Week 2: Ghost1 vs Dominate DOM WINS

[Flow]

Week Two

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

Ghost1
Dominate

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

[Dominate]

Forget brawls. I got a couple rounds to leave ya neck mauled
Get hit w/ the shotty. I’ll phone ur fam tell em pick up the body – that’s a collect call

[Ghost1]

STFU teach. Shoot ya school up ...all my arms gon blitz
I let it rock like a monster on ya building thats sum gargoyle shit

[Miss Netcees]

I love both Ghost came strong with the heat
Vote Ghost

[Kill Spree]

V/dom

[Blas]

dom had a very dope bar
ghost had a cool swag bar but it was much less of a battle bar

v/ dom

[Pharaohs Army]

Close one but i've got Dom here, slightly harsher

[zelti]

EDIT: after further review of dominates bar, I discovered that it doesn’t make any fuckin sense. A collect call is when you call someone from a pay phone or jail and they have to accept the charges of that phone call. Pick up the body? Nah nah nah, it sounded good but it doesn’t make sense.

Ghost1 bar at least made sense


Vote Ghost1

[Blue Bayou]

Dom cool fresh concept.. pretty clever , this was nice

Bags I thought conceptually it was kindve cool, but needed a serious reword... And arms gon / gar goy yul is probably the worst multi Ive seen in a long time

Dom won

[Blue Bayou]

Dom cool fresh concept.. pretty clever , this was nice

Bags I thought conceptually it was kindve cool, but needed a serious reword... And arms gon / gargoyle is probably the worst multi Ive seen in a long time

Dom won

[Plot]

Yeah Doms bar ws pretty dope except for being really old.
(I havent seen a pay-phone in 10 years lol)
Ghost was lols too, and nice personal but execution wasnt there.
V-Dom

[Destroyer]

I got bags because of the triforce unilateral, but wtf is wrong with zelph?
No one could legit be that dumb.
Collect the body, you stupid, one lipped stem-cell-needing creature

V/bags

[~RustyGunZ~]

dom had a really dope concept but there was no connection to collect calls anywhere but the punch. ring ya fam wasnt enough to me, collect calls happen on a payphone or from prison so something relating to that needed to be in there. felt like half a really dope bar.

bags was cool, rhyme schemes were stupid bad but i vowed to never judge that shit in a text battle. concept was fluid, made sense. haven't seen it.

i got bags, cool battle

[Barcotic]

dom
cool concept, altho i feel like it needed sutn else to replace 'body'. good regardless, im just nitpicking on that

bags
extremely lazy wording on what could have ben a dope concept..w/ a bit of recording & executed properly. this is an awkward reach as is

v/dom

[Kill Spree]

Dom wins

[Flow]

DOM WINS 7-4