View Full Version : Week 3: Bodysnatcher vs Sharp SHARP WINS
Week Three
You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.
DUE THURSDAY
Sharp
BodySnatcher
Extensions need to be agreed by both parties
BodySnatcher
04-04-2019, 10:48 PM
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Sitcom or ur school will get Columbine & I’ll spend my last days in a cell
Cuz I guarantee after ‘dismissal ring out'...ur gonna wish u were saved by the bell
Sharp
04-04-2019, 11:24 PM
Bro I’ll take ur bitch right after I let the chopper fire,
She let my ‘hand get so far between the walls’...I could pull out copper wire
Ur the drunk type. I fucked ur wife & she left in amazement,
But she had so much 'water damage to her walls'...she'll need more than a 'stud replacement'
Ur hoe’s a magic trick. She on the wood...log sports,
My nigga she let me ‘run thru the walls’ like trying to board a train to Hogwarts
washed up. fuck your fours n threats. you just a boring pest
a passing fad w/ a gimmick n too many wall flips. you're the Parkour of text
Honestly liked both. Sharp gets the edge though for the personal touch. Good fkn bars
from both though...
V/Sharp
Chyeahhh!!!
04-05-2019, 09:27 AM
Soon as I saw sitcom I was done with bodies bar
Sharps personal was good
Vote sharp
Maximus
04-05-2019, 11:55 AM
i thought dismissal ring out was dope but sharp's personal edge just hit harder so im giving this to him
Bodysnatcher- good bar conceptually, but you shot urself in the foot w the wordplays because they are both played af. I think that ultimately jammed u up here.
Sharp- nice personal angle. Ive seen text wall/parkour concepts already, but this is waaaay more acceptable.
Vote sharp
Both punches had good wording with a bit outdated punches and sharp only having the upper hand as it being a personal.
v / sharp
~RustyGunZ~
04-07-2019, 04:08 PM
Botw
Got sharp for simply being more personal. Equal sting though.
Destroyer
04-07-2019, 08:47 PM
Sharp gets it with the personal burn
V/sharp
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