Aero vs Dominate - DOM WINS

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[Dominate]

Check.

Let’s go 20?

[Aero]

Cool.

[Ghost1]

Lol wat fucking fantasy flute landed me here!?

,Aero u better show up for this match

Not even sure if this is real life.or.not

[Dominate]

Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead
You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses
You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1
Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand
I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag
15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines
If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside
You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever
But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch
She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has
I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing
You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings
This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning
Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious
This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes

[Aero]

We've been best buddies since 2003 & it comes to this

.
.

When you're out of town phone sexing your wife


We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me
She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy
Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee
Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew
I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate
I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade
Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya?
I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture
That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay
Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate
Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two
My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude
Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy
He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!

[Blas]

Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead
fucking dope
You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses
wording was meh imo but the concept was nasty
You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1
sick lol
Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand
I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag
pretty sick
15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines
If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside
loooool aight
You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever
lmfao cool wp
But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch
She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has
concept is dope but a female "groaning on u overtime" is the biggest concept reach of all time. still love the punch/concept tho
I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing
You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings
lmfao cool punch but idk about the whole setup just being u flexing. it's still cool tho
This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning
getting his diction airy seems like a reach but as usual cool wp
Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious
This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes
cool

..

We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me
dopeeeee
She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy
Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee
lol sick
Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew
quite dope
I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate
I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade
pretty light, it's aight
Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya?
I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture
lmfao aight
That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay
what on earth, i must be missing something here other than that uh oh thread
Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate
sick
Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two
My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude
idk how this will be accepted nowadays but this was lotb for me
Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy
He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!
lmfao so corny but it was funny

..

Idk man this is by far the closest battle I've read since being back. Dom came with some sick WP as usual and Aero also came with some sick WP but had more of a joke verse/some funny shit mixed in. Either way this was absurdly close and I doubt this battle will be a sweep in any means. Both verses were also pretty clean structurally as well. Dom had a few concept reaches to me and a lil wording problems throughout and Aero had that one bar I clearly did not understand. Overall I have to barely edge to Aero but it wouldn't surprise me if this went down to the wire. Two very dope verses & good shit.

v/ Aero

[Saint]

When you're out of town phone sexing your wife


We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me
Didnt like the intro "friends" part but this was good.
She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy
Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee
Cool current event line, worded good
Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew
Lol..cool personal, I didnt particularly like the reference here as it's a bit too straight forward
I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate
I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade
raw.. but a little too simple
Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya?
I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture
I liked this, I just read Blue line but it didnt take away from the concept to me
That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay
Didnt care for this one
Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate
i think ive seen this but I dont recall where offhand, this was cool & setup well
Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two
My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude
straight
Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy
He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!
was ok, feels a bit corny tho.


VS

Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead
I've seen this the past season, I think Schade did it. But you had no way of knowing...this hit. Solid opener
You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses
good personal, tied to two things pretty well.
You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1
Individually the wordplays are played but the tieins helped here imo
Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand
I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag
This was fresh. Good meta tie in and humor in the line was done well
15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines
If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside
Hmm it's ok...clever but not really hardhitting or funny to me...but it wasnt bad at all. It is still a creative take on a 'trailblazer' compound word.
You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever
'Cauterize' wp feels old to me and the flip wasnt anything fresh enough to give it a pass for me tbh
But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch
She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has
Wording is good here, setup helped this as well but I just didnt feel this as a personal or wp as much
I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing
You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings
Cool. I had a safe space bar years back but this was a good flip & hit
This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning
This was creative...not sure saying his diction airy means anything but I know it's just the wp for the searching for meaning part. Points for creativity
Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious
This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes
Solid wordplay. Wharf Aer was good to me

Tough call. I liked Aeros humor & crispness in execution and I liked Doms wordplay & personals. BOTH had high hits, equally as good wording & executing their concepts well. I think though Dom was a bit more versatile here. I enjoyed his read a bit better tbh. A couple of Aeros lines that werent heavy like the "Uhoh line' and Katana Blade were written well but felt a bit dry in terms of a good punch. Not to say Dom didnt have a couple passable wordplays. Aero had that opener, Austin & Hit Sack. Dom started solid, cooled a bit in the middle *& finished solid again. I can see how this can be close depending on preference. I think Dominate resonated w/ me more though. Good battle BOTW probably.

vote - Dominate

[Sinacog]

Dominate -

you have the written composition of a vet here. you're truly skilled in wording and phrasing..I enjoy your lines..the cauterize line was fire..niice one..

Aero -

Good verse here man..I enjoyed the steve irwin line and the katana line..you came well equipped..

Overall - dope battle here..but dominate vet skills long lasted him in this battle..good battle guys..

V/ Dominate

[Resin M-I-C]

questionnnaire was niiiice, solid wording
tag team was statement ish
d composed has been done, decent twist
spring collection was ok
sweatervest was corny to me
cauterize was cool.. not bad
wasnt feelin groan
safe space was aight, everything intertwined
i wana like diction airy bc the execution was flawless but nahh, not fuckin with that wp
closer was a stretch

vs

toy story i was actually waitn for a gun bar lol.. this was a lil light
zion works, nice
irwin was ok
liked katana blade
cock and ball torture was a pause
uhoh second pause, ummm
golden gate was nasty
australia was light
wasnt feelin the closer


this was wp heavy.. dom was really up and down, he had some jabs with the best line being the opener.. couple lines aero dropped i wasnt fuckin with, but his highs were alot better with golden gate the lotb.. yeah, he gets it even when dom dropped 1 more bar

v aero

[Ryno]

Dominate: This was a good read from you. I like your wording. Questionaire was
cool. Tag verse was a decent personal. D composed is an old idea but the
personal tie in made it ok. Haven’t seen cauterize before, the flip was ok. Safe
Space was original. I dig it. Warfare was a save closer. Good verse.

Aero: nice concise bars here. Zion was nice. Irwin was a nasty. Tie ins made katana ok. Hitting the sack was cool. I liked golden gate. Descriptive. Thought
Australia was decent.

Overall: Aero takes it. On first read I had Don but I thought Aeros concept
Were fresher. More entertaining. Good read, this a close battle

[Jabari Black]

Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead

(Heard similar concept - a scantron fill something with led scheme - so this didn’t feel the freshest. Executed well though)

You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses

(I like this. You weaved two solid personal angles together well)

You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1

(I think the D composed, the carrion, and dead meat flips would have been just okay by themselves. When you put them together, it’s a solid scheme though. This wasn’t heavy but it’s pretty good. I like the personal dig too)

Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand
I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag

(Spring collection/dress like a fag works but it’s not the cleanest flip. The Spring Collection phrase also seems a little awkward for the making him pay meaning. Overall this was decent. Execution kept it from being a miss)

15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines
If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside

(The trail blazer flip was light imo. I didn’t care for this line)

You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever

(Good. The wp was slick af. Tied it back into the punch pretty well)

But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch
She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has

(Lol thought this wordplay was slick too. Solid wording here. Pretty good)

I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing
You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings

(This works but I thought the safe space flip was kinda basic. This one is just okay)

This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning

(Son...this is nasty. The set up damn near perfect - “no purpose in breathing” sets up both the throat shot part and the searching for meaning part. Diction airy was dope to me. Yeah I fuck with this)

Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious
This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes

(I’m missing the punch/wp here. I’m not getting the pushing you off it part)






When you're out of town phone sexing your wife


We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me

(Lol the flip was light but the humor is there. I think this one is decent)

She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy
Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee

(This works but the association is kinda loose imo. Hard to explain but it’s like he came out his shoe and I guess he went down on bender knee but those not the phrases you think of when you think of the Zion shoe incident. Hope that explains it well, but pretty much it works but didnt feel like the cleanest flip)

Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew

(This is pretty good. I think his death or bday or something was recent so the reference feels fresh. Personal jab. I do like Dom’s carried you punch better but this one’s pretty good)

I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate
I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade

(Yep this is good too. The run by him flip is good)

Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya?
I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture

(Pause. Getting dominated by his mom is a very weird angle to take. The flip does work though. Set up coulda been better. Ay if this the route you wanna take in the battle, go ahead - the wording was fine. I guess this was solid)

That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay

(Lmfao pause but this funny af. Technically speaking, the last bar was better. This was funny though)

Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate

(This is nasty. Red beams over a body is nice in itself but ending it with The Golden Gate entendre is dope af)

Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two
My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude

(I think this was ambitious but wording wasn’t clean enough and it felt forced/stretched. You got Austin to Aust which feels reachin, then you got rail ya/railing which is kind of a stretch too. I like the ambition but this was gonna be a tough concept to make work)

Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy
He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!

(I like that’s you staying true to your style. The the wp seem so corny and stretched that it kinda works in your favor. Adds to the humor or the whole bar. I thought this was light but it landed)


Ay this battle was fire. Dom’s dictionary and aero’s golden gate bars were disgusting. First time Ive read Dom before and was impressed. It’s always dope to see Aero make an appearance mix it up in the ring and he was dope here.

Battle was very close. It’s going to come down to a combination of preference and how you judge certain bars. I think Dom had a miss or two but overall had a very clean verse. All the wp came off smooth, creative concepts, personals, overall just a very well written verse. Aero came with a very consistent verse as well. Had some personal angles as well, creativity, and the humor is what sets aero apart from any other battler here.

This one’s close. I think aero had less misses but I think Dom had a very clean verse and a lot of very heavy punches. I got Dom narrowly edging this one.

Mvgt Dominate

[Shia Labruh]

Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead
You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses
You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1
You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever
This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning

This is some gd writing while staying strong wit wp you successfully accomplished. That diction airy bar was nasty. Pretty much well written verse all the way through utilizing a lot of different techniques. You have a few elements to your setup/ punches which allows you to take different directions on how you want to execute. Nice.

Vs


We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me
Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew
That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay
Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate

The run by him was coo, but came off a bit simplistic. I like the bar, but I didn't love it. This was a dope verse as well but had a couple wtf moments. You have a lot of sex bars lol. Some were funny, but others make me wonder what you're into irl. No judgement.

I feel D adds different levels while staying aggressive in his style. Its actually intriguing to read. Aero has humor which also a quality I like but just felt dominate had the better 2 if I had to pick one.
Great read guys but
Vote- dominate

[DynamiCz]

Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead

Nice opener

You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses

I think this personal was well put together

You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1

Ehh, think the wording here a little out of place

Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand
I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag

Ok, think the concept was nice, but the execution lacked abit

15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines
If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside

Lol this was fire imo

You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever

Nice again

But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch
She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has

Didn't to much feel this one

I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing
You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings

Ehhh, very light hit

This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning

Nice

Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious
This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes

This is a miss only cause it kinda like your almost making a statement in there, with no punch executed


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We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me

Lol funny & fiya

She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy
Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee

Nice hit again here and very current

Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew

I like this, solid wording too

I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate
I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade

Light on the execution here

Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya?
I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture

Didn't to much like this one

That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay

Lol Nahhh Aero

Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate

This is nice, picking back up

Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two
My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude

Light jab here, could have set it up to hit way better

Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy
He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!

Nahhh


This was a good read here, took me a couple reads, but I got to go with Dom with at least being more consistent. Both had fiya highlights, but Aero started drifting near the end which his misses came off lower then Dom misses. Good shit props to both


V-Dom

[Aero]

5-3 thanks to all who voted you’ll be receiving positive rep from me. Jabari had most in-depth breakdown thanks.

Good job Dom!

[Dominate]

You too brother. Always a pleasure.