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Kill Spree
04-02-2019, 09:46 AM
LIGHTNING ROUND
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[b]Bars due ASAP THIS CLOSES IN 24HRS

VOTING WILL GO A FEW HRS LONGER

Incredible
Real Spit

Incredible
04-02-2019, 09:12 PM
Fuck up and get shot, boostin my whole life ask around if I'm real or not
Don't care if he saw what I brought, arsenal just folds under pressure so nothing will go off

Real Spit
04-02-2019, 09:40 PM
get smashed on fast dawg, there's no point in even bringing the tech
they'll say your ascot handed to you when I'm finished ringing your neck

Zaddy
04-02-2019, 09:47 PM
Incredible was too wordy and long winded here, wasn’t really feelin the concept

Spit had a cool wordplay that was done right and worded good.


Vote spit

BodySnatcher
04-03-2019, 12:45 AM
Ughh...Inc, damnit man, come harder in this bitch. all them words and shit.

Spit this a decent, ascot/neck was aight aight...I mean pretty sure ascot been used before at some point but hey, cool bar brodie

vote Spit

Blas
04-03-2019, 12:50 AM
incred: too wordy, valiant effort
spit: cool stuff

v/ spit

Barcotic
04-03-2019, 09:00 AM
ascot worked, good wording

inc was decent conceptwise, a bit simple & overworded. at least arsonal wasnt a wp (i think?)

v/spit

Cred
04-03-2019, 09:22 AM
Ascot was pretty cool. Didn’t like incs at all, shit didn’t even rhyme


Vote Spit

bleak
04-03-2019, 07:57 PM
Too much filler Inc cut all the self promotion out unless it plays into ur concept

Spit

Suthaveli
04-03-2019, 08:00 PM
Didn't care for ass got punch, but can see the appeal towards others. Shit, idduno if I've seen one since scooby doo fr.
I didn't like incredible bar at all. Didn't even rhyme to me. Dunno where ya from. Lmk so I can understand ya accent better.

Mvgt- spit

joog
04-04-2019, 05:35 AM
Spit, ascot/ass got? That's forced imo and dont work for me. But as is, i still enjoyed reading the bar. I liked it.
Incredible, decent, but not enough here.

Vote spit

Saint
04-04-2019, 06:11 AM
Ascot was better than what INC had.
Whatever he was going for didn't hit/ruined by the wording...

VOTE SPIT

Kill Spree
04-04-2019, 06:44 AM
Spit wins