Week 3: Cred vs Miss Netcees - CRED WINS

[Flow]

Week Three

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

Miss Netcees
Cred

Extensions need to be agreed by both parties

[Miss Netcees]

Check

[Miss Netcees]

First off: Ya don't have no balls
Ya Fall faster than ya teardrops falls

[Cred]

I'll have this hoe swim wit the fishes. U ain't dodgin the lake.. this shit ain't Frogger
Forget about tanning.. THIS 2-Piece gon Lay u the fuck out before you hit the water

[Blas]

miss netcees tried some stuff
but cred DID some stuff

v/ cred

[Saint]

Vote Cred -- good hit.. 2 piece was coo... Miss Netcees was succinct tho & better than before.

[White LGI]

Cred wins

Gooonnneee@no balls

[Maximus]

lolzz, for some reason miss netcees' bar made me laugh for realz, quite cool but in the end Cred got this though

[Sharp]

Miss NC is improving with concepts each week, but cred got it on wording

V/cred

[Ryno]

V/Cred... he had the harder bar between the 2

[Kill Spree]

Cred got this. Two piece was dope

[Ghost1]

Lol wtf creds bar was fire

Unnecessary


Fucking like Mike Tyson showing up with an Uzi to fight Stephen Hawkings lol.

[Jabari Black]

Miss Netcees you got a lot of work to do. Just needs a lot more complexity, both in the concept, wording - all of that. I see some slight improvements, but got some ways to go.

Cred this was fire af. Set it up well by alluding to dumping his body. 2 piece lay you out was dope af, but I though “before you hit the water” was a dope way to end the punch l since it plays off the set up. Well put together punch. Only critique i got is you typically a little more complex in your rhyme scheme and flow, but it ain’t a big deal. Overall, dope.

Mvgt Cred

[joog]

Cred, ur joint was nice

[Resin M-I-C]

miss netcees def made me laugh with her first line
cred was nasty here

v Cred

[King]

cred had a very dope bar. easily took it imo

vote Cred

[Plot]

Yeah 2-piece was a dope angle.
V-Cred
Robranda has never been serious

[Plot]

Yeah 2-piece was a dope angle.
V-Cred
Robranda has never been serious

[Clout]

v/ The Cooler puerto rican

Keep at it miss netcees, cred just better worded bar and clearly more developed conceptually.

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