Cynic vs Incredible - CYNIC WINS

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 6

Due Thursday, Feb 28

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
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[Incredible]

12, probably 10

[Cynic]

10s good

[Incredible]

10 sent to bleak Sharp whenever your ready Cynic


Ext granted if needed here

[Sharp]

10 sent to bleak Sharp whenever your ready Cynic


Ext granted if needed here
I'm Cynic lmaooo

gg, well played Inc

Swear I didn't read a word of that verse if your tryna rematch later. I owe you a proper battle now

I'll elaborate in the next mag, all, but let it be known asap that this was just for fun, bleak matched me based on record, same as anyone else, and I would not have signed into the playoffs if I had somehow qualified

[Incredible]

If it's a show down, the automatic shine, yours? flop,,, not mine
Sprayin until I see a solid red, like I'm a city worker repainting a stop sign
Your bitch treat me like a God now, it is what it seems pal
Said she like it quick n' easy, guess I made her not want the Cynic route
Revolver spin like some slicks, make it click &&& put you in a urn clown
Made it sequel but that smoke billowing up ain't from me doing a burn out
Talk shit and I'll find you fast bet money I keep it a stack
You'll see me up close on your front porch like that new doorbell app
I saw the mag sharp thinks your on the right path
Alias acts never lead to the road of greatness, won't gain enough weight to even make a track

[Sharp]

Got you tomorrow

[Cynic]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_T3Z15eZZQI



i sonned you on this already, but this shit wasnt inspired holmes
your mags cant drive activity if theyre an activity for your drive home
mod to mod, you aint done shit. sayin otherwise takes balls, son
keep it 100? your best contribution is doing that for Allen’s W column
im mean n direct. your verses generic, i swear it, the shit aint hard
next to my personal gift, youre the wad of singles in ya kids unsigned bday card
you fuckin peaked n you still suck. if i was you id be flippin annoyed
this is your summit. n its amounting to nothing like that shit in Hanoi
ill run up on Inc. clean kill cuz hes trash wit them gun lines
when i spray, this garbage gettin wiped off the fuckin map. Mario Sunshine

[Blas]

If it's a show down, the automatic shine, yours? flop,,, not mine
Sprayin until I see a solid red, like I'm a city worker repainting a stop sign
too simple
Your bitch treat me like a God now, it is what it seems pal
Said she like it quick n' easy, guess I made her not want the Cynic route
really simple again but ok i guess
Revolver spin like some slicks, make it click &&& put you in a urn clown
Made it sequel but that smoke billowing up ain't from me doing a burn out
erm...no
Talk shit and I'll find you fast bet money I keep it a stack
You'll see me up close on your front porch like that new doorbell app
lmao
I saw the mag sharp thinks your on the right path
Alias acts never lead to the road of greatness, won't gain enough weight to even make a track
..ok

..

i sonned you on this already, but this shit wasnt inspired holmes
your mags cant drive activity if theyre an activity for your drive home
lolz
mod to mod, you aint done shit. sayin otherwise takes balls, son
keep it 100? your best contribution is doing that for Allen’s W column
cool
im mean n direct. your verses generic, i swear it, the shit aint hard
next to my personal gift, youre the wad of singles in ya kids unsigned bday card
meh
you fuckin peaked n you still suck. if i was you id be flippin annoyed
this is your summit. n its amounting to nothing like that shit in Hanoi
dece
ill run up on Inc. clean kill cuz hes trash wit them gun lines
when i spray, this garbage gettin wiped off the fuckin map. Mario Sunshine
cool

v/ sharp, wasn't close. incred is way too simplistic. start trying to at least use some wordplay or try to make everything less obvious. sharp had some cool shit and it was enough.

[Useless]

If it's a show down, the automatic shine, yours? flop,,, not mine
Sprayin until I see a solid red, like I'm a city worker repainting a stop sign
...ehh, needed better wording....
Your bitch treat me like a God now, it is what it seems pal
Said she like it quick n' easy, guess I made her not want the Cynic route
...almost, might be an accent thing. Good np...
Revolver spin like some slicks, make it click &&& put you in a urn clown
Made it sequel but that smoke billowing up ain't from me doing a burn out
...forced...
Talk shit and I'll find you fast bet money I keep it a stack
You'll see me up close on your front porch like that new doorbell app
...coulda done more with it...
I saw the mag sharp thinks your on the right path
Alias acts never lead to the road of greatness, won't gain enough weight to even make a track
...nah...

Vs

i sonned you on this already, but this shit wasnt inspired holmes
your mags cant drive activity if theyre an activity for your drive home
...dead. lotb...
mod to mod, you aint done shit. sayin otherwise takes balls, son
keep it 100? your best contribution is doing that for Allen’s W column
...damn...
im mean n direct. your verses generic, i swear it, the shit aint hard
next to my personal gift, youre the wad of singles in ya kids unsigned bday card
...ehhhh......
you fuckin peaked n you still suck. if i was you id be flippin annoyed
this is your summit. n its amounting to nothing like that shit in Hanoi
...I can tell a teacher wrote this bar...
ill run up on Inc. clean kill cuz hes trash wit them gun lines
when i spray, this garbage gettin wiped off the fuckin map. Mario Sunshine
...ok...


Overall: inc coming along and getting better but cynic first 2 bars killed it. Rest of his verse wasnt bad


V. Cynic

[Saint]

Inc was better than last time i read his work.
cynic route was eh ok. had some wording issues to workout.

liked cynics first two, & last two were pretty cool as well.
yeaa this wasn't that close to me..

V - Cynic

[Sinacog]

This was a okay battle..both had some okay lines here..sharp..the mario sunshine line was pretty cooll..incredible had some cool lines as-well..but I have go give it to sharp/cynic here got better wordplay and punches..here..

[Resin M-I-C]

solid red a lil too simple
cynic route was aight, funny
burn out coulda been dope but wording was an issue
doorbell app almost hit, another tight concept but needes more creativity
didnt fuck with the closer

vs

driving home was funny
allen was cool, good personal
bday was ehhh
hanoi was aight
wasnt feeling the closer


there were execution issues with Inc’s shit, better wording coulda turned things around for him, first 2 of Sharp’s verse were lotb and copped it for em

v Sharp