Useless vs BodySnatcher - BODY WINS

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 6

Due Thursday, Feb 28

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls
Useless if u duck u better not show ur face here again imo

[BodySnatcher]

16

[Useless]

BodySnatcher got 16 ready drop tonight

[Useless]

U done fucked up letting them words fly out ur stupid mouth...
Pull the 9, Pew pew. Silencer kill him quieter than a church mouse.
Wanna talk guns, imma guerilla. Strait crooked son...
Crawl thru the moss, burger meat in ur hand...now ur face look like some.
Fuck guns I bring ur writing into question, n how I wanna hurt u...
Please stay away from the useless plays, n I'll stay away from body...like most girls do.
Best get a restraining order, these fists got plenty motivation...
Brake ur jaw on sight. So if I break 100 feet his phone recieves a notification.
This dudes gun bars are a charade, he a pedophile...
But I do believe he be running traps...so bodysnatch him a child.
U next to get gored son, his fgt txt is just boredom...
This dude ain't interested in Snatcher any other womans sexual organ.
Leave this creep bleeding cuz every bar he write is a decievement...
We didnt say u couldnt use gun bars, sorry BS we just don't believe it.
Yall devolving txt. Fuck u, zelph and the rest of the lot...
When a voting ring of fire is the only thing that's kept yall hot.

[BodySnatcher]

U took the 'mascara' concept from The Real Spit at RB and used it against Black Mask....

Tisk tisk


He's been stealin concepts...no shovel but I got dirt fast,
Now his life stories going from 'happy ending to busted for cheated' like Robert Kraft
This connection to ur dome is for the decption in ur tone,
So when I leave these bullets 'ringing in & out of Use'...it's not bad reception on his phone
It's The Gloves or shot from long range. I'll make'em choose,
Either way its a bodybag & I'm 'pullin the zipper up from his feet' like Gary Payton shoes
On a sidenote ur bitch is a big hoe. I was all up in her ribs bro!
For christ sake she even let this Magic Bus inside her...& she wasn't watching a kids show
People'll panic when I shoot but if there's any harm induce,
I'lI just flash a weapons permit so there's no questions about why I got this 'firearm to Use'
Ur soft as a teddy but soon we won't have to share air,
Cuz this is the moment I leave ur 'heart outside ur chest'...like the symbol for a Care Bear
U hate gun bars so I won't clap this chrome lead,
But u can bet I'ma let the end of the strap 'knot UP ur dome' until u resemble a Conehead
This homo'd snitch on himself. Dialin Z... in a rush he'd call it,
Cuz he's the type of 'fag to hate crime unless he's the one behind it'...call him Jussie Smollet

[Ryno]

Useless: I expected more from you. I’ve seen you drop way better verses on RB.Tbh this verse as a whole seems like a cop out. Either you didn’t REALLY try or it’s the “voting ring” excuse you’re baiting to use. As is, I thought the most girls do, BS, & snatcher lines were mildly clever. The opener & closer were pretty bad.

Bodysnatcher: Robert Kraft was nice & current. Bad reception & fire arm to use were good nps. Loved the Payton line, I’m a sucker for sports bars lol. Not a lot of gun play this verse but your ideas & execution were better. Good drop.

Overall: Bodysnatcher takes this. Concepts and effort were all around better

[Zaddy]

U done fucked up letting them words fly out ur stupid mouth...
Pull the 9, Pew pew. Silencer kill him quieter than a church mouse.
terrible wtf
Wanna talk guns, imma guerilla. Strait crooked son...
Crawl thru the moss, burger meat in ur hand...now ur face look like some.
this is not ok
Fuck guns I bring ur writing into question, n how I wanna hurt u...
Please stay away from the useless plays, n I'll stay away from body...like most girls do.
aright
Best get a restraining order, these fists got plenty motivation...
Brake ur jaw on sight. So if I break 100 feet his phone recieves a notification.
ok again, had potential for more
This dudes gun bars are a charade, he a pedophile...
But I do believe he be running traps...so bodysnatch him a child.
god no
U next to get gored son, his fgt txt is just boredom...
This dude ain't interested in Snatcher any other womans sexual organ.
man nah
Leave this creep bleeding cuz every bar he write is a decievement...
We didnt say u couldnt use gun bars, sorry BS we just don't believe it.
can you spell played?
Yall devolving txt. Fuck u, zelph and the rest of the lot...
When a voting ring of fire is the only thing that's kept yall hot.
ryno was right. You’re definitely baiting with this verse. I mean you’re trash either way but this battle was so you can blame the voting lol cool


Vs


He's been stealin concepts...no shovel but I got dirt fast,
Now his life stories going from 'happy ending to busted for cheated' like Robert Kraft
lol this was good, but you shoulda said cheating instead of cheated
This connection to ur dome is for the decption in ur tone,
So when I leave these bullets 'ringing in & out of Use'...it's not bad reception on his phone
ehh not really feelin it
It's The Gloves or shot from long range. I'll make'em choose,
Either way its a bodybag & I'm 'pullin the zipper up from his feet' like Gary Payton shoes
lol dopeeeee
On a sidenote ur bitch is a big hoe. I was all up in her ribs bro!
For christ sake she even let this Magic Bus inside her...& she wasn't watching a kids show
pretty cool, coulda been worded harsher
People'll panic when I shoot but if there's any harm induce,
I'lI just flash a weapons permit so there's no questions about why I got this 'firearm to Use'
nah
Ur soft as a teddy but soon we won't have to share air,
Cuz this is the moment I leave ur 'heart outside ur chest'...like the symbol for a Care Bear
decent
U hate gun bars so I won't clap this chrome lead,
But u can bet I'ma let the end of the strap 'knot UP ur dome' until u resemble a Conehead
nah not feeling this
This homo'd snitch on himself. Dialin Z... in a rush he'd call it,
Cuz he's the type of 'fag to hate crime unless he's the one behind it'...call him Jussie Smollet
soild closer


Useless had 2 ok lines and the rest was god awful tbh. Sorry but I’m sure everyone will tell you the same lol. Body, wasn’t the best verse of yours but you definitely won it by a landslide. Robert Kraft and Gary Payton were my favorites.


Vote BodySnatcher

[Sinacog]

U done fucked up letting them words fly out ur stupid mouth...
Pull the 9, Pew pew. Silencer kill him quieter than a church mouse.

This was actually pretty cool. I enjoyed this line. Cool things here.

Wanna talk guns, imma guerilla. Strait crooked son...
Crawl thru the moss, burger meat in ur hand...now ur face look like some.

This was okay. Could be a bit more clean.

Fuck guns I bring ur writing into question, n how I wanna hurt u...
Please stay away from the useless plays, n I'll stay away from body...like most girls do.

This needs to be a bit cleaner. This was cool for what it was, of course.

Best get a restraining order, these fists got plenty motivation...
Brake ur jaw on sight. So if I break 100 feet his phone recieves a notification.

lmao, this was cool. A nice bar.

This dudes gun bars are a charade, he a pedophile...
But I do believe he be running traps...so bodysnatch him a child.

This was cool for what it was. I conjure.

U next to get gored son, his fgt txt is just boredom...
This dude ain't interested in Snatcher any other womans sexual organ.

This was cool. I kind of liked this one, lol

Leave this creep bleeding cuz every bar he write is a decievement...
We didnt say u couldnt use gun bars, sorry BS we just don't believe it.

lmao, this was cool. I enjoy this.


Yall devolving txt. Fuck u, zelph and the rest of the lot...
When a voting ring of fire is the only thing that's kept yall hot.

This was cool. Nice one.

He's been stealin concepts...no shovel but I got dirt fast,
Now his life stories going from 'happy ending to busted for cheated' like Robert Kraft

This was okay, could be a bit better. But I liked it for what it was.

This connection to ur dome is for the decption in ur tone,
So when I leave these bullets 'ringing in & out of Use'...it's not bad reception on his phone

This was cool. Nice one.

It's The Gloves or shot from long range. I'll make'em choose,
Either way its a bodybag & I'm 'pullin the zipper up from his feet' like Gary Payton shoes

This was a cool okay bar. Nice.

On a sidenote ur bitch is a big hoe. I was all up in her ribs bro!
For christ sake she even let this Magic Bus inside her...& she wasn't watching a kids show

lmao, this was nice. Cool bar.

People'll panic when I shoot but if there's any harm induce,
I'lI just flash a weapons permit so there's no questions about why I got this 'firearm to Use'

This was okay, I presume. Could be better.

Ur soft as a teddy but soon we won't have to share air,
Cuz this is the moment I leave ur 'heart outside ur chest'...like the symbol for a Care Bear

lmao, your best bar. Nice one.

U hate gun bars so I won't clap this chrome lead,
But u can bet I'ma let the end of the strap 'knot UP ur dome' until u resemble a Conehead

This was okay, I presume. Could be better.

This homo'd snitch on himself. Dialin Z... in a rush he'd call it,
Cuz he's the type of 'fag to hate crime unless he's the one behind it'...call him Jussie Smollet'

This was okay in a ways. Could be better.


Overall - dope match guys, but I thought bodysnatcher came more equipped for a win here. Cool battle, that was a nice read.



V/ Bodysnatcher

[Shia Labruh]

Fuck guns I bring ur writing into question, n how I wanna hurt u...
Please stay away from the useless plays, n I'll stay away from body...like most girls do.

Vs

This connection to ur dome is for the decption in ur tone,
So when I leave these bullets 'ringing in & out of Use'...it's not bad reception on his phone
It's The Gloves or shot from long range. I'll make'em choose,
Either way its a bodybag & I'm 'pullin the zipper up from his feet' like Gary Payton shoes

Cool match up guys.
It didn't build up to the hype I thought it would, but both of you dropped early, so I'm sure it wasn't your strongest efforts so I feel many should put that into consideration when reading.
Bodysnatch had the stronger of the 2 wit better worded verse & a bit more effort even in the non quotes.
Useless read as if he threw something up just to. I didn't see too much motivation in what was being read.

V- bodysnatch

[Resin M-I-C]

pew pew lol.. it’s been done too
burger meat was ehhh
body/girls do was ok
wording issues with notification line, man that coulda been nasty
bodysnatch was too simple
snatcher nahhh
bs was ok
ring of fire was liiight

vs

cheating was aight
reception coulda been nasty, ok execution
gary payton had shoes? lol had shawn kemps myself.. this was cool
magic bus was ur first miss
fire arm was good again
care bare was a lil light
conehead was decent
smollet was good


useless had a couple concepts, but body constructs pretty good verses.. he was jabbing here, consistant and got it on pts

v body

[Sharp]

Fuck guns I bring ur writing into question, n how I wanna hurt u...
Please stay away from the useless plays, n I'll stay away from body...like most girls do.
Best get a restraining order, these fists got plenty motivation...
Brake ur jaw on sight. So if I break 100 feet his phone recieves a notification.

That restraining order almost work. Kind of sloppy. I'll elaborate in the mag, but the nameflips were barely nameflips. Just working a part of Body's name into a sentence. Is this a move to get body to battle at rb somehow?





It's The Gloves or shot from long range. I'll make'em choose,
Either way its a bodybag & I'm 'pullin the zipper up from his feet' like Gary Payton shoes
On a sidenote ur bitch is a big hoe. I was all up in her ribs bro!
For christ sake she even let this Magic Bus inside her...& she wasn't watching a kids show
Ur soft as a teddy but soon we won't have to share air,
Cuz this is the moment I leave ur 'heart outside ur chest'...like the symbol for a Care Bear


I was picky here but these are my standouts. Magic bus probably works for me since I work in an elementary school lol. Most of the stuff I didn't quote was light but okay. I would've liked to see you guys get more personal, but BodySnatcher was just better with technical writing details.

V/BodySnatcher