Week 2: Allen Knight (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (0-0) - ALLEN KNIGHT WINS

[Zaddy]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON A MINIMUM OF 4 BATTLES WILL RESULT IN A DEDUCTION OF 2 VOTES IN YOUR BATTLE. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! VOTE ON 4 BATTLES MINIMUM OR YOU PAY THE PRICE. SIMPLE!


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Allen Knight Blue Bayou

[Blue Bayou]

Good luck Allen, you'll get the W I'm going 100

[Allen Knight]

Here an g/l but 100 lmao.

[Allen Knight]

need an ext yo.

[Blue Bayou]

Cool np

[Allen Knight]

Aka dexter morgan...

i'll murda ya fam...
& get'em disposed of, sprayin till theres only cannon smoke
this ain't a Estuary but im leavin bodies wet dumped on random coasts
u want beef.. i'll get drunk & drive into ya crew jus hittin faggots
its the art of war & the whip hittin ya team like egpytian hieroglyphic tablets
ur to pussy to go out wen ur in beef, ima sniper that'll wait till the next day
Dexa Scan the area & still catch a beam till u can see thru his face like a X-ray
u drop the same played af bars, concepts aint gotten all hype
ur wordplays Dragon Bleu & there more beat than cm punks last octagon fight
u stay w/ the weak athlete concepts, a crutch u been gainin
got enough sports teams down ur neck that shit could host spring training

sorry only got time for a quick 10..

[Blue Bayou]

Damn I had 16 too.. will cut down and match

[Blue Bayou]

u've been beat up for yrs here, my knuckles slammed quick
cuz Brochure ur ok w/ the hands but one hook'll fold u like pamphlet
-Allen Knight 2019

Ya chompin on men. This fags in a mag for cum
When Flo's like "Brochure".. He's answerin a gay sex ad in the back of one
-Untold in 2013

rolls upon rolls of the green bitch i'm paid n’ been a threat
the bandwidth is insane. your broke ass can barely pay for internet
-Blue Bayou on RB

ur dumb daughter trys to earn stacks daily, ugly ho not gettin a buck
she can't even make a Bandwidth that ass the internet even rejected the slut
-Allen Knight last week

ur trash & my shits like a shotty rippin, i homi victim's
u couldn't Taipei killer verse on a jap's plane bout to do a Kamkazee mission
-Allen in 2019

no matter what language u choose, you're wack. ya text game's not strong
that's real talk, you couldn't taipei dope line even if it was made in Taiwan
-Kenny the G circa 2008

some things never change...

you’ll die for those flips. the way i’m leavin you in shambles is brutal
Pad Thai material all you want...i got Two Sticks in hand that’ll scramble your Noodle
called me out on RB & got BODIED. why challenge a guy that always rips you queer?!
guess it makes sense you’d come after me...you have on every all-time list for yearsss
John dying was sad man. he taught us quick lessons with tales..
but don't fret, you’ll see a Singleton errytime your bitch steps on a scale
Al’s just a washed up pussy with a wack style whose talent’s been abandoned
can’t hang wit this New Era/Field. & that’s the only place we’ll see Allen w/ a Cannon
at ur porch for the guap mayne, cock bang soon as the glock’s aimed
Pole Out – i’ll have ‘Metal flyin thru ya Front Door’ like a Swat Raid

[Jabari Black]

i'll murda ya fam...
& get'em disposed of, sprayin till theres only cannon smoke
this ain't a Estuary but im leavin bodies wet dumped on random coasts

(This was light to me. Leaving bodies wet was okay but the body/body of waters been done - not too much but the rest of the punch was going to have to be nice for this to land heavy imo. Leaving bodies wet, dumped on random coasts doesn’t tie into the estuary extremely well - it works but it’s a loose association)

u want beef.. i'll get drunk & drive into ya crew jus hittin faggots
its the art of war & the whip hittin ya team like egpytian hieroglyphic tablets

(Lol my boy Allen pregaming for a hit and run. This was cool. Art of war portion of the punch was good and carried the punch. I didn’t care for the whip hitting ya team tie in just cus imthat coulda applied to anything slave related and I could be trippin but that’s not the first hieroglyphic I think of. Anyway, overall, this is pretty good)

ur to pussy to go out wen ur in beef, ima sniper that'll wait till the next day
Dexa Scan the area & still catch a beam till u can see thru his face like a X-ray

(This is fire. Dexa Scan flip was smooth and the see through his face like a x Ray a grimey and seamless way to end the punch)

u drop the same played af bars, concepts aint gotten all hype
ur wordplays Dragon Bleu & there more beat than cm punks last octagon fight

(Some of this going over my head but the part I do understand I didn’t care too much for. I’m assuming Dragon Bleu the nickname for whoever cm punk just battled? If not idk what that association is. Other than that, the draggin/dragon flip been done and ain’t that special to me, and saying his wordplay “dragging” and “beat” a lil weird to me)

u stay w/ the weak athlete concepts, a crutch u been gainin
got enough sports teams down ur neck that shit could host spring training

(Good angle hear, but the punch was light - this is okay at best)



you’ll die for those flips. the way i’m leavin you in shambles is brutal
Pad Thai material all you want...i got Two Sticks in hand that’ll scramble your Noodle

(It feel slightly unfair to critique this because I don’t get the pad Thai flip but i will ant way. I like the personal angle. Didnt care for the two sticks/noodle flip though - it’s essentially the same thing as be chop stick/noodle flip)

called me out on RB & got BODIED. why challenge a guy that always rips you queer?!
guess it makes sense you’d come after me...you have on every all-time list for yearsss

(Good personal. The flip is nice. Nice bar)

John dying was sad man. he taught us quick lessons with tales..
but don't fret, you’ll see a Singleton errytime your bitch steps on a scale

(Lmao fam this so damn outlandish. I ain’t care for this. He seeing a ton on a scale throwing me off lol - that’s a lot of weight. “A single ton” not really a phrase someone would use (they just say a on) and the single ton flip works but it ain’t perfect (the ton night stressed))

Al’s just a washed up pussy with a wack style whose talent’s been abandoned
can’t hang wit this New Era/Field. & that’s the only place we’ll see Allen w/ a Cannon

(Good line. Only critique is I think you prob coulda had a tie in to him not shooting or something bout gun bars or whatever. Good line though)

at ur porch for the guap mayne, cock bang soon as the glock’s aimed
Pole Out – i’ll have ‘Metal flyin thru ya Front Door’ like a Swat Raid

(Yep - nice closer. I like the flow. I’d avoid using cock bang in the future. Metal flying/swat raid an nice flip. Nice line)


I got blue taking this one. Solid verse from both even though I think this isn’t the best work from Allen. The wording was there as always but he just didn’t have the clever wordplay and the haymakers he normally has.

Blue was blue here. Blue wording make it where he rarely misses a punch. He had the more consistent verse here and he had some heavy punches here. The all time list personal was dope and you came with some good angles.

Overall pretty good battle but I got Blue taking it.

Mvgt Blue

[Zaddy]

i'll murda ya fam...
& get'em disposed of, sprayin till theres only cannon smoke
this ain't a Estuary but im leavin bodies wet dumped on random coasts
wasnt feelin this
u want beef.. i'll get drunk & drive into ya crew jus hittin faggots
its the art of war & the whip hittin ya team like egpytian hieroglyphic tablets
pretty cool
ur to pussy to go out wen ur in beef, ima sniper that'll wait till the next day
Dexa Scan the area & still catch a beam till u can see thru his face like a X-ray
nice
u drop the same played af bars, concepts aint gotten all hype
ur wordplays Dragon Bleu & there more beat than cm punks last octagon fight
nah
u stay w/ the weak athlete concepts, a crutch u been gainin
got enough sports teams down ur neck that shit could host spring training
decent at best


2 good
1 Decent
2 misses


Vs


you’ll die for those flips. the way i’m leavin you in shambles is brutal
Pad Thai material all you want...i got Two Sticks in hand that’ll scramble your Noodle
no
called me out on RB & got BODIED. why challenge a guy that always rips you queer?!
guess it makes sense you’d come after me...you have on every all-time list for yearsss
alright, solid personal
John dying was sad man. he taught us quick lessons with tales..
but don't fret, you’ll see a Singleton errytime your bitch steps on a scale
its pronounced single tin but due to language barriers I’ll let that pass. Decent
Al’s just a washed up pussy with a wack style whose talent’s been abandoned
can’t hang wit this New Era/Field. & that’s the only place we’ll see Allen w/ a Cannon
ok
at ur porch for the guap mayne, cock bang soon as the glock’s aimed
Pole Out – i’ll have ‘Metal flyin thru ya Front Door’ like a Swat Raid
the flow is great here but the punch itself isn’t amazing. Overall an ok bar


3 ok
1 Decent
1 miss


Close battle here, felt like this verse was a step down from both battlers. Blue had the more consistent verse with less clear misses, but also didn’t have any haymakers or wow’ing lines. Allen had a couple misses but had back to back nice lines which I believe did enough to carry the rest of the verse. Could definitely go either way.


Vote Allen Knight

[Suthaveli]

u want beef.. i'll get drunk & drive into ya crew jus hittin faggots
its the art of war & the whip hittin ya team like egpytian hieroglyphic tablets
ur to pussy to go out wen ur in beef, ima sniper that'll wait till the next day
Dexa Scan the area & still catch a beam till u can see thru his face like a X-ray

Vs

called me out on RB & got BODIED. why challenge a guy that always rips you queer?!
guess it makes sense you’d come after me...you have on every all-time list for yearsss
Al’s just a washed up pussy with a wack style whose talent’s been abandoned
can’t hang wit this New Era/Field. & that’s the only place we’ll see Allen w/ a Cannon

This is a close quick match up. Hard to call & depends on preference as usual. I luv the sheer cockiness of blues personal but as whole I feel like I enjoy Allen's 2 quotes better. Miss department I might side w. Allen a tad more too.
Nice quick one guys but I'm going to tilt towards

Mvgt- Allen

[White LGI]

I liked blue verse better....his opener was dope to me...I liked the singleton line missed but the rest was dope...

Allen had a solid showing with the tablets line n the closer was good but I thought the rest was pretty uninspired

Vote blue

[BodySnatcher]

'll murda ya fam...
& get'em disposed of, sprayin till theres only cannon smoke
this ain't a Estuary but im leavin bodies wet dumped on random coasts
this is aight
u want beef.. i'll get drunk & drive into ya crew jus hittin faggots
its the art of war & the whip hittin ya team like egpytian hieroglyphic tablets
dope
ur to pussy to go out wen ur in beef, ima sniper that'll wait till the next day
Dexa Scan the area & still catch a beam till u can see thru his face like a X-ray
dope shit again
u drop the same played af bars, concepts aint gotten all hype
ur wordplays Dragon Bleu & there more beat than cm punks last octagon fight
ehh
u stay w/ the weak athlete concepts, a crutch u been gainin
got enough sports teams down ur neck that shit could host spring training
i like this too tho



you’ll die for those flips. the way i’m leavin you in shambles is brutal
Pad Thai material all you want...i got Two Sticks in hand that’ll scramble your Noodle
see what you did but it lacks freshness
called me out on RB & got BODIED. why challenge a guy that always rips you queer?!
guess it makes sense you’d come after me...you have on every all-time list for yearsss
nice
John dying was sad man. he taught us quick lessons with tales..
but don't fret, you’ll see a Singleton errytime your bitch steps on a scale
ehhh
Al’s just a washed up pussy with a wack style whose talent’s been abandoned
can’t hang wit this New Era/Field. & that’s the only place we’ll see Allen w/ a Cannon
this is cool here
at ur porch for the guap mayne, cock bang soon as the glock’s aimed
Pole Out – i’ll have ‘Metal flyin thru ya Front Door’ like a Swat Raid
i fuck with this


I got Allen here... some dope quotable in this battle. Props OGs

[Sinacog]

Dope battle here guys..

Nice bout’ here..

Allen knight came quick witted while blue had nice wordplay..

Good work.. but I’m goiing with Allen knight..

[Zaddy]

ALLEN KNIGHT WINS