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Zaddy
05-06-2019, 04:34 PM
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Allen Knight Jabari Black

Jabari Black
05-06-2019, 05:25 PM
Check. You good with 10?

Allen Knight
05-06-2019, 08:31 PM
Sup & yea 10's good.

Jabari Black
05-09-2019, 08:34 PM
Lemme get that extendo

Allen Knight
05-09-2019, 09:53 PM
Werd up, u got it.

Allen Knight
05-10-2019, 09:56 PM
NC might not kno but..
i kno ur Sound pussy..strikta's boy had u terrified w/ cannons of heat
cuz Yukon everyone here but u hauled ass wen julio was tryna throw hands in the V
u looked weak as fuck, they stomp till u needed armored plates
i'd hit u w/ Strik Force but julio violated u & made it look like a Eric Garner case
fuck ya black panther nameplay, im sendin shells to slaughter all
& spray up Jabari Tribe till there middle region's leakin worse than a waterfall
u dont bust heat.. im shootin u in sections, abusin u w/ weapons
cuz that fake gun u Durid will have a priest readin at ur funeral procession
real rap u'll "Wake Up In The Sky" after AK rips ya verses
i'll snap on u like a Kodak, Black & these uppercutts'll hit picture perfect
extended the battle to today, cuz my blades ready to slash jaws
got ppl that'll kill ya cheap..fuck Black, Friday u'll see his neck cut half off

had only time for 12.

Jabari Black
05-11-2019, 06:06 PM
Stick up! Let’s see what the bread bout. Either give up the cash or the lead out/
Gun pointed ya Nike cap...if it ain’t enough funds...I’ll make the check bounce/
You got a LOT of dick riders....they all can get the shotty/
Cus if I see ya cheerleaders stuntin... ima catch a body/
Moddin w/ Zelph? I don’t even talk to 12. Rope around ya neck...throw u off the ledge/
I’ll have you hanging by a thread for tryna help a pig...that’s charlottes web/
You a known snitch - no tellin what this narc’ll say. For that you gettin slaughtered, snake/
If I catch him mic’d up - the razor cut em...n leaving Nixon wires like watergate/
Known shooter! Whole block say Jerry wylin. I’ll Creep up n get very violent/
No mask! You see I it flash without the disguise...then I Barry Allen/
U got pumps? My shotty different. We can trade shells - that’s the barter system/
Or the big colt - I’m heartless wit it. I’ll press the 5 to ya ear like it’s water in it/

Suthaveli
05-12-2019, 11:32 AM
Ok Allen verse is hard for me to vote on. From what I'm gathering with the 1st two bars Sound was ran off the site by Strika & his homie name Julio because they were trying to come for him irl? Strika from pg county, right? & Josh is from the V, right? That's a 295 or 495 or even i95 south trip so it wouldn't be far fetched. If someone has the time, pls link me. Btw, add me back on fb josh.

I will edit w.vote. just wanna make sure I hv my facts straight.


Ok.

i kno ur Sound pussy..strikta's boy had u terrified w/ cannons of heat
cuz Yukon everyone here but u hauled ass wen julio was tryna throw hands in the V
u dont bust heat.. im shootin u in sections, abusin u w/ weapons
cuz that fake gun u Durid will have a priest readin at ur funeral procession
real rap u'll "Wake Up In The Sky" after AK rips ya verses
i'll snap on u like a Kodak, Black & these uppercutts'll hit picture perfect

Vs

Stick up! Let’s see what the bread bout. Either give up the cash or the lead out/
Gun pointed ya Nike cap...if it ain’t enough funds...I’ll make the check bounce/
Moddin w/ Zelph? I don’t even talk to 12. Rope around ya neck...throw u off the ledge/
I’ll have you hanging by a thread for tryna help a pig...that’s charlottes web/
You a known snitch - no tellin what this narc’ll say. For that you gettin slaughtered, snake/
If I catch him mic’d up - the razor cut em...n leaving Nixon wires like watergate/
Known shooter! Whole block say Jerry wylin. I’ll Creep up n get very violent/
No mask! You see I it flash without the disguise...then I Barry Allen/

This was close but I would have to edge out jb here. Back & feed on the Eric gardner bar ultimately made me decide not to quote it although from what I've been told by a few people, shit was def facts . I felt jb verse a bit more which s why he gmv.

White LGI
05-12-2019, 07:20 PM
Eric Garner line was dope.....the throwing hands personal seems raw even though I don't know the details....the kodak black shit was trash...

Jabari was very lack luster...worse I ever saw from him honestly just wasn't feeling this verse

Vote ak

Cred
05-12-2019, 10:14 PM
i kno ur Sound pussy..strikta's boy had u terrified w/ cannons of heat
cuz Yukon everyone here but u hauled ass wen julio was tryna throw hands in the V
u looked weak as fuck, they stomp till u needed armored plates
i'd hit u w/ Strik Force but julio violated u & made it look like a Eric Garner case
fuck ya black panther nameplay, im sendin shells to slaughter all
& spray up Jabari Tribe till there middle region's leakin worse than a waterfall
real rap u'll "Wake Up In The Sky" after AK rips ya verses
i'll snap on u like a Kodak, Black & these uppercutts'll hit picture perfect

vs

Moddin w/ Zelph? I don’t even talk to 12. Rope around ya neck...throw u off the ledge/
I’ll have you hanging by a thread for tryna help a pig...that’s charlottes web/
Known shooter! Whole block say Jerry wylin. I’ll Creep up n get very violent/
No mask! You see I it flash without the disguise...then I Barry Allen/
U got pumps? My shotty different. We can trade shells - that’s the barter system/
Or the big colt - I’m heartless wit it. I’ll press the 5 to ya ear like it’s water in it/

BOTW fasho. Both had some shit forsure. AK came out the rip hitting while Black picked up towards the end of his verse. That 5 to ya ear shit was hard, and AK's garner line and jabari tribe bars were heat too. Good match y'all but AK edged it. that cheerleader line was way to lackluster and opener was too played.

Vote - Allen Knight

josh s
05-13-2019, 03:00 AM
Dope battle. I definitely am missing aks personals. Tried to read other votes to get the personals but this is going to effect my vote. And the Yukon wp was dope. Clearly u messed up the Druid line but I can it was a banger. Jabari has 1 miss and 1 kinda simple line with the cheerleader shit but the flash line and pig lines were dope. Put the five to ur ear shit was gas great visual. I hate to vote when I’m missing critical info, I can infer on the bars at hand but the impact isn’t there for me: either way I enjoyed reading this 1 props to both

V/ black

Sinacog
05-13-2019, 03:12 PM
Allen Knight -

Dope verse here. A lot of cool rhymes here, with a lot of cool metaphorical language here. Good punch-lines mechanism going forth. Nice work.

Jabari Black -

Very good verse here. The Nike line was dope, good work on that line. Good work al-together. Nice one.

Overall -

Dope verses, but I'm giving this to Jabari Black..

V/ Jabari Black

Zaddy
05-13-2019, 04:24 PM
NC might not kno but..
i kno ur Sound pussy..strikta's boy had u terrified w/ cannons of heat
cuz Yukon everyone here but u hauled ass wen julio was tryna throw hands in the V
i think you’ve got the wrong guy
u looked weak as fuck, they stomp till u needed armored plates
i'd hit u w/ Strik Force but julio violated u & made it look like a Eric Garner case
same as above
fuck ya black panther nameplay, im sendin shells to slaughter all
& spray up Jabari Tribe till there middle region's leakin worse than a waterfall
alright
u dont bust heat.. im shootin u in sections, abusin u w/ weapons
cuz that fake gun u Durid will have a priest readin at ur funeral procession
nah
real rap u'll "Wake Up In The Sky" after AK rips ya verses
i'll snap on u like a Kodak, Black & these uppercutts'll hit picture perfect
ok here
extended the battle to today, cuz my blades ready to slash jaws
got ppl that'll kill ya cheap..fuck Black, Friday u'll see his neck cut half off
alright


Vs



Stick up! Let’s see what the bread bout. Either give up the cash or the lead out/
Gun pointed ya Nike cap...if it ain’t enough funds...I’ll make the check bounce/
ok here
You got a LOT of dick riders....they all can get the shotty/
Cus if I see ya cheerleaders stuntin... ima catch a body/
decent here
Moddin w/ Zelph? I don’t even talk to 12. Rope around ya neck...throw u off the ledge/
I’ll have you hanging by a thread for tryna help a pig...that’s charlottes web/
this was nice
You a known snitch - no tellin what this narc’ll say. For that you gettin slaughtered, snake/
If I catch him mic’d up - the razor cut em...n leaving Nixon wires like watergate/
i think the wording hurt this, wasn’t feelin
Known shooter! Whole block say Jerry wylin. I’ll Creep up n get very violent/
No mask! You see I it flash without the disguise...then I Barry Allen/
wording, but this one was better
U got pumps? My shotty different. We can trade shells - that’s the barter system/
Or the big colt - I’m heartless wit it. I’ll press the 5 to ya ear like it’s water in it/
ehhh, decent



Allen’s first two bars really hurt him bad, I would need to see links but either way I’m sure you have JB confused for someone else. Aside from that your verse was pretty cool but definitely felt rushed. Jabari has LOTB with the Charlottes web bar then everything else was decent. Close call but I have Jabari for better misses and an overall better hitting verse.


Vote Jabari Black

Zaddy
05-13-2019, 04:25 PM
JABARI BLACK WINS