Killing Spree (0-0) vs. John Dillinger (0-0) - KS WINS

[Zaddy]

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COMPLETE RULE THREAD:

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091

Killing Spree John Dillinger

[Kill Spree]

Going 12 cunt

[John Dillinger]

Word

[Kill Spree]

12 sent to zelph may add more.... But No ext

[Kill Spree]

From his “Do you ever feel suicidal” thread
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=136472
Yea I don’t really want to go in all that but yes I’m prescribed stuff

Sometimes they work sometimes not

I just don’t want shit to get to a point to where I cant talk myself out of situations when I get low and want to end shit

I ain’t tryna leave my mom or my girl. I couldn’t

But I’m not even 25 yet dawg and I’m dealing with this shit now. I just don’t want it to take over and me end up doing something stupid

That’s why I posted this to see if anyone else here deals with it, some do and some don’t and I appreciate everyone for their input






Shouldnt have fucked with me idiot... John Dillinger AKA Jit Dilly AKA I fuckin suck and should just kill myself



Faggot look...
I dnt chill w/the mentaly ill, this fuckin kid is soft
If U hang in a room w/me? I'll invite ur mom & girl over once the kicking stops
"I didnt drop my last 5 battles, NC feel bad for me!" - no 1 sorry dude
History repeats itself..but if U NS again? its likely ur sad & ur heart fallowed suit
Ur 1-2 against me! its easy to put this lame to waste
I write w/Diss comfort, U feel that way wen U see a razor blade!
I'll punch ur face in, faggot pray against Kill w/the writtens
Way I beat U to a pulpit will take god to pull U out of critical condition
This 9? turn faces wen its action time! fuk this prick!
Long barrel Kiss U while U lookin away..thats Hush's pic
Ur win? should be revoked! in this ring? Ur weak as shit
Nuthin from DIll'ish, Aw..S'why i'll take a belt off & beat this bitch
Ur texas trash! Im'a star w/the stick that'll clap ur head'er
I'll stop once U Benn Hit & ur put on Ice quicker than that Dallas Center

[John Dillinger]

Been getting progressively worse & to witness it is somethin g
Its obvious Flow bucked u... way before he left u runnin leagues
U look like a fuckin narc, don't be claiming that fuck the law stuff
But the only 'Wire Tap' u should worry bout now is the jab leaving ur jaw shut
Before Im in ya girls thighs G Ima let the 9 squeeze
& Zipped ur bodybag faster than that bitch unzipped my jeans
I'd let u live but feel like dumpin shells be nicer
The machine known to take limbs off like a careless deli slicer
I got the chrome cocked w/ overhead drone watch
Ironic, this Coke Head gonna be going out with his Dome Popped
Ur demeanor is pathetic dude
How did u make ur current living situation ur battle record too
Beat it bitch, u couldn't be a pimp if u freaked a trick
Ur biggest accomp in life? Playing second fiddle to Diasicc

[Zaddy]

Faggot look...
I dnt chill w/the mentaly ill, this fuckin kid is soft
If U hang in a room w/me? I'll invite ur mom & girl over once the kicking stops
with all those quotes and links I thought you were gonna drop a haymaker personal here but I wasn’t feelin this, could’ve done a lot more
"I didnt drop my last 5 battles, NC feel bad for me!" - no 1 sorry dude
History repeats itself..but if U NS again? its likely ur sad & ur heart fallowed suit
nah
Ur 1-2 against me! its easy to put this lame to waste
I write w/Diss comfort, U feel that way wen U see a razor blade!
decent here
I'll punch ur face in, faggot pray against Kill w/the writtens
Way I beat U to a pulpit will take god to pull U out of critical condition
alright cool
This 9? turn faces wen its action time! fuk this prick!
Long barrel Kiss U while U lookin away..thats Hush's pic
alright
Ur win? should be revoked! in this ring? Ur weak as shit
Nuthin from DIll'ish, Aw..S'why i'll take a belt off & beat this bitch
lmfaooooo I never wanna read another wp again after this one
Ur texas trash! Im'a star w/the stick that'll clap ur head'er
I'll stop once U Benn Hit & ur put on Ice quicker than that Dallas Center
mmm decent I guess



Vs



Been getting progressively worse & to witness it is somethin g
Its obvious Flow bucked u... way before he left u runnin leagues
ehh
U look like a fuckin narc, don't be claiming that fuck the law stuff
But the only 'Wire Tap' u should worry bout now is the jab leaving ur jaw shut
what does a wire tap have to do with a jab? Not feelin this
Before Im in ya girls thighs G Ima let the 9 squeeze
& Zipped ur bodybag faster than that bitch unzipped my jeans
decent, flow a bit off
I'd let u live but feel like dumpin shells be nicer
The machine known to take limbs off like a careless deli slicer
lol odd reference but ok
I got the chrome cocked w/ overhead drone watch
Ironic, this Coke Head gonna be going out with his Dome Popped
nah
Ur demeanor is pathetic dude
How did u make ur current living situation ur battle record too
maybe if you had substance here it woulda been decent. But it’s a miss
Beat it bitch, u couldn't be a pimp if u freaked a trick
Ur biggest accomp in life? Playing second fiddle to Diasicc
nah


Spree had the more consistent verse here, I felt like John pretty much gave up towards the end and just wrote his last 3-4 bars to meet the line limit but didn’t actually try.


Vote Killing Spree

[Maximus]

I dnt chill w/the mentaly ill, this fuckin kid is soft
If U hang in a room w/me? I'll invite ur mom & girl over once the kicking stops
HMM, AIGHT
"I didnt drop my last 5 battles, NC feel bad for me!" - no 1 sorry dude
History repeats itself..but if U NS again? its likely ur sad & ur heart fallowed suit
NAH
Ur 1-2 against me! its easy to put this lame to waste
I write w/Diss comfort, U feel that way wen U see a razor blade!
OK
I'll punch ur face in, faggot pray against Kill w/the writtens
Way I beat U to a pulpit will take god to pull U out of critical condition
PULPIT WORDPLAY HAS BEEN DONE TO DEATH AND YOU DIDNT REALLY PUT ANY NEWSPIN TO THIS, JUST OK
This 9? turn faces wen its action time! fuk this prick!
Long barrel Kiss U while U lookin away..thats Hush's pic
I HAVENT SEEN THE PIC BUT OK, COULD BE FIRE
Ur win? should be revoked! in this ring? Ur weak as shit
Nuthin from DIll'ish, Aw..S'why i'll take a belt off & beat this bitch
NAH
Ur texas trash! Im'a star w/the stick that'll clap ur head'er
I'll stop once U Benn Hit & ur put on Ice quicker than that Dallas Center
AIGHT

VS

Been getting progressively worse & to witness it is somethin g
Its obvious Flow bucked u... way before he left u runnin leagues
LIGHT
U look like a fuckin narc, don't be claiming that fuck the law stuff
But the only 'Wire Tap' u should worry bout now is the jab leaving ur jaw shut
OK
Before Im in ya girls thighs G Ima let the 9 squeeze
& Zipped ur bodybag faster than that bitch unzipped my jeans
OK
I'd let u live but feel like dumpin shells be nicer
The machine known to take limbs off like a careless deli slicer
OK
I got the chrome cocked w/ overhead drone watch
Ironic, this Coke Head gonna be going out with his Dome Popped
NAH
Ur demeanor is pathetic dude
How did u make ur current living situation ur battle record too
COULDA DONE MORE WITH THIS CONCEPT
Beat it bitch, u couldn't be a pimp if u freaked a trick
Ur biggest accomp in life? Playing second fiddle to Diasicc
NAHH

.
.
WELL, IM GIVING THIS KILLING SPREE, HE HAD LESS MISSES THAN HIS OPPONENT. HAVENT READ MUCH OF YOUR STUFF JOHN BUT SOME OF YOUR CONCEPTS WERE COOL, JUST NEEDED SOMETHING EXTRA FOR THAT HAYMAKER FEEL. PROPS TO BOTH FOR SHOWING.

[Orc]

Spree had the opener and the pulpit line that I liked. The hush bar was nice too actually. Fire

Vs

Wire was okay. Execution was cool. The rest was undercooked. I feel like you maybe just threw a verse up not to noshow because I’ve seen some good shit from you in the past

Spree gets it

Although I almost took it off him for the Dillashaw bar

[White LGI]

I wanted to vote against killing spree because he is a c.a.c and basically because he disgust me....but he won easy....the hush pic n Dallas center lines were fire....dilly was trash

[josh s]

From his “Do you ever feel suicidal” thread
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=136472
alls fair in a battle i guess, good thing ur getting mad cash for this verse






Shouldnt have fucked with me idiot... John Dillinger AKA Jit Dilly AKA I fuckin suck and should just kill myself
ok



Faggot look...
I dnt chill w/the mentaly ill, this fuckin kid is soft
If U hang in a room w/me? I'll invite ur mom & girl over once the kicking stops
sheeeesh
"I didnt drop my last 5 battles, NC feel bad for me!" - no 1 sorry dude
History repeats itself..but if U NS again? its likely ur sad & ur heart fallowed suit
the scheme continues
Ur 1-2 against me! its easy to put this lame to waste
I write w/Diss comfort, U feel that way wen U see a razor blade!
not bad
I'll punch ur face in, faggot pray against Kill w/the writtens
Way I beat U to a pulpit will take god to pull U out of critical condition
fire wordplay pulp it /pulpit damn, punch was good also
This 9? turn faces wen its action time! fuk this prick!
Long barrel Kiss U while U lookin away..thats Hush's pic
nice reference
Ur win? should be revoked! in this ring? Ur weak as shit
Nuthin from DIll'ish, Aw..S'why i'll take a belt off & beat this bitch
dillishaw, wording was ok, punch coulda been better
Ur texas trash! Im'a star w/the stick that'll clap ur head'er
I'll stop once U Benn Hit & ur put on Ice quicker than that Dallas Center
decent scheme, dallas star, put on ice benn hit, ooook


Been getting progressively worse & to witness it is somethin g
Its obvious Flow bucked u... way before he left u runnin leagues
i dont get the reference to flow, personal aspect is good tho
U look like a fuckin narc, don't be claiming that fuck the law stuff
But the only 'Wire Tap' u should worry bout now is the jab leaving ur jaw shut
nice punch, cool flip
Before Im in ya girls thighs G Ima let the 9 squeeze
& Zipped ur bodybag faster than that bitch unzipped my jeans
kinda simple, wording might get some reaction live, punch was ok
I'd let u live but feel like dumpin shells be nicer
The machine known to take limbs off like a careless deli slicer
ud have to be damn near retarded to cut off a limb with a deli slicer, even losing a finger would be an act of pure retardation haha
I got the chrome cocked w/ overhead drone watch
Ironic, this Coke Head gonna be going out with his Dome Popped
set up was odd, punch was solid
Ur demeanor is pathetic dude
How did u make ur current living situation ur battle record too
thats funny
Beat it bitch, u couldn't be a pimp if u freaked a trick
Ur biggest accomp in life? Playing second fiddle to Diasicc
not sure about the diasicc reference


over all; solid battle. killing spree could have done the whole verse off that personal but i'm glad that he didn't have to go that route. i think you coulda have had a great verse without outing the guy but like i said a battle is a battle. i wish i could get a couple of john's references so i could be a better judge of this battle but i think i can say killing spree had 1 or 2 better bars than john did. i see potential in dillinger cause his lines are simple but effective. i think the personals that killing spree had were more obvious and for that reason he got a better reaction from me.

good read fellas

v/ killing spree


on another note, stay up john dillinger. stay positive my guy, lifes great, im sure the whole community here has your back. except maybe killing spree. all jokes aside i enjoyed the battle.