Snitching is gangsta (0-0) vs. veritas (0-0) - SIG WINS

[Zaddy]

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Snitching is gangsta veritas

[White LGI]

Me vs a shrink.....story of my life

[White LGI]

A intellectual,claim ya minds ya grind,get paid cause u mentally go in..
So I'll pop the 9, and leave ya hustle on the pavement like Laura London's boyfriend...
Y'all do gun bars, I'm barred from guns..for felonies homie...
My gun'll take ya life..like tha feds'll do me if they catch it on me
They claim I'm dia,zelph,ks and every other wack nigga that do text
This battle familiar territory, you use to losing to every wack nigga on tha net
I'll spark ya face, and when that hammer spray it's no looking back
Cause when that flash hit ya eyes, u'll be carried by 6 men in black
Claim you godly on the mic...ya skills heaven sent...
Hip-hop fans must be Athiest cause they still looking for evidence...

[veritas]

If you ever need a battle idea for battering Dia, let Veritas help you…

Character on bankrupt. An obese and slovenly hog-faced scum,
Why your mom secretly wishes science sterilized your dad’s cum.
Chicken or egg: The psychology of failure or is it nurture verse nature,
that gave you preemie-baby facial swag beta biology during your birth incubator?
Instigator. Agitator. Masturbator. Alias. Lurker…. describes Dia in his essence
Tell ya moms “My love for you is making fuck,” When I beserk her she Silently Bobs on the reference.
I’m a Literal Doctor that literally rolls with a squad, each a dangerous killer
You're an army of one as the most pathetic lifelong virgin who favors a sped ed gorilla
You have been boarding for twenty years and still, ain't made a net friend,
That’s why I’m confident hell will freeze over if you touch a vagina before the U.S.’s debts end


You will die and no one will remember you.

[Zaddy]

A intellectual,claim ya minds ya grind,get paid cause u mentally go in..
So I'll pop the 9, and leave ya hustle on the pavement like Laura London's boyfriend...
lol it’s lauren not Laura. Could have been an ok bar but it missed
Y'all do gun bars, I'm barred from guns..for felonies homie...
My gun'll take ya life..like tha feds'll do me if they catch it on me
if you said you can’t have guns in your setup then say you have a gun in your second line you’re contradicting yourself like big time maybe?
They claim I'm dia,zelph,ks and every other wack nigga that do text
This battle familiar territory, you use to losing to every wack nigga on tha net
so you’re calling yourself wack? Not a good line man..
I'll spark ya face, and when that hammer spray it's no looking back
Cause when that flash hit ya eyes, u'll be carried by 6 men in black
alright this was a lot better, pretty cool
Claim you godly on the mic...ya skills heaven sent...
Hip-hop fans must be Athiest cause they still looking for evidence...
solid closer here


Vs


Character on bankrupt. An obese and slovenly hog-faced scum,
Why your mom secretly wishes science sterilized your dad’s cum.
nah
Chicken or egg: The psychology of failure or is it nurture verse nature,
that gave you preemie-baby facial swag beta biology during your birth incubator?
what a tongue twister
Instigator. Agitator. Masturbator. Alias. Lurker…. describes Dia in his essence
Tell ya moms “My love for you is making fuck,” When I beserk her she Silently Bobs on the reference.
i liked the first line but you lost me with the second
I’m a Literal Doctor that literally rolls with a squad, each a dangerous killer
You're an army of one as the most pathetic lifelong virgin who favors a sped ed gorilla
decent I suppose
You have been boarding for twenty years and still, ain't made a net friend,
That’s why I’m confident hell will freeze over if you touch a vagina before the U.S.’s debts end
nah


Dia started off pretty bad, he has the mechanics down but is struggling with making his lines solid and complete, the last two bars were a step up from the previous ones. Veritas I wasn’t really feeling this verse here, the punchlines weren’t really hitting for me and there was a lot of elementary stuff in here or just a lot that didn’t make sense. I thought v would take this but I have snit winning here.


Vote Snitching is gangsta

[Real Spit]

A intellectual,claim ya minds ya grind,get paid cause u mentally go in..
So I'll pop the 9, and leave ya hustle on the pavement like Laura London's boyfriend...
not really into disrespecting Nip but it made this feel brutal
Y'all do gun bars, I'm barred from guns..for felonies homie...
My gun'll take ya life..like tha feds'll do me if they catch it on me
ok
They claim I'm dia,zelph,ks and every other wack nigga that do text
This battle familiar territory, you use to losing to every wack nigga on tha net
decent
I'll spark ya face, and when that hammer spray it's no looking back
Cause when that flash hit ya eyes, u'll be carried by 6 men in black
creative, liked this a lot
Claim you godly on the mic...ya skills heaven sent...
Hip-hop fans must be Athiest cause they still looking for evidence...
nah

vs

Character on bankrupt. An obese and slovenly hog-faced scum,
Why your mom secretly wishes science sterilized your dad’s cum.
this seems weird af honestly
Chicken or egg: The psychology of failure or is it nurture verse nature,
that gave you preemie-baby facial swag beta biology during your birth incubator?
no
Instigator. Agitator. Masturbator. Alias. Lurker…. describes Dia in his essence
Tell ya moms “My love for you is making fuck,” When I beserk her she Silently Bobs on the reference.
you're killing me w/this weird shit
I’m a Literal Doctor that literally rolls with a squad, each a dangerous killer
You're an army of one as the most pathetic lifelong virgin who favors a sped ed gorilla
the concept could have been cool but your ending killed it
You have been boarding for twenty years and still, ain't made a net friend,
That’s why I’m confident hell will freeze over if you touch a vagina before the U.S.’s debts end
no..

Pretty one sided IMO.. I'm not sure what veritas was doing here but it wasn't quite what I expected in a league battle.. snit did aiight.. fairly solid..

v/Snit

[Maximus]

A intellectual,claim ya minds ya grind,get paid cause u mentally go in..
So I'll pop the 9, and leave ya hustle on the pavement like Laura London's boyfriend...
DIDN'T GET THE REFERENCE BRO, SORRY
Y'all do gun bars, I'm barred from guns..for felonies homie...
My gun'll take ya life..like tha feds'll do me if they catch it on me
BIG NO
They claim I'm dia,zelph,ks and every other wack nigga that do text
This battle familiar territory, you use to losing to every wack nigga on tha net
NAH
I'll spark ya face, and when that hammer spray it's no looking back
Cause when that flash hit ya eyes, u'll be carried by 6 men in black
AIGHT
Claim you godly on the mic...ya skills heaven sent...
Hip-hop fans must be Athiest cause they still looking for evidence...
OK

vs

Character on bankrupt. An obese and slovenly hog-faced scum,
Why your mom secretly wishes science sterilized your dad’s cum.
NAHH
Chicken or egg: The psychology of failure or is it nurture verse nature,
that gave you preemie-baby facial swag beta biology during your birth incubator?
NAH AGAIN
Instigator. Agitator. Masturbator. Alias. Lurker…. describes Dia in his essence
Tell ya moms “My love for you is making fuck,” When I beserk her she Silently Bobs on the reference.
WHAT?
I’m a Literal Doctor that literally rolls with a squad, each a dangerous killer
You're an army of one as the most pathetic lifelong virgin who favors a sped ed gorilla
NAH
You have been boarding for twenty years and still, ain't made a net friend,
That’s why I’m confident hell will freeze over if you touch a vagina before the U.S.’s debts end
NAH

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VOTE SNITCHING IS GANGSTER

[Orc]

SIG was cool. Nice style. Just need to be a bit more witty or spin the concepts a bit more. I liked the gunbar line because it was real. If you put a little more effort into the verses I’m sure you could come with some fire. I feel like you probably used to be good whenever you last done this.

Veritas while your verse was creatively worded there was no wit or any real semblance of an effective punchline. I don’t know why you can’t grasp the acceptable fundamentals of this niche writing style considering you’ve actually penned novels. But yeah not enough to win here.

Vote SIG

[Suthaveli]

I like snitch mib line. The nipsey line had potential

Vet verses kinda goes like he's reading your diagnosis back to you & adding insult opinions w.in them. In his line of work he's rly not suppose to give his opinion I guess unless the patient ask, right? By saying that, I can see how he would struggle to write a battle verse to insult another person. It's not w.in practice of his lifestyle nor line of wrk imo. I would love to see where he could get if he were to break that mold.

Mvgt- snitch

[DynamiCz]

A intellectual,claim ya minds ya grind,get paid cause u mentally go in..
So I'll pop the 9, and leave ya hustle on the pavement like Laura London's boyfriend...

This was fiya, stretched a lil bit flowing, but this was a hit

Y'all do gun bars, I'm barred from guns..for felonies homie...
My gun'll take ya life..like tha feds'll do me if they catch it on me

Simple, but nice

They claim I'm dia,zelph,ks and every other wack nigga that do text
This battle familiar territory, you use to losing to every wack nigga on tha net

Ehhh, not feeling this one to much

I'll spark ya face, and when that hammer spray it's no looking back
Cause when that flash hit ya eyes, u'll be carried by 6 men in black

Lol, this was light but still nice at the same time for some reason

Claim you godly on the mic...ya skills heaven sent...
Hip-hop fans must be Athiest cause they still looking for evidence...

Nice way to close out here as well

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Character on bankrupt. An obese and slovenly hog-faced scum,
Why your mom secretly wishes science sterilized your dad’s cum.

Lol nahhh on this opener b

Chicken or egg: The psychology of failure or is it nurture verse nature,
that gave you preemie-baby facial swag beta biology during your birth incubator?

Feel like a statement or just a run on sentence. No build up or punch displayed

Instigator. Agitator. Masturbator. Alias. Lurker…. describes Dia in his essence
Tell ya moms “My love for you is making fuck,” When I beserk her she Silently Bobs on the reference.

Didn't understand this one to much

I’m a Literal Doctor that literally rolls with a squad, each a dangerous killer
You're an army of one as the most pathetic lifelong virgin who favors a sped ed gorilla

Decent I guess

You have been boarding for twenty years and still, ain't made a net friend,
That’s why I’m confident hell will freeze over if you touch a vagina before the U.S.’s debts end

Ok closer here


Props to both here, this was a cool battle, but Snit gets this, verse was more consistent and overall just a better structured battle verse. V verse read more like sentences with no punches in some part. Didn't suck, but wasn't much of a battle verse for a opponent.

V- Snit