Week 2: Allen Knight VS Killing Spree AK WINS 6-0

[Flow]

Week Two

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

Allen Knight
Killing Spree

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

[Allen Knight]

Yo check.

[Kill Spree]

Yuuuup

[Allen Knight]

every verse u drops trash, actin like u the hardest fuck
we all Sierra's in ur bars, shits belong in the back of a garbage truck

[Kill Spree]

Allen knight aka Forge on RB


1-2 vs Allen

Aka forge





Ya wifey said...
You back @ moms house & She fed up with ur shit
So Foreclosure accounts cos she pays my mortgage w/e I giver her dick

[Ghost1]

apparently sierra is responsible for garbage disposal? how does one even happen upon this information unless they are actual living human trash. fuck u allen.

spree....half name nameplay....I don't fuck with these......I think the larger issue was the lack of a solid tie in between foreclosure account and mortgage payment....the correlation was too loose for me./

v allen the fagot

[White LGI]

Vote Allen

Spree you better than that bar...i suck..but you don't...that shit looks like some shit I shoulda wrote

[Plot]

Allen had a nice wp that I havent seen before. Altho Im not to sure on the
connection and not gonna google, so benefit of the doubt.
Spree was too wordy and didnt connect for me.
V-Allen

[Jabari Black]

Ay Allen, I’m very intrigued to how you knew Sierra was in the back of s garbage truck lmao. Anyways the wp was slick af, and that’s what carried the bar. Wording was concise here. Only issue I have with the punch is I think the “belongs in the back of a garbage truck” was kind of a lackluster way to end the punch. It wasn’t anything wrong with it technically speaking but it just seemed like a basic way to end the punch. I guess you didn’t have much leeway because no one else woulda know wtf a Sierra was I’d you didn’t mention garbage truck lol. Overall good punch.


Spree I don’t think this was your best work personally. Starting with the wordplay, shortening a already one syllable name even shorter is a reach imo. But beyond that, the execution was sloppy imo. You got the forclosure wp, which is pretty crisp, but the “she pays my mortgage” is a very loose association. Like that’s not what’s a forclosure is - it’s just a similar word association. Also the she pays my mortgage when I give her dick is just a awkward phrase, diss in general.

Thought this would be a lot closer but I think spree had an off week. I got Allen taking this one pretty comfortably.

[Barcotic]

Sierra GMC Aero was much better

[Suthaveli]

Voting Allen because it seems like the right thing to do.

[Saint]

Both were ok. V - AK for better wp that hit to me..
Foreclosure was alright but Idk the Forge alias too well so w\e..