Week 1: Ryno Vs Barcotic BARC WINS

[Flow]

Week One

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

Ryno
Barcotic

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

[Ryno]

Ur the mythical beast w/ the hype? I’ll leave ya dome so swole bro
Cos it’s nothing for me to ‘Snap a legendary head’ like a Lochness photo

[Barcotic]

lisssten. i brought a 4 inch shiv, its such a cutter
ironically you'll see Ryno hide BEFORE i skin the mf.

[Blas]

both punches were very ok/simple, preference is towards barc bc his was worded a bit slicker and just hit slightly harder to me. very avg stuff.

v/ barc

[Lenox]

Snap a legendary head was whatever, wasn’t feeling it. Shoulda just dropped a mean sports bar, odd.

Ryno hide was simple but slick.

BARCOTIC

[DynamiCz]

Ur the mythical beast w/ the hype? I’ll leave ya dome so swole bro
Cos it’s nothing for me to ‘Snap a legendary head’ like a Lochness photo

This was nice, only thing I seen a couple of lochness concepts which takes the damage given to the opponent away a notch. Still props how u executed it up tho


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lisssten. i brought a 4 inch shiv, its such a cutter
ironically you'll see Ryno hide BEFORE i skin the mf.

Had to read a couple times, this was simple but nice and effective. The ryno hide flip was fresher for my eyes. Simple again, but effective


Nice 1-2 from both, I got Barc here cause the concept was fresh vs the lochness bar which was still executed nice, but I seen the concept a lot

V-Barc

[Miss Netcees]

Both punchines could have been better but I'll give to Barc

[zelti]

Ryno tbh I wasn’t feeling your bar too much this week, the concept had potential but idk maybe it was how you executed it which hurt it. Barcs was decent and did the job here.

Vote Barcotic

[Destroyer]

Got Barc here
Ryno thatbwasnt bad it just seemed like it could be dropped against anyone who’s been battling awhile
Barc gets props for relating to who he was battling in his punch

V/barc

[Real Spit]

Ryno.. I don't like comparison punches, and I can't stand when people use quotes because IMO it means the wording wasn't effective enough to ensure the concept takes root w/the reader.. Bar was a little lazy here w/wording but it still hit somewhat, so v/Bar

[MMLP]

This is a lot closer than ppl think, I switched my vote after a couple of reads

barc wins, gotta respect his wordplay and ultimately his directness!

[Suthaveli]

I actually like ryno punch. I thought it was pretty dope, but I've nvr seen it before.
Barc was harsher because it was more direct imo which is why
Mvgt- barc

[White LGI]

I actually liked ryno better...
The skin line was good but ryno just hit harder to me...barc shit was better put together but ryno was more entertaining
Vote ryno

[sral]

Barc was dope to word it that way, felt it connect a lot more

[Flow]

10 1 barc