LR Week 1: King vs Dominate DOM WINS

[Flow]

24 hours and this shits closed.

One bar each and standard rules apply (no biting, swaying, recycling etc)

Get writing!

King
Dominate

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

[King]

Son...u come off like u get no play. I bet ur so alone
Name urself Dominate on the web but in real life u just hold ur own

[Dominate]

You’re fat and you’re broke. I suggest that you look up some help
Dog ur struggling to make ends meet - financially AND when u put on a belt

[Blas]

king- ok, very simple/str8 forward though
dom- cool concept and solid wording, very lol worthy. not super complex but i liked it.

v/dom

[Real Spit]

King you had a good phrase for a nice concept that you could have really capitalized on but your approach was off. Dom your punch is solid but lacks the impact I know you can deliver. Sill, better than King's

v/Dominate

[zelti]

Lmao dominates punch was fire, but only because of the ends meet part tbh. If he hadn’t added in that bit it wouldn’t have connected well. Kings punch wasn’t the best this week, kind of basic and didn’t hit.


Vote Dominate

[Kill Spree]

King I liked your punch.. dom just came with the more witty,humor bar here. He gets my vote

V/dom

[Flow]

Dom wins 4 0