Week 2: Blas Vs King KING WINS

[Flow]

Week Two

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

Blas
King

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

[King]

Poker bars, u in?

[Blas]

i'd prefer to write a bar people will understand, gl

[Blas]

Females w/ u? restraining orders. now u never get AssKing his heart is bleeding & scar'd
Common phrase is get awaking <— exactly what we’ll need help doing after reading your bar

[King]

smh. fuck that. poker bars.

Met ur girl n it was all games at first, then she wanted freak shit
Started off playin TAG, now every time I get that button hand I gotta squeeze it

[Blue Bayou]

Blas - I did awaking in last seasons LLL , so this didn't hit for me personally

King - LoL that's dope. I feel this might go over some heads that aren't poker players, but fresh poker concept that was comical with cool wp


I have King here... Props to both

[zelti]

Blas is every bar w you something about females being repulsed or something? Lol switch it up. Get creative. I wasn’t feelin this one

King had a nice line, props lol


Vote AssKing

[Incredible]

This was ok battle think blas was trying to do to much and didn't tie it in very well. King was original here and worded nice, slick WP. Vote = King

[Maximus]

cool match, Blas your wording was far from butter here man, perhaps u would have flipped it/reword better for a stronger impact but it just kinda fell flat this way. King on the other hand had a good hit.
V/King

[Orc]

Blas too wordy. Unnatural phrasing. Try lose the longbar way of executing bars. Didn’t like awaking as a concept

King okay. Fluid. Execution on point. No qualms with the bar. It hit
Vote king

[MMLP]

Blas felt stretched and lil off tbh

King had a decent bar here, if im nit picking.... one doesn't necessarily have to be on the button to attempt a squeeze play but I see why u choose the those terms, so I appreciate it (and the tie ins), still

v/ king

[Blas]

Blas felt stretched and lil off tbh

King had a decent bar here, if im nit picking.... one doesn't necessarily have to be on the button to attempt a squeeze play but I see why u choose the those terms, so I appreciate it (and the tie ins), still

v/ king

ya same thing i said, it doesn't rly make sense but nobody is going to know that so it's still cool

my shit was too key'd/stretched, good shit king gg

close this

[King]

Just coz u can squeeze from other positions doesn't mean the bar doesn't make sense. U can squeeze from the button as well obviously.

Would have been better if I could have set it up with a "raise" play , but it definitely makes sense still

[Blas]

yeah technically it makes sense because you COULD but you said EVERY time i get the button hand i GOTTA squeeze it, you certainly do not have to do that and if you did it would be the most losing poker play of all time

[Ghost1]

eh I guess blas works but its just mad boring which is ironic given the concept and material

king was cool enough, interesting things going on and enough creative ideas and associations worded in a clean flip made this land square.

v king

[White LGI]

Vote king, I liked both concepts just felt king executed better

[Kill Spree]

King wins

[Flow]

KING WINS 8-0