Week 3: Incredible vs MMLP INCREDIBLE WINS

[Flow]

Week Three

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

Incredible
MMLP

Extensions need to be agreed by both parties

[Flow]

MMLPs

can’t tell what’s worse

Your record in 1-2 or in parenting. my guy you are a bitch
"Inc on sequential" losses that remind you why your wife took the kids

[Incredible]

The 3rd wheel of the ambiguously gay duo...


This dude bottom tier unless Flow or Lars write for you, so true
Named my twins gloc 1, 2 catch a body cold cuz I made them spit at you

[White LGI]

Vote inc

I kinda had trouble catching either one really but inc was more on point to me ..maybe I missed the personal about the parenting shit but it missed me

[joog]

Both had personal angles.
Mmlp- u had the more reader friendly bar, imo.
Incredible- idk whats going on here, as i dont know this sites politics. Also, urs reads a lil choppy.

Vote mmlp.
Feels wrong voting on this, cuz i dont really "get" incredibles bar. If yall wanna not count this vote, i understand.

[Blas]

mmlp- wording is ok, wordplay is ok i guess but the tie in is meh
incred- did not really enjoy this

v/ mmlp

[Plot]

I think this is a pretty close battle.
Im going with Inc, because his body-cold/ spit/infect concept works a little better.
MMLP had a cool np with Inconsequential/ink on sequential, but I dont think he flipped it
right, as in his behaviour in his relationship was consequential, ie: his wife left with the kids. He coulda flipped it diff to make it hit like: something about him having a shitty irresponsibe attitude or something.
So both good concepts, I think if MMLP made his work it would have won.
V-Inc

[Plot]

Double post

[Resin M-I-C]

mm wp was a lil reach,l
inc was simple but effective

v inc

[Maximus]

i dunno, didnt really get inc's and i thought mmlp's was cool(not a bad nameflip imo) so he gets this.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Obv inc got this

Wasn’t great but mmlp was so forced

[Saint]

Vote Inc -- better executed, less forced

[Ghost1]

inconsequential sucked lol. this shitty ass wordplay trend needs to die already. even if it did work uh losing his kids seems pretty consequential lol. wheres the consistency in logic versus making the stupid wordplay work?

inc sucked too? horribly simple.

im giving this to mmlp for atleast attempting something intelligent I guess? idk cant say either of u really did anything good or worth a win here.

v mmlp

[Suthaveli]

Both were bad but I couldn't get over how force mmlp was tbh. Long bar type forced.

Mvgt-inc

[Flow]

inc wins 6-4