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Flow
03-25-2019, 02:52 PM
Week Two

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

JEM
BodySnatcher

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

BodySnatcher
03-28-2019, 10:42 PM
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The crowd might buy ur shit but I leave them amaze,
Blade in hand...& after they see the 'quality of the cut'...nobody will give Jem appraise

Blas
03-29-2019, 07:01 AM
this was cool

Dominate
03-29-2019, 07:10 AM
Pretty cool. I like the 'quality of the cut' concept a lot but would change the execution slightly bc 'give JEM a praise' is a little awkward... 'nobody gon appraise gem/nobody gonna praise JEM' would be a little cleaner. Still an enjoyable bar though, good job.