Dregs (0-0) vs. Suthaveli (0-0) - SUTHAVELI WINS

[Zaddy]

Rules

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http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091


Dregs Suthaveli

[Saint]

10

[Suthaveli]

Sure.

[Suthaveli]

Fuck grabbing quotes & waiting on this last min suspense shit, lemme talk to ya..


Guess whose champin, Infil-san? w. my market ability, it isn't tough my guy
Bet if I hinted it's someone blk in store, u'd follow em around yellin, "Hurry up & buy!"
Wait.Now he's white & from da lone star state!? idkwtf games he's on..
But we know da 'Resin' he acted & Texas Asian like parents of Futurama's Amy Wong
Res igged ya & in came Cash in hope ya status made major movements
Hey. U'll always be top tier in my eyes INF- & after dis murder I'ma get da tattoo prove it
& since ya nice w. dat edit button, it shld help ya irl faggot cuz issa fight:
^Watch. I post up on ya & da bs u already put out there'll start ta disappear on sight
Mufucka is'a character. Ya'll don't have'ta pay me ta blast dis whacky fuck
But if u guys put a bill on his head, I'll match & hv em resemble Elmer Fudd clappin Daffy Duck
Ya boii mean w. da left, son. Pump action's clean when I let one
If I pull dat trigger, da shotti'll raise ya, kid- Makin u its deceased stepson
Ya racist prick. Don't make me raise da fist in da air cuz ya fuckin up
I hv no issue exercisin my rights by continuously & givin ya face a lift w. uppercuts
When da tre spittin, ya face missin. My astrology sign says I'ma ape w. dis
Zodiac killer when lettin off da Taurus- & dat horoscope u from a great distance

Ay, take ya'll time proofreading his bars
16

[Zaddy]

INF

[Saint]

Ext. If granted.

[Suthaveli]

Pulling a Blue Bayou
Thas a no from me, dawg. Zunto

[Zaddy]

Suthaveli Wins

OPEN FOR FEED

[Zaddy]

Guess whose champin, Infil-san? w. my market ability, it isn't tough my guy
Bet if I hinted it's someone blk in store, u'd follow em around yellin, "Hurry up & buy!"
the setup was very choppy but the second line killed me lmao
Wait.Now he's white & from da lone star state!? idkwtf games he's on..
But we know da 'Resin' he acted & Texas Asian like parents of Futurama's Amy Wong
nah nah nah
Res igged ya & in came Cash in hope ya status made major movements
Hey. U'll always be top tier in my eyes INF- & after dis murder I'ma get da tattoo prove it
nice
& since ya nice w. dat edit button, it shld help ya irl faggot cuz issa fight:
^Watch. I post up on ya & da bs u already put out there'll start ta disappear on sight
worded in a way that made me not know what’s happening here
Mufucka is'a character. Ya'll don't have'ta pay me ta blast dis whacky fuck
But if u guys put a bill on his head, I'll match & hv em resemble Elmer Fudd clappin Daffy Duck
good concept but wording hurt it
Ya boii mean w. da left, son. Pump action's clean when I let one
If I pull dat trigger, da shotti'll raise ya, kid- Makin u its deceased stepson
wording
Ya racist prick. Don't make me raise da fist in da air cuz ya fuckin up
I hv no issue exercisin my rights by continuously & givin ya face a lift w. uppercuts
alright
When da tre spittin, ya face missin. My astrology sign says I'ma ape w. dis
Zodiac killer when lettin off da Taurus- & dat horoscope u from a great distance
nice, good closer


Overall a pretty good verse. Wording hurt you in some areas but overall you had a good amount of hits and this woulda been a good battle if you’d of let Inf drop. All good though, props for showing.

[Maximus]

Guess whose champin, Infil-san? w. my market ability, it isn't tough my guy
Bet if I hinted it's someone blk in store, u'd follow em around yellin, "Hurry up & buy!"
AIGHT, COOL
Wait.Now he's white & from da lone star state!? idkwtf games he's on..
But we know da 'Resin' he acted & Texas Asian like parents of Futurama's Amy Wong
NOT FEELING THIS
Res igged ya & in came Cash in hope ya status made major movements
Hey. U'll always be top tier in my eyes INF- & after dis murder I'ma get da tattoo prove it
COOL
& since ya nice w. dat edit button, it shld help ya irl faggot cuz issa fight:
^Watch. I post up on ya & da bs u already put out there'll start ta disappear on sight
HMM, OK
Mufucka is'a character. Ya'll don't have'ta pay me ta blast dis whacky fuck
But if u guys put a bill on his head, I'll match & hv em resemble Elmer Fudd clappin Daffy Duck
SORRY MAN, NOT FAMILIAR WITH THE REFERENCE, SO I DIDNT GET IT AND IM TOO LAZY TO GOOGLE LOL, COULD BE FIRE THOUGH
Ya boii mean w. da left, son. Pump action's clean when I let one
If I pull dat trigger, da shotti'll raise ya, kid- Makin u its deceased stepson
DAMN, AND HERE I WAS THINKING I HAVE BAD WORDING CAUSE ENGLISH IS A SECOND LANGUAGE FOR ME, BUT YOU TOOK AWFUL WORDING TO WHOLE NEW LEVEL HERE MAN, THIS WASN'T CLEAN, COOL CONCEPT THOUGH
Ya racist prick. Don't make me raise da fist in da air cuz ya fuckin up
I hv no issue exercisin my rights by continuously & givin ya face a lift w. uppercuts
PLAYED MAN, SEEN THIS FLIP EXACTLY THIS WAY BEFORE SO ITS A NO FOR ME
When da tre spittin, ya face missin. My astrology sign says I'ma ape w. dis
Zodiac killer when lettin off da Taurus- & dat horoscope u from a great distance
WITH MY ACCENT, ITS A BIT OF STRETCH BUT ITS FINE, STILL SOUNDS AIGHT
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Overall, i would say this wasn't a bad verse bro, wished your opponent would've showed up, sadly we're both in similar situations. anyways one gripe i have with this verse is your wording man, take time to clean your shit up and you'll be good, then apart from a couple of references i didn't get, your verse was decent man.
peace.

[josh s]

Fuck grabbing quotes & waiting on this last min suspense shit, lemme talk to ya..
speaketh


Guess whose champin, Infil-san? w. my market ability, it isn't tough my guy
Bet if I hinted it's someone blk in store, u'd follow em around yellin, "Hurry up & buy!"
ok, funny punch line
Wait.Now he's white & from da lone star state!? idkwtf games he's on..
But we know da 'Resin' he acted & Texas Asian like parents of Futurama's Amy Wong
punch was good, not getting the personal side of this, just unfamiliar with this site, and if it's a resin mic reference then the wordplay/name play is a force
Res igged ya & in came Cash in hope ya status made major movements
Hey. U'll always be top tier in my eyes INF- & after dis murder I'ma get da tattoo prove it
tear drop tat line, ok, pretty good
& since ya nice w. dat edit button, it shld help ya irl faggot cuz issa fight:
^Watch. I post up on ya & da bs u already put out there'll start ta disappear on sight
had to read this like 5 times cause u cant just use all the fucking letters, who cares how long the bar looks unless u just that lazy. other than that i like this line, solid personal and punch
Mufucka is'a character. Ya'll don't have'ta pay me ta blast dis whacky fuck
But if u guys put a bill on his head, I'll match & hv em resemble Elmer Fudd clappin Daffy Duck
bill/duck old flips
Ya boii mean w. da left, son. Pump action's clean when I let one
If I pull dat trigger, da shotti'll raise ya, kid- Makin u its deceased stepson
that's also played
Ya racist prick. Don't make me raise da fist in da air cuz ya fuckin up
I hv no issue exercisin my rights by continuously & givin ya face a lift w. uppercuts
i liked the wording of this punch
When da tre spittin, ya face missin. My astrology sign says I'ma ape w. dis
Zodiac killer when lettin off da Taurus- & dat horoscope u from a great distance
cool wording this was solid
Ay, take ya'll time proofreading his bars
16


dope verse, some played material but im sure ull have some fresher stuff next week. should have been a good battle, props for showing