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Debut MC
04-03-2019, 02:04 PM
Carolina Blue the letters italic with a darkened shadow
Kodak moment, capture the flash of my minds travel
Slight of Hand, I'm Houdini with pen's, Silence of the Lambs
Hannibal Lecter, Behind bars I'm still fuckin' dangerous Fam!
Listen! with stretched bars you lose flow, taint breath control,
So know your weapons ink is dangerously low, dull, or simply out of ammo
Now let's light this candle and Pay Homage to history's battle
From ancient god's who grapple, to elder chapels that lie dismantled
See I arrange words like scrabble, then set fire to certain scripts
Smoke lifts, you can hear the paper crackle as it's remnants begin to drift

DMS
04-03-2019, 02:40 PM
Carolina Blue the letters italic with a darkened shadow
Kodak moment, capture the flash of my minds travel
Slight of Hand, I'm Houdini with pen's, Silence of the Lambs
Hannibal Lecter, Behind bars I'm still fuckin' dangerous Fam!
Listen! with stretched bars you lose flow, taint breath control,
So know your weapons ink is dangerously low, dull, or simply out of ammo
Now let's light this candle and Pay Homage to history's battle
From ancient god's who grapple, to elder chapels that lie dismantled
See I arrange words like scrabble, then set fire to certain scripts
Smoke lifts, you can hear the paper crackle as it's remnants begin to drift


Trash

All these people are blind poets who practice with off meters.

Pharaohs Army
04-05-2019, 03:26 AM
whack buster this is lackluster
my feed rhymes

i'm annoyed. you've got apostrophes where they shouldn't be and then other places they're missing.

capture the flash of my minds travel
mind's*

I'm Houdini with pen's
pens*

taint breath control
what does taint breath control mean?

to elder chapels
do you mean old chapels?

as it's remnants begin to drift
again, this should be its*

I'm not really impressed dog.
Write something better