View Full Version : Week 2: MMLP VS Dynamicz DYNA WINS
Week Two
You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.
DUE THURSDAY
MMLP
DynamiCz
*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*
Imma draw the line through his voting ring, fuck the Cliques referrals
Im outta their radius and twice the Dy amateur in his circle
DynamiCz
03-28-2019, 02:38 PM
I'm appalled... That tough ACTING uh get a rope around ya neck - then a fall
Never been student of month - he'll be one when they find a star hanging off the wall
MMLP, valid attempt but dy-amateur doesn't = diameter if thats what u were going for? correct me via PM if im wrong
dy, got kinda choppy/weird wording wise but this concept is really cool & that's all you needed to do here
v/ dyna
Ghost1
03-29-2019, 08:53 AM
not sure if diameter is even pronounced the way u suggesting here in the UK? also the flip itself was clunky...there were a lot of circular associations which was admirable but twice the dy amateur in his circle? imagine saying that to him or anyone else? u wouldnt.
trying too hard to put associations into the flip and u lost the ability to actually say something coherently
thought star hanging on the wall was dope....simple but effective
v dyna
Saint
03-29-2019, 08:58 AM
V -- Dynamicz here, star hanging was cool.
MMLP good effort here w/ the tieins but they looked just hashed together if I'm being honest.. plus st amateur don't work in any accent afaik.
Sharp
03-29-2019, 10:21 AM
DynamiCz had a cool bar, dy amateur doesn't sound like diameter to me but it was a cool attempt
V/DynamiCz
Destroyer
03-29-2019, 12:27 PM
His bar probably works a lot better in that cockney accent but I got nam taking this with a simple more effective hit anyway
V/nam
White LGI
03-29-2019, 01:19 PM
Vote dyn I just felt it was more polished n more creative
Miss Netcees
03-29-2019, 10:22 PM
I enjoy both punchlines nam more soild
Vote nam
zelti
03-31-2019, 08:38 AM
MMLP was on the right track but it was too much of a reach
DynamiCz took this one fair
Vote DynamiCz
Kill Spree
04-01-2019, 06:53 AM
Nam wins
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