Flow vs Veritas - DOUBLE DQ

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 6

Due Thursday, Feb 28

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

[Flow]

Your not incredible bleak what's happening here I think there was a admin error.

[veritas]

10

[veritas]

linking concepts for Jabari Black

I’m in a red truck with the goons, mobbed up, the boss of the killers, the GOAT of the battle,
You can’t handle the stress of cooking this beef, panic and pass out, that’s Tony Soprano.
U a snitch, the type to get caught missing the lesson, then turn stressing, and sue the class
Little rat is all pussy with a big mouth, so I take him to the river and drop him in it, that’s Billy Bass.
I smile wider than Meadow’s ass when the bat leaves brains flowing, turn your skull to an air duct
Keep hitting you, cranium a mess, now ya head is two-toned, that’ Paulie’s haircut.
I’m abusive, you submissive, you stay eating coochie like Uncle Jackie, me, I just tote the hami
Young made man, slapping your bitch to the ground after she’s sniffing a round, that’s Christopher Moltisanti
My genius is unparalleled; I write bars like none other, I ain't in a box at home or the Office, the champ forever, oh, and just so you felt me….
You gonna see that when it comes down to the Wire, in this Game of Thrones, I’m taking souls with a stone face, that’s Dr. Melfi.

[Flow]

A religious psychologist..so in both ways you prey on insecurities?

Listen James..

at this point id just leave, after 20 yrs an you still repeatedly fail
you don't have the Prestige, but in one shot ill make this Christian Bale
pale bald head, ginger moustache, bro id probably off it...
..if the sign outside my psychologist office read "Dr Robotnik"
The nine will burst, my words bringing heat to ignite a verse..
n if V for Vendetta ill rub the sticks together an show him Fireworks
struggled last week after 2 decades of writing in private?!
ironic we all consider Sin bad but it was you who robbed him like a pirate
Summoned all of his Faith to beat Sin, bro thats final fantasy ten!
except they realised in the end that their religion was actually pretend

[Flow]

Sharp bleak open

[Aero]

Veritas:

I’m in a red truck with the goons, mobbed up, the boss of the killers, the GOAT of the battle,
You can’t handle the stress of cooking this beef, panic and pass out, that’s Tony Soprano.
so this was probably a scene in the sopranos, ok. didn't too much care for the set up
U a snitch, the type to get caught missing the lesson, then turn stressing, and sue the class
Little rat is all pussy with a big mouth, so I take him to the river and drop him in it, that’s Billy Bass.
TBilly Bass concept could've been good
I smile wider than Meadow’s ass when the bat leaves brains flowing, turn your skull to an air duct
Keep hitting you, cranium a mess, now ya head is two-toned, that’ Paulie’s haircut.
that's too many THAT's so and so lines
I’m abusive, you submissive, you stay eating coochie like Uncle Jackie, me, I just tote the hami
Young made man, slapping your bitch to the ground after she’s sniffing a round, that’s Christopher Moltisanti
lol you wont stop will you
My genius is unparalleled; I write bars like none other, I ain't in a box at home or the Office, the champ forever, oh, and just so you felt me….
You gonna see that when it comes down to the Wire, in this Game of Thrones, I’m taking souls with a stone face, that’s Dr. Melfi.
yeah this is no good and long. lol good try though



Flow:

at this point id just leave, after 20 yrs an you still repeatedly fail
you don't have the Prestige, but in one shot ill make this Christian Bale
alright
pale bald head, ginger moustache, bro id probably off it...
..if the sign outside my psychologist office read "Dr Robotnik"
I don't get it and I'm not looking it up
The nine will burst, my words bringing heat to ignite a verse..
n if V for Vendetta ill rub the sticks together an show him Fireworks
alright
struggled last week after 2 decades of writing in private?!
ironic we all consider Sin bad but it was you who robbed him like a pirate
good personal, cool line
Summoned all of his Faith to beat Sin, bro thats final fantasy ten!
except they realised in the end that their religion was actually pretend
no thank you


Props to you both for a good showing. V was way too repetitive with the THAT's lines. Didn't think they were executed well. Flow was simplistic but cleaner.

MVGT Flow