tearin ya bones apart
Think high jump, once the pole gets raised u’ll need a hell of a runnin’ start
Vs
stop it b. ya wins are robberies. trash gunbars got no shot wit me
every week ya numbers aint on the ball. thats losin the lottery
ll make ya pad a tomb. catch you in the crib wit all ya goons
gonna be Link in a dungeon. one stickll lit up the whole room
n girls say ya putrid. think ya got game? youre fuckin stupid
only way Ry bred with a ho is if shes makin me a Rueben
sayin youre dope now? one of the best? time to cool it
you Lyon, fag. ya achievement list so Smollett must be bullshit
This was a rly gd match. I'm actually torn on who I want to go for. In the miss depart ryon started losing steam on the second half of his verse after starting off hot. Cynic had more swag & flow wit the punches & bars tho which is what it honestly comes down to. Although cynic misses were a tad bit better.
Thank you for the great read guys.
V-cyn
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