Cashius (0-0) vs. Real Spit (0-0) - CASHIUS WINS

[Zaddy]

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COMPLETE RULE THREAD:

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091

Cashius Real Spit

[Cashius]

10

[Real Spit]

Lol k.

[Real Spit]

10? I don't think so.

you passionless whore. I'ma leave you buried, smashed in the floor.
when u die, there won't even be pallbearers. no one carries cash anymore.
you bring that extra chrome, wave it around & behave with the weirdness.
bro we get it, you're down as fuck.. it's a distinct facial appearance.
look dawg we know u need attention. and most of your lies forgiven.
nobody condemns your lifestyle.. just the crackhouse you tried to live in.
ur a slave to text, they call u legend & it makes me wanna stomp ya face in.
honestly... it's because ur portrayed isn't worthy of compensation.
always cave to the cops. in your case, I'm known to grab the Mac faster.
usually down to throw hands.. but it's always a strict nine for a rat bastard.
insecure about your love life.. I'd hate to leave you stuck in these thoughts.
spoiler: that's what u shoulda done, to keep your bitch from sucking me off.
keep her outta pocket.. when I fuck ya girl I hit harder in motion
if she ends up pregnant & askin for money I'll kickstarter abortion
I'll put you on display, I'm vicious af.. you just can't tell cuz I'm chill.
you keep showcasing & my revolver won't drop a shell when I kill.

[Cashius]

Ohhhhhh going 16...aren’t you a tough guy!

“Real Spit”....what a stupid name. Gayest shit I’ve heard in my life, fam..Jesus!
I cringe so hard at that “Monicker”...you’d think the nerdiest white man screamed it
Was gonna smash your chick but EVERYONE has...The girl is just whilin’, friend
Would’ve left you with a Sorbet...but it’s obvious the nasty bitch needs more than her palate cleansed
You have that poor girl turning to drink. But I can’t blame her...so never mind that
Got the bitch so ‘half in the bag’...Finny’s expecting her to send her fries back
No one dominant as Cash...You HAD to know you’d probably get smacked
If ANY voter is For Real...then I guarantee they’re the EXACT opposite of that
Act like I won’t blast you, I Double Dare you. Fam...stunt and you dead
If the Nickelodeon trouble...cause no slime coming out when them cans dump on his head
He taking his girl out for fancy meals like she ain’t 3 bills...dude’s kiddin’ himself
Quit fuckin’ with me, kid...You been droppin’ 100 on a Pig wayyyy before Blue did it to Zelph
He’s BROKE. But I’ll still rob him for talking...Dude face it, it’s over
Talk Backwards and I’ll make you ‘Run your little green with the stick’...Luke training with Yoda
From RB HOF to a Netcees no name ...Lol...but homie’s like “HELL NO, I’M A STAR!!!”
At the Lime only Real recognize Real. Which makes sense...Cause nobody else knows who you are

[Zaddy]

you passionless whore. I'ma leave you buried, smashed in the floor.
when u die, there won't even be pallbearers. no one carries cash anymore.
do pallbearers only carry credit cards and gift cards? Lol not feelin this one
you bring that extra chrome, wave it around & behave with the weirdness.
bro we get it, you're down as fuck.. it's a distinct facial appearance.
ok, bit of an old angle but the flip is ok
look dawg we know u need attention. and most of your lies forgiven.
nobody condemns your lifestyle.. just the crackhouse you tried to live in.
decent
ur a slave to text, they call u legend & it makes me wanna stomp ya face in.
honestly... it's because ur portrayed isn't worthy of compensation.
doesnt make sense
always cave to the cops. in your case, I'm known to grab the Mac faster.
usually down to throw hands.. but it's always a strict nine for a rat bastard.
nah
insecure about your love life.. I'd hate to leave you stuck in these thoughts.
spoiler: that's what u shoulda done, to keep your bitch from sucking me off.
wasnt feelin this
keep her outta pocket.. when I fuck ya girl I hit harder in motion
if she ends up pregnant & askin for money I'll kickstarter abortion
decent at best, you’re really dedicated to forcing these here wordplays aren’t ya?
I'll put you on display, I'm vicious af.. you just can't tell cuz I'm chill.
you keep showcasing & my revolver won't drop a shell when I kill.
no no


Vs


“Real Spit”....what a stupid name. Gayest shit I’ve heard in my life, fam..Jesus!
I cringe so hard at that “Monicker”...you’d think the nerdiest white man screamed it
nah man what
Was gonna smash your chick but EVERYONE has...The girl is just whilin’, friend
Would’ve left you with a Sorbet...but it’s obvious the nasty bitch needs more than her palate cleansed
miss here
You have that poor girl turning to drink. But I can’t blame her...so never mind that
Got the bitch so ‘half in the bag’...Finny’s expecting her to send her fries back
lol pretty cool
No one dominant as Cash...You HAD to know you’d probably get smacked
If ANY voter is For Real...then I guarantee they’re the EXACT opposite of that
decent
Act like I won’t blast you, I Double Dare you. Fam...stunt and you dead
If the Nickelodeon trouble...cause no slime coming out when them cans dump on his head
slight issue with the wordplay here but overall it’s a pretty cool bar
He taking his girl out for fancy meals like she ain’t 3 bills...dude’s kiddin’ himself
Quit fuckin’ with me, kid...You been droppin’ 100 on a Pig wayyyy before Blue did it to Zelph
lmao nice
He’s BROKE. But I’ll still rob him for talking...Dude face it, it’s over
Talk Backwards and I’ll make you ‘Run your little green with the stick’...Luke training with Yoda
ha this was cool
From RB HOF to a Netcees no name ...Lol...but homie’s like “HELL NO, I’M A STAR!!!”
At the Lime only Real recognize Real. Which makes sense...Cause nobody else knows who you are
nah


I haven’t read too many spit battles aside from the 1-2 over here but I assumed he was dope since he’s rb HoF...well...this verse was a bit underwhelming tbh. A lot of your bars are mechanical and formulaic which is fine but they were also complimented by old or kiddy concepts. Cash didn’t really drop near his best here either, but he definitely came a lot more consistent and had a good amount of hits. Pretty one sided here which I didn’t really expect.


Vote Cashius

[Maximus]

you passionless whore. I'ma leave you buried, smashed in the floor.
when u die, there won't even be pallbearers. no one carries cash anymore.
WELL, OK.. MADE ME CHUCKLE
you bring that extra chrome, wave it around & behave with the weirdness.
bro we get it, you're down as fuck.. it's a distinct facial appearance.
AIGHT
look dawg we know u need attention. and most of your lies forgiven.
nobody condemns your lifestyle.. just the crackhouse you tried to live in.
OK
ur a slave to text, they call u legend & it makes me wanna stomp ya face in.
honestly... it's because ur portrayed isn't worthy of compensation.
THIS IS INCOHERENT
always cave to the cops. in your case, I'm known to grab the Mac faster.
usually down to throw hands.. but it's always a strict nine for a rat bastard.
HELL NAH
insecure about your love life.. I'd hate to leave you stuck in these thoughts.
spoiler: that's what u shoulda done, to keep your bitch from sucking me off.
AIGHT
keep her outta pocket.. when I fuck ya girl I hit harder in motion
if she ends up pregnant & askin for money I'll kickstarter abortion
HMM, JUST OK
I'll put you on display, I'm vicious af.. you just can't tell cuz I'm chill.
you keep showcasing & my revolver won't drop a shell when I kill
OK

VS

“Real Spit”....what a stupid name. Gayest shit I’ve heard in my life, fam..Jesus!
I cringe so hard at that “Monicker”...you’d think the nerdiest white man screamed it
NAH
Was gonna smash your chick but EVERYONE has...The girl is just whilin’, friend
Would’ve left you with a Sorbet...but it’s obvious the nasty bitch needs more than her palate cleansed
LOLZ, THOUGHT U COULDA DONE MORE WITH THIS
You have that poor girl turning to drink. But I can’t blame her...so never mind that
Got the bitch so ‘half in the bag’...Finny’s expecting her to send her fries back
AIGHT
No one dominant as Cash...You HAD to know you’d probably get smacked
If ANY voter is For Real...then I guarantee they’re the EXACT opposite of that
DECENT
Act like I won’t blast you, I Double Dare you. Fam...stunt and you dead
If the Nickelodeon trouble...cause no slime coming out when them cans dump on his head
DECENT
He taking his girl out for fancy meals like she ain’t 3 bills...dude’s kiddin’ himself
Quit fuckin’ with me, kid...You been droppin’ 100 on a Pig wayyyy before Blue did it to Zelph
LOLZZ, I WAS LOOKING OUT, I KNEW SOMEONE WAS GONNA FLIP THAT 100 BLUE LINE THIS WEEK, COOL
He’s BROKE. But I’ll still rob him for talking...Dude face it, it’s over
Talk Backwards and I’ll make you ‘Run your little green with the stick’...Luke training with Yoda
SOLID
From RB HOF to a Netcees no name ...Lol...but homie’s like “HELL NO, I’M A STAR!!!”
At the Lime only Real recognize Real. Which makes sense...Cause nobody else knows who you are
COOL

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VOTE CASHIUS, much more consistent and his punches hit harder

[veritas]

I felt that Cassius verse was the same as all of his verses and I wasn’t really feeling it. I think that real spit’ kick starter line was flames. I have to disagree with the previous voters, I think real spit rose to the occasion and hit harder.

Mvgt real spit.

[Suthaveli]

look dawg we know u need attention. and most of your lies forgiven.
nobody condemns your lifestyle.. just the crackhouse you tried to live in.
keep her outta pocket.. when I fuck ya girl I hit harder in motion
if she ends up pregnant & askin for money I'll kickstarter abortion
I'll put you on display, I'm vicious af.. you just can't tell cuz I'm chill.
you keep showcasing & my revolver won't drop a shell when I kill.

The pallbearers line I liked, but not enough to quote. Imo if you flipped it into saying something like, " not even pallbearers carry cash anymore" I personally wldve gravitated to it more. But I can def see you didn't wanna break the scheme flow & syllable count on how you had it worded.
The down syndrome line polish, but not quote imo

Vs

Real Spit”....what a stupid name. Gayest shit I’ve heard in my life, fam..Jesus!
I cringe so hard at that “Monicker”...you’d think the nerdiest white man screamed it
No one dominant as Cash...You HAD to know you’d probably get smacked
If ANY voter is For Real...then I guarantee they’re the EXACT opposite of that
He taking his girl out for fancy meals like she ain’t 3 bills...dude’s kiddin’ himself
Quit fuckin’ with me, kid...You been droppin’ 100 on a Pig wayyyy before Blue did it to Zelph

Cash looks outta practice. Won't take him long to get in form tho.

I look & I see that real spit had sublet more clever bars but was missing aggression which imo made a lot of his bars not hit for me. They were nicely clever from a bar standpoint, but missing that umph. The kickerstarter had what the others were missing so it came off too wordy for me. Cash had the fire power, but some of his concepts suffered. Like I said, it won't take him much to get back in rhythm. Felt he had the strength & bars to win tho.

Mvgt- cash

[BodySnatcher]

you passionless whore. I'ma leave you buried, smashed in the floor.
when u die, there won't even be pallbearers. no one carries cash anymore.
decent hit
you bring that extra chrome, wave it around & behave with the weirdness.
bro we get it, you're down as fuck.. it's a distinct facial appearance.
lol cool
look dawg we know u need attention. and most of your lies forgiven.
nobody condemns your lifestyle.. just the crackhouse you tried to live in.
nah
ur a slave to text, they call u legend & it makes me wanna stomp ya face in.
honestly... it's because ur portrayed isn't worthy of compensation.
statementish
always cave to the cops. in your case, I'm known to grab the Mac faster.
usually down to throw hands.. but it's always a strict nine for a rat bastard.
basic bar
insecure about your love life.. I'd hate to leave you stuck in these thoughts.
spoiler: that's what u shoulda done, to keep your bitch from sucking me off.
i like this
keep her outta pocket.. when I fuck ya girl I hit harder in motion
if she ends up pregnant & askin for money I'll kickstarter abortion
this is cool too
I'll put you on display, I'm vicious af.. you just can't tell cuz I'm chill.
you keep showcasing & my revolver won't drop a shell when I kill.
decent



“Real Spit”....what a stupid name. Gayest shit I’ve heard in my life, fam..Jesus!
I cringe so hard at that “Monicker”...you’d think the nerdiest white man screamed it
myyy nikka, this is cool/funny
Was gonna smash your chick but EVERYONE has...The girl is just whilin’, friend
Would’ve left you with a Sorbet...but it’s obvious the nasty bitch needs more than her palate cleansed
decent wordplay
You have that poor girl turning to drink. But I can’t blame her...so never mind that
Got the bitch so ‘half in the bag’...Finny’s expecting her to send her fries back
dope
No one dominant as Cash...You HAD to know you’d probably get smacked
If ANY voter is For Real...then I guarantee they’re the EXACT opposite of that
not bad here
Act like I won’t blast you, I Double Dare you. Fam...stunt and you dead
If the Nickelodeon trouble...cause no slime coming out when them cans dump on his head
had to read a couple times, slightly off maybe but still dope, i like this
He taking his girl out for fancy meals like she ain’t 3 bills...dude’s kiddin’ himself
Quit fuckin’ with me, kid...You been droppin’ 100 on a Pig wayyyy before Blue did it to Zelph
fire
He’s BROKE. But I’ll still rob him for talking...Dude face it, it’s over
Talk Backwards and I’ll make you ‘Run your little green with the stick’...Luke training with Yoda
dope
From RB HOF to a Netcees no name ...Lol...but homie’s like “HELL NO, I’M A STAR!!!”
At the Lime only Real recognize Real. Which makes sense...Cause nobody else knows who you are
decent personal

I think Cash did enough to take this here. Dope battle fellas.

[Orc]

Zelph ya vote is nonsense. You know who Spitacular is. You started on RB. Don’t do that. Anyway I had a bar by bar done and erased it by mistake on my phone. Sorry.

Hmmm not sure. Close battle. Could go either way imo. I like Splits style and how fluid it is. Just a few underdeveloped concepts hurt him here. He got his verse up quick it coulda cost him. Cashius came correct. I liked a lot of the current event stuff. Funny bars are what’s up and both had some. I think Cashius edged it maybe with the Pig and Finny lines vs the Kickstarter and carry cash being the best of both. Overall quotes from Cash slightly edged the ones from Spit

Vote Cash in a close one

[josh s]

10? I don't think so.
lets goooooo

you passionless whore. I'ma leave you buried, smashed in the floor.
when u die, there won't even be pallbearers. no one carries cash anymore.
fire, smashed in the floor no pallbearers cause no theres no fucking BODY
you bring that extra chrome, wave it around & behave with the weirdness.
bro we get it, you're down as fuck.. it's a distinct facial appearance.
dope scheme well worded
look dawg we know u need attention. and most of your lies forgiven.
nobody condemns your lifestyle.. just the crackhouse you tried to live in.
decent wordplay, set up could have been better i guess
ur a slave to text, they call u legend & it makes me wanna stomp ya face in.
honestly... it's because ur portrayed isn't worthy of compensation.
flip and wording only comes off nice as poor trade. but if u try to say it the other way around the wording is a lil off. not bad tho
always cave to the cops. in your case, I'm known to grab the Mac faster.
usually down to throw hands.. but it's always a strict nine for a rat bastard.
punch was nice, strict nine is a wordplay i see every once in a while but the execution here is nice
insecure about your love life.. I'd hate to leave you stuck in these thoughts.
spoiler: that's what u shoulda done, to keep your bitch from sucking me off.
nice
keep her outta pocket.. when I fuck ya girl I hit harder in motion
if she ends up pregnant & askin for money I'll kickstarter abortion
supa hot fire shiii
I'll put you on display, I'm vicious af.. you just can't tell cuz I'm chill.
you keep showcasing & my revolver won't drop a shell when I kill.
this is good


Ohhhhhh going 16...aren’t you a tough guy!
nice rebuttal

“Real Spit”....what a stupid name. Gayest shit I’ve heard in my life, fam..Jesus!
I cringe so hard at that “Monicker”...you’d think the nerdiest white man screamed it
damn that's pretty funny
Was gonna smash your chick but EVERYONE has...The girl is just whilin’, friend
Would’ve left you with a Sorbet...but it’s obvious the nasty bitch needs more than her palate cleansed
wording is good, sore bea is kinda played but this was cool
You have that poor girl turning to drink. But I can’t blame her...so never mind that
Got the bitch so ‘half in the bag’...Finny’s expecting her to send her fries back
not bad
No one dominant as Cash...You HAD to know you’d probably get smacked
If ANY voter is For Real...then I guarantee they’re the EXACT opposite of that
oooh solid
Act like I won’t blast you, I Double Dare you. Fam...stunt and you dead
If the Nickelodeon trouble...cause no slime coming out when them cans dump on his head
this is good
He taking his girl out for fancy meals like she ain’t 3 bills...dude’s kiddin’ himself
Quit fuckin’ with me, kid...You been droppin’ 100 on a Pig wayyyy before Blue did it to Zelph
thats hard
He’s BROKE. But I’ll still rob him for talking...Dude face it, it’s over
Talk Backwards and I’ll make you ‘Run your little green with the stick’...Luke training with Yoda
ur dumb af in a funny way hahaha
From RB HOF to a Netcees no name ...Lol...but homie’s like “HELL NO, I’M A STAR!!!”
At the Lime only Real recognize Real. Which makes sense...Cause nobody else knows who you are
this was kinda lite, cool line tho


over all; only 1 or 2 bars from each battler that weren't up to par mainly because the wordplays were kinda played and there wasn't a scheme to go with it. spit's angle was more harsh and cashius brought some humor and entertainment. this is almost on the level of the battle between orc and dynamics. what cashius lacked in flow and rhyme schemes he made up for in creativity and humor. on spits side of things, he didn't bring many personals to give a more original feel to his verse which may have hurt him some, but the execution of his punchlines combined with the solid rhyme schemes made his verse hit hard. this battle feels like a match up of different styles for sure. good showing to both.

v/ real spit

bars of the battle | spit's kickstarter line was disgusting. and that yoda line was just dumb funny

[Jabari Black]

you passionless whore. I'ma leave you buried, smashed in the floor.
when u die, there won't even be pallbearers. no one carries cash anymore.

(Lol I like this one except the set up. Passionless whore was weird but the concept and punch pretty good)

you bring that extra chrome, wave it around & behave with the weirdness.
bro we get it, you're down as fuck.. it's a distinct facial appearance.

(This is okay. Works but the way you connected it kinda basic)

look dawg we know u need attention. and most of your lies forgiven.
nobody condemns your lifestyle.. just the crackhouse you tried to live in.

(I don’t really see what you were going for here. I don’t get what the flip is here)

ur a slave to text, they call u legend & it makes me wanna stomp ya face in.
honestly... it's because ur portrayed isn't worthy of compensation.

(I didn’t care for this one. Portrayed is a slick wordplay but I doesnt really work both ways. Poor trade meaning works but the wording doesn’t really work with the portrayed meaning.)

always cave to the cops. in your case, I'm known to grab the Mac faster.
usually down to throw hands.. but it's always a strict nine for a rat bastard.

(Lol this probably went over heads cus this was fire to me. Set up was well except for if you using a Mac in the setup and a 9 in the second line - make sure there’s a transition. That’s nit picky but I’m always consistent bout that. Anyways strict 9 was dope. Set it up well)

insecure about your love life.. I'd hate to leave you stuck in these thoughts.
spoiler: that's what u shoulda done, to keep your bitch from sucking me off.

(The execution here was very messy - at best)

keep her outta pocket.. when I fuck ya girl I hit harder in motion
if she ends up pregnant & askin for money I'll kickstarter abortion

(Lmao I like this. Wording in the punch wasn’t perfect but I like the concept a lot)

I'll put you on display, I'm vicious af.. you just can't tell cuz I'm chill.
you keep showcasing & my revolver won't drop a shell when I kill.

(This was just okay at best. I get the casing/shell flip but the punch just doesn’t work both ways. I like the creativity but execution is lacking)



“Real Spit”....what a stupid name. Gayest shit I’ve heard in my life, fam..Jesus!
I cringe so hard at that “Monicker”...you’d think the nerdiest white man screamed it

(Lol a part of me laughed but this wasn’t good to me. The wp is a reach to me)

Was gonna smash your chick but EVERYONE has...The girl is just whilin’, friend
Would’ve left you with a Sorbet...but it’s obvious the nasty bitch needs more than her palate cleansed

(That sorbet wp has been done before on this site. Otherwise wording pretty good but just seen the concept down which takes away from the punch.)

You have that poor girl turning to drink. But I can’t blame her...so never mind that
Got the bitch so ‘half in the bag’...Finny’s expecting her to send her fries back

(Lol pretty good. I like the punch. I think you coulda found a more concise way to word the punch than the “finnys expecting her to...” part (prob didn’t have to mention finny at all for that punch) but that’s sorta a preference thing. Pretty good)

No one dominant as Cash...You HAD to know you’d probably get smacked
If ANY voter is For Real...then I guarantee they’re the EXACT opposite of that

(This is okay. The punch works but it’s very basic to me)

Act like I won’t blast you, I Double Dare you. Fam...stunt and you dead
If the Nickelodeon trouble...cause no slime coming out when them cans dump on his head

(Fire to me. The double dare punch/tie in in the set up is dope. Nickelodeon works for me. Cans dump on his head is dope. His just a really well put together line)

He taking his girl out for fancy meals like she ain’t 3 bills...dude’s kiddin’ himself
Quit fuckin’ with me, kid...You been droppin’ 100 on a Pig wayyyy before Blue did it to Zelph

(Nice. Well worded - good punch)

He’s BROKE. But I’ll still rob him for talking...Dude face it, it’s over
Talk Backwards and I’ll make you ‘Run your little green with the stick’...Luke training with Yoda

(Ambitious punch. This one had a lot of potential. I got it landing but coulda been heavy. The set up was good. Talk backwards was a good tie in. The run your little green with the stick got wording issues though. Works well for the robbing meaning but kinda a stretch for the yoga meaning. A lot here to carry the punch though)

From RB HOF to a Netcees no name ...Lol...but homie’s like “HELL NO, I’M A STAR!!!”
At the Lime only Real recognize Real. Which makes sense...Cause nobody else knows who you are

(The punch was simple but this is a quality personal. Good angle. Like is said, the punch was kinda simple but it still landed. Pretty good overall)


Overall I think this was a very close battle. Real was the more consistent out of the two. Not many bad misses and the strict 9 was a high point in the verse. Cashius started out slow af imo. He heated up about halfway through the battle and finished his verse with some heavy material. Out of the top 4 bars, Cashius probably had 3 with the Nickelodeon bar being the lotb. I think Spit had more jabs but Cashius had the heavier punches.

I got Cashius edging this

Mvgt Cashius

[Adonis]

I didn't really feel anything hit hard from spit, nothing devastating anyways. It wasn't bad by any means though. Cash had like 6-7 solid lines starting with "white dude/cringe" that shit leaned me. "Hell no I'm a star!!" Too. Some funny lines mixed with disses

V/Cash

[Zaddy]

CASHIUS WINS