Week 4: MMLP vs Maximus - MAX WINS

[Flow]

1-2 Week Four

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE FRIDAY (due to lateness closing everything today)
MMLP
Maximus

Extensions need to be agreed by both parties

[Maximus]

i'll leave this clown's remains on a trapeze.. then buried deep in a site
bitch, you'll go from 'the swing to the grave' like work-shift from evening to night

[MMLP]

Loneliness got u home on ur own, no need to go for the throat
Maximus executioner, ur fake friends carried out this body like the Solider of Rome

[Ryno]

V/Maximus... thought he had the better concept & execution. MMLP worded it ok but it wasn’t impactful

[~RustyGunZ~]

Eh. Got Max. Neither was stand out but his was a little more put together.

[joog]

Vote maximus. Didnt like the tie ins used to the swing to grave angle. Still got ur point across well imo.

Mmlp idk whats going on here. Good nameplay attempt tho.

Vote maximus

[Sharp]

I really wanna like MMLP's bar more. It's a solid gladiator reference, but it's kind of lacking a punch that stings. End of bar is trying to be a ittle too elaborate for its own good imo, like the fake friends comes out of nowhere

Max was basic, but alright. Cool concept but really simple execution, still enough here

V/max

[Flow]

Work shift concept was dope, execution wasnt top draw but tbh i cant think of a better way that fit the concept in as well as you did, mmlp my man an the rome move was ok but going to edge this to max here, think mmlp had something but needed to work on a different way to approach the concept for directness.

anyways vote max

[Allen Knight]

Got max here also his was cleaner, mmlp had a good concept but wording hurt him this week.

[Zaddy]

MMLP col concept but wording hurt you in this one. Maximus had a cleaner well put bar, got him in this one

Vote maximus

[Chyeahhh!!!]

I was fucking with MMLP's. I like his shit but this one seems it could have been worded a bit better.

Max setup was worded a bit weird though effective. I like the follow through and execution

vote Max

[Pharaohs Army]

i got MMLP cuz I don't get Maximus's

[Saint]

MMLP - liked the idea. the way you executed the line coukd gave made the difference...

Max - Lol trapeze was odd but the bar wasnt bad here. swing to the grave was different, could have been changed to be better too tbh

V- Max

[Kill Spree]

I got max here... thought the wit he dropped was dope. Wasn’t a fan of mmlp’s bar the was he executed it. Felt it lacked something. Max had a dope twist and edged this for me

[Cred]

Can someone fill me in on Max’s diss?


I liked mmlps bar forsure, thought it had enough to carry itself for the fun here

Vote mmlp

[Flow]

Max wins 10 2