Innovator (0-0) vs. Adonis (0-0) - INNOVATOR WINS

[Zaddy]

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Innovator Adonis

[Inno]

Sup guh

[Adonis]

Yessir 10 cool?

[Inno]

10 it is

[Adonis]

I’ve heard of long hair don't care, but this guy really let lose; a fuckin goatee full of pubes
You're extra noob a "vet confused", but I admitt your flex is butter - Harvey Milk - After the Flu
I've seen your rise and your fall, only, its mostly the ladder
Which is ironic cuzzo, the only rung you reached is under my soles when I battle
I'm saying... Come on vader, why'd you have to go and remove the Mask?
Now, Boy! Meet World. His name Adonis, yours? It's just lost in the past
This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble
I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner
For reall though, we're cool, I just gotta be fed
I know you're Mid-West, me, California Kid. I eat toast, you, eat this toaster, in-bred

BANG!!







~

[Inno]

Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick
She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip.
If I said I came in her mouth, that’s a polite retelling of the whore
She’s got me deep in her web so when Internet I do more than explore
I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back
Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back
Let the pound ring, that bitch don’t have no missed calls
So when I touch you, there won’t be any hands to catch your fall
Always come up short, you give her 6 and she gets mad n throws fits
We don’t size up, I give her 12 cuz she says the shoe always fits

[Cashius]

Adonis def has a different style. You can tell he’s a topical guy. I wasn’t really feeling much of it. Everything was worded weird. A lot of it could’ve been over my head tho. Like the toaster in bred thing. I get the connection but it’s worded a way that took away a lot of the impact. Also, for a topical guy I was expecting more multi’s.


Inno has more of a traditional battle verse. Nothing really stood out. Opener was probably the best of his verse. Concepts just weren’t hitting for me. Didn’t get the hands line. Everything else, I got where you were going....it just didn’t connect for me.

Sorry, guys...I wasn’t feeling much from this battle. I think I have to give it to Inno because his verse was more my style as a traditional battle verse.

[Zaddy]

I’ve heard of long hair don't care, but this guy really let lose; a fuckin goatee full of pubes
You're extra noob a "vet confused", but I admitt your flex is butter - Harvey Milk - After the Flu
weird fuckin reference but I did you a solid and looked it up. I like the flow and the wordings good but the punch is decent
I've seen your rise and your fall, only, its mostly the ladder
Which is ironic cuzzo, the only rung you reached is under my soles when I battle
nah
I'm saying... Come on vader, why'd you have to go and remove the Mask?
Now, Boy! Meet World. His name Adonis, yours? It's just lost in the past
nah
This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble
I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner
decent
For reall though, we're cool, I just gotta be fed
I know you're Mid-West, me, California Kid. I eat toast, you, eat this toaster, in-bred
.....no no


Vs


Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick
She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip.
lol ok
If I said I came in her mouth, that’s a polite retelling of the whore
She’s got me deep in her web so when Internet I do more than explore
inc her nets? Not feelin this wp
I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back
Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back
this sounds good but is really only decent after deciphering the actual punch and reference lol
Let the pound ring, that bitch don’t have no missed calls
So when I touch you, there won’t be any hands to catch your fall
nah
Always come up short, you give her 6 and she gets mad n throws fits
We don’t size up, I give her 12 cuz she says the shoe always fits
ermmm


Adonis did what I suspected a topical head would naturally do, and that’s have good flow but lack in punchline content. Adonis had some decent attempts like the opener but didn’t really follow through. Inno had a cool opener and overall just a more battle style verse in general, the disses were better.


Vote Innovator

[Kill Spree]

I wasn’t feeling much of Adonis verse tbh... sorry man try dumbing it down and go for the throat


Inno- Opener was laughs. The ER joint was decent... oh your internet bar I didn’t really get man...and your closer was light. Decent verse


Got inno with more hits here.

[White LGI]

Vote in

Adonis was very simple and worded bad for the most part.

[Zaddy]

Vote in

Adonis was very simple and worded bad for the most part.

Nah


Remember what we talked about

[Diablo]

lmao when I enter net I think Inno was going for Zelph

[josh s]

I’ve heard of long hair don't care, but this guy really let lose; a fuckin goatee full of pubes
You're extra noob a "vet confused", but I admitt your flex is butter - Harvey Milk - After the Flu
not a bad line took a second to catch, funny, couple gay puns, i c u what u did there
I've seen your rise and your fall, only, its mostly the ladder
Which is ironic cuzzo, the only rung you reached is under my soles when I battle
nice 1, i think that's gonna go over domes like u on top of that ladder
I'm saying... Come on vader, why'd you have to go and remove the Mask?
Now, Boy! Meet World. His name Adonis, yours? It's just lost in the past
this seems pretty straight forward, not seeing any clever concept here, if i missed something feel free to lmk
This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble
I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner
lite punch
For reall though, we're cool, I just gotta be fed
I know you're Mid-West, me, California Kid. I eat toast, you, eat this toaster, in-bred
decent scheme, worded cool, punch was ok

BANG!!
pow!







~


Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick
She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip.
i've seen similar flips but this was ok
If I said I came in her mouth, that’s a polite retelling of the whore
She’s got me deep in her web so when Internet I do more than explore
decent scheme, wording was missing something, i like how u ended the line with i do more than explore.. that made me laugh
I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back
Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back
i don't get why that's a Cash back. feel free to explain
Let the pound ring, that bitch don’t have no missed calls
So when I touch you, there won’t be any hands to catch your fall
ok..
Always come up short, you give her 6 and she gets mad n throws fits
We don’t size up, I give her 12 cuz she says the shoe always fits
this sounded funny as hell


Over all: this was an interesting match up. adonis had a couple good concepts that maybe didn't the hardest but i still found them to be creative. (work on better wordplay and stronger punches, the wording on your closer was well done just old flips) Inno also had a couple good schemes. Innovator, ur punch lines were ok, i think a couple of them just didn't have the most attention to wording. i think both verses were creative, altho inno had a couple more dated concepts. all in all, there was a line from each battler that didn't make sense to me but for the most part i was able to catch the wordplays. good battle guys. i got a tie but as a tie breaker to keep things moving im gonna vote for the guy who i thought had the harder punchlines.

v/ Innovator

innos best bar was his closer and adonis best line was the ladder/rung line (good wording, solid execution)

[Allen Knight]

This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble
I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner

Vs


Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick
She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip.
I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back
Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back

V/inno, this was a ok battle both had some igh attempts, yah just need to word
shit harsher but i got innovator winning this one.

[BodySnatcher]

I’ve heard of long hair don't care, but this guy really let lose; a fuckin goatee full of pubes
You're extra noob a "vet confused", but I admitt your flex is butter - Harvey Milk - After the Flu
long bar brodie
I've seen your rise and your fall, only, its mostly the ladder
Which is ironic cuzzo, the only rung you reached is under my soles when I battle
st8
I'm saying... Come on vader, why'd you have to go and remove the Mask?
Now, Boy! Meet World. His name Adonis, yours? It's just lost in the past
nah
This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble
I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner
cool
For reall though, we're cool, I just gotta be fed
I know you're Mid-West, me, California Kid. I eat toast, you, eat this toaster, in-bred
lol ok


Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick
She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip.
lol
If I said I came in her mouth, that’s a polite retelling of the whore
She’s got me deep in her web so when Internet I do more than explore
ehh
I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back
Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back
I see what you did
Let the pound ring, that bitch don’t have no missed calls
So when I touch you, there won’t be any hands to catch your fall
ehh
Always come up short, you give her 6 and she gets mad n throws fits
We don’t size up, I give her 12 cuz she says the shoe always fits
decent closer


I got Inno brodies, keep at it!