Week 2:Plot VS Jabari Black PLOT WINS 8-7

[Flow]

Week Two

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

Plot
Jabari Black

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

[Plot]

Got you murdered Black, it’s a death sentence however I word it
The Shottys undisputed: when the 12 delivers it’s a unanimous verdict.

[Jabari Black]

I pop the tool! Get the drop on Plot then I’m ridin through/
Shoot up ya neighborhood! The choppa fuck up the block like a karate move/

[zelti]

Damn both of these were dope af. Plot good shit on that, that was fire. JB same to you but I feel yours flowed a bit smoother and had more swag to it. Tough one and gonna be close but I have JB


Vote Jabari Black

[Blas]

both were dope flow/structure/concept wise i just felt like plots was slightly more complex seeing as JBs choppa wp was easy to see coming. edge to plot just for being less obvious the route he was taking even though they are both cool af tbh

v/ plot

[Saint]

I liked Plots here good flip on that 12 concept.
Bit surprising JB's liked the concept but shoulda ended like a move or something specific imo, still ok line..

Vote-Plot

[Ghost1]

literally nothing fresh to me in plots boxing flip

choppa block was cool enough to me

v jb

[Cred]

Plot was cool honestly, jb had a fresh twist on a played concept n god wording

Jabari Black dub

[White LGI]

Best I seen so far....dope shit guys...but I liked plot better....I hate a loser has to come from this though, prolly the best lines of the week

[Chyeahhh!!!]

I've got Plot here with a nicely worded fresh gunbar concept. JB you're my nig and did your thing but Plot got this one

Vote plot

[Flow]

Plot steadily improving. Nothing wrong here bar a slightly stale concept. But thats unlucky sometimes it's hard to know what's going to be fresh. Liked jabs. Wasn't his best. Rather simple. But fresh and worked.

Its simplicity was in its favor I think.

Vote jab

[Pharaohs Army]

I got Plot here with the jury concept

[Sharp]

I like Jabari a bit more. Just coming down to taste n how he flipped his concept but this is a strong botw contender

[Destroyer]

literally nothing fresh to me in plots boxing flip

choppa block was cool enough to me

v jb

Boxing? Wtf bar did you read?
I can’t call out zelph for his stupidity and let this slide
It’s a jury verdict reference weirdo



V/plot

[Resin M-I-C]

i liked plots, that was clever
crazy i have never heard a choppa karate move line tho, shit was fresh

this is a coinflip, but i’ve never heard a jury be called 12 tho so

v jb

[Ghost1]

Boxing? Wtf bar did you read?
I can’t call out zelph for his stupidity and let this slide
It’s a jury verdict reference weirdo



V/plot

Idk when a jury is referred to as 12

I mean I get there's 12 jurors in criminal cases....

I know boxing matches have 12 rds, undisputed champions and matches that go to the 12th are then forced to decision

So if it wasn't a boxing reference it should have been

Either way I don't find the boxing or courtroom frames new or intriguing

[Ghost1]

Maybe I should vote for plot tho now because his bar is like the skeleton key of punchlines

[Barcotic]

plot
somewhat of a reach w the concept but decent due to wording

jb
choppa/block/karate fire concept, wording wasnt great but its still good

v/jabari in a close one

[Suthaveli]

I like plot line better fr. Much more clever & vicious.

Mvgt plot

[~RustyGunZ~]

came back to this three times

close

i like plot better in an upset