Week 4: Miss Netcees vs Pharaohs Army - PA WINS

[Flow]

1-2 Week Four

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE FRIDAY (due to lateness closing everything today)
Pharaohs Army
Miss Netcees

Extensions need to be agreed by both parties

[Pharaohs Army]

Ugly-ass ho.. I'm trying to discover your purpose; what are you bringing?
Shiit.. The only thing worse than your text is your singing!

[Miss Netcees]

It's my turn to shine
Get on your knees and bow down The Crown is mine

[White LGI]

Lol vote pa

[~RustyGunZ~]

we got a fuckin barn burner here boys

[Maximus]

ok miss netcees your punch last week was far better, atleast you did dissed your opponent. but this week you just made a statement dear, telling someone to bow down because the crown is yours is not a diss, no creativity, no wordplay and it wasnt even funny, atleast last week you brought something humorous.. anyways PA did just enough to take the W here.
v/Pharoahs Army

[Ryno]

V/PA... he had more of an actual diss

[joog]

Vote pharoah.
Pharoah was more direct
Mis netcee- try to be more direct when mak8ng ur bar, to diss ur opponent

[Saint]

V - PA. Personal vs nothing

[Destroyer]

Got PA here in a close one

[Suthaveli]

Here to get my vote count up.
Pa

[Pharaohs Army]

Miss Netcees you're not really ugly it's just a punch

[Flow]

Miss Netcees you're not really ugly it's just a punch

Slayed me this

Vote PA for a punchline

[Miss Netcees]

No need to explain
diss battles suppose to be fun

thanks for dropping

[Plot]

This feels like de va ju.
DG was worse than last week, which was bad.
Pharoh had a diss.
V-PA

[Sharp]

It's Pharaoh's army, but the punch wasn't great. I like that you're going for something personal PA, but the punch itself is just a statement. You're referencing her and not really doing anything with it - it's not a creative diss, you're putting the responsibility of coming up with a diss onto the reader with a 'remember that time...'

I don't wanna prescribe a specific stylistic choice here since there are so many possibilities, but a rule of thumb should be to treat the bar kind of like a joke. Even if you're not going for 'ha ha', if we don't see the crux of the punch coming, it's more effective

V/pa

[Chyeahhh!!!]

Mis Netcees was too much like a proclamation though

Pharoah had a simple doable personal

vote P Army

[Jabari Black]

Miss Netcees you’re going to have to actually punch to get a win this season. This bar was just a statement bar and a light one at that. PA, the punch was very basic to me. Still won this easily.

Mvgt Pharaohs Army

[Kill Spree]

Vote PA... wasn’t a good bar but at least showed effort to diss

[Flow]

Pa 12