Week 1: Superboy Estar Legend vs JEM Super Wins

[Flow]

Week One

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

JEM
superboy estar legend

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

[JEM]

Two.

[superboy estar legend]

i'll lay your ass to waste and leave you buried in the grave
make a headstone outta jems so u can have "RIP" engraved

[JEM]

Sure.

Don’t care if you Super, boy.. I got clips to feed ya for a long time
Cuz you catching bullet, after bullet, like receivers at the combine

[Blas]

superboy had a cool double meaning and i haven't seen the engraved flip on gems so i thought it was nice, JEM this was ok i think its a bit straight forward though for my liking, it was just too simple although obviously it isn't bad.

v/ superboy, think his was more complex and i liked the name flip/wp

[sral]

superboy for me here

[BodySnatcher]

I got Jem here sue me...both were short sweet and simple. I like both but Jems hit home for me

[White LGI]

I liked jem in a close one

[Maximus]

liked superboy's wordplay a little more than jem's
v/ superboy

[John Dillinger]

Feeling JEM more, lil more direct. Superstar coulda done more with the gem nameplay

[DynamiCz]

i'll lay your ass to waste and leave you buried in the grave
make a headstone outta jems so u can have "RIP" engraved

This was nice.. wording was there along with execution as well. Creativity was there as well with the name play


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Don’t care if you Super, boy.. I got clips to feed ya for a long time
Cuz you catching bullet, after bullet, like receivers at the combine

This was coo, I just seen this concept done a lot. Not taking away from you here wording was there along with nice execution.


Good shit from both, I'm going to edge Superboy on this one. Just a little more creative as I seen the combine flip a couple times. Props to both tho


V- Superboy

[Flow]

Vote Superboy. It was a tight one but think he edges it here. superboy estar legend JEM make sure your votes are going in please

[Kill Spree]

This is close for me both weren’t crazy but by bad... I liked Jess bar but I gotta give it to star for having the n/p personal vs a generic


V/star

[Flow]

5 3 need more votes ideally

[Saint]

JEM was ok, seen variations of combine concepts..

I liked engrave better tho, cool wording too

V- SUPERBOY

[Barcotic]

super's concept was a reach
j was simple but made sense

v/jem

[Flow]

6 4 super wins