Blas (0-0) vs. Maximus (0-0) - MAXIMUS WINS

[Zaddy]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON A MINIMUM OF 4 BATTLES WILL RESULT IN A DEDUCTION OF 2 VOTES IN YOUR BATTLE. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! VOTE ON 4 BATTLES MINIMUM OR YOU PAY THE PRICE. SIMPLE!


COMPLETE RULE THREAD:

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091

Blas Maximus

[Blas]

check, probably going 10 unless i feel motivated to write more or you drop more first

[Maximus]

10 is good buddy

[Maximus]

it's funerals when i invade zones, suckers get bucked with guns
i'll pull out 'deserts and storm' your hood to leave you covered in dust like one
this pussy aint bout that gangsta life, he'll get split with honed cleavers
i walk the talk, got that Cred with RealSpit, you're just the bitch they both ethered
so many face punches got your nostrils bleeding, i'm known to slay bums
feel the pain son, i'll have so much plasma coming out of that nose than rayguns
my savage deeds got coroners loathing, stab these dweeb till organs are showing
spill his guts out, we'll see more Blast issues than magazines reporting explosions
you know i roll with the glock to leave you six feet deep, expect cessation
keep claiming you're a beast and that heat will put you to sleep like estivation

[Zaddy]

MAXIMUS WINS

[Zaddy]

it's funerals when i invade zones, suckers get bucked with guns
i'll pull out 'deserts and storm' your hood to leave you covered in dust like one
ok
this pussy aint bout that gangsta life, he'll get split with honed cleavers
i walk the talk, got that Cred with RealSpit, you're just the bitch they both ethered
lol so many real Spit nameplays recently
so many face punches got your nostrils bleeding, i'm known to slay bums
feel the pain son, i'll have so much plasma coming out of that nose than ray guns
wording hurt my life here
my savage deeds got coroners loathing, stab these dweeb till organs are showing
spill his guts out, we'll see more Blast issues than magazines reporting explosions
lol cool
you know i roll with the glock to leave you six feet deep, expect cessation
keep claiming you're a beast and that heat will put you to sleep like estivation
what?


Overall cool little verse here, id like to see you venture out of your comfort zone sometimes and test the waters. Good job and thanks for showing man, please drop some votes this week.

[josh s]

it's funerals when i invade zones, suckers get bucked with guns
i'll pull out 'deserts and storm' your hood to leave you covered in dust like one
not bad, kinda lite
this pussy aint bout that gangsta life, he'll get split with honed cleavers
i walk the talk, got that Cred with RealSpit, you're just the bitch they both ethered
this was a cool line, name flips and personal were solid
so many face punches got your nostrils bleeding, i'm known to slay bums
feel the pain son, i'll have so much plasma coming out of that nose than rayguns
surprisingly never seen this flip, fire
my savage deeds got coroners loathing, stab these dweeb till organs are showing
spill his guts out, we'll see more Blast issues than magazines reporting explosions
lite
you know i roll with the glock to leave you six feet deep, expect cessation
keep claiming you're a beast and that heat will put you to sleep like estivation
that might be the first time any one ever rhymed estivation. you win regardless if he showed. and that's not a diss to blas cause he's got legit bars. but damn. estivation. the vocab of this guy, whos mans is this

[Blas]

it's funerals when i invade zones, suckers get bucked with guns
i'll pull out 'deserts and storm' your hood to leave you covered in dust like one
saw the desert concept recently which makes it hit less hard but its ok, connection is kinda meh just saying ull cover me in dust lolz
this pussy aint bout that gangsta life, he'll get split with honed cleavers
i walk the talk, got that Cred with RealSpit, you're just the bitch they both ethered
this was bad
so many face punches got your nostrils bleeding, i'm known to slay bums
feel the pain son, i'll have so much plasma coming out of that nose than rayguns
ull have plasma coming out of my nose? i must be missing something
my savage deeds got coroners loathing, stab these dweeb till organs are showing
spill his guts out, we'll see more Blast issues than magazines reporting explosions
my name isn't blast it's forced and this has been tried, wasn't a fresh enough flip
you know i roll with the glock to leave you six feet deep, expect cessation
keep claiming you're a beast and that heat will put you to sleep like estivation
ok

not a very good verse you're lucky i didn't show, sorry didn't feel like writing a text battle but here's some honest feedback to make up for it

pz