Blue Bayou vs Joe Boston[OPEN]

[Inno]

Summer Classic VII

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Rules


Due Dates:
Verses are due FRIDAY,
June 28th, 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due SUNDAY, June 22 , 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST
Voting ends SUNDAY, June 30th, 11:59 PM PST.
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Recycling = DQ.
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Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
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means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
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If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

Blue Bayou vs Joe Boston

[Blue Bayou]

Sup Joe

Max

[Joe Boston]

We meet again sup

[Joe Boston]

We can square off or get your mans bring one after another
Bet their all pussy, you’ll tell me Mahomes ain’t showing his face like it was ripped off a Madden 20 cover
My goons burn through rubbers plowing ur bitch in the ass we strip her for all her pride
Time you come home and asked for Bukkake we took turns cumming in her face and took the whip for a joyride
Blade will slide into his jugular easy I’ll laugh as I feel no regret
Have bullets from the four signing, you’d think he was surrounded by the barbershop quartet
Better yet I’ll dismember his arms n legs, all steel hammer to crush his phalanges
Protect his wife if I Hiram Walker to the exit, I’ll have both their brains leaking out darker than blackberry brandy
Everyone knows how dangerous Joe can be, don’t approach when the firearms equipped
Catch you while you’re sleeping the barrel will be under your nose like a breathe right nasal strip
Talk with loose lips I’ll slap ya, could give a fuck about your stature
Crack your Jawbone with so much force the steps you take before you fall could break a calorie tracker
You’re a known slacker, broke as fuck and not a provider
You live such an emotional roller coaster now you’re too overweight to fit in a one person single rider
Have your moms and sister as an appetizer u know later me n wifey getting wild
Whenever I’m at your house I deliver the goods, no wonder she tells your kid that he’s the mailman’s child

[Blue Bayou]

Joe Boston?!! Who?!

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128070



oh yeahhhhhhh the 200 loss loser that has always lacked respect
you’re the ‘douchebags embarrassed’ & whose girl refers to him that way after sex
sawed-off bigger than Ortiz so there’s mad distortion when i bang clips
buckshots. when he hears a Big Papi’s not gunna end up as fortunate as David
if this guy keeps chirping i’ma hit em til his eyes be squirting
make’em swallow the barrel – that’s a bigger Bust in Boston then Kyrie Irving
^^now those are fresh Boston lines. u’ve lost ya mind thinkin you can drop me dude
squad hit yaaa we cock these tools. ‘end ya set’ w/a Tommy & some Drums like we Mötley Crüe
we’ve squared off a lot a times in the past & i always dropped lines that dazzled
i liked our second best...but regardless you’ve been that every time we’ve battled
& ya you fuck your girl but she’s always left sad and in tears..
serious, if she’s askin for mojo it’s cuz she hasn’t ‘felt the magic’ in years
stud shooter. i pump rugers point blank & when they uncork ya headless
blood all over my mink - Deferral be Read like a judge sayin court’s suspended
you’re gettin’ murdered pussy it’s time you learned i was born for clippin
first shot don’t kill you, i’ll give you the whole clip like a paid for porn subscription

[Sinacog]

Joe Boston -

We can square off or get your mans bring one after another
Bet their all pussy, you’ll tell me Mahomes ain’t showing his face like it was ripped off a Madden 20 cover

This was cool.

My goons burn through rubbers plowing ur bitch in the ass we strip her for all her pride
Time you come home and asked for Bukkake we took turns cumming in her face and took the whip for a joyride

lmao, this was nice.

Blade will slide into his jugular easy I’ll laugh as I feel no regret
Have bullets from the four signing, you’d think he was surrounded by the barbershop quartet

This was dope.


Better yet I’ll dismember his arms n legs, all steel hammer to crush his phalanges
Protect his wife if I Hiram Walker to the exit, I’ll have both their brains leaking out darker than blackberry brandy

This was cool.

Everyone knows how dangerous Joe can be, don’t approach when the firearms equipped
Catch you while you’re sleeping the barrel will be under your nose like a breathe right nasal strip

This was cool.

Talk with loose lips I’ll slap ya, could give a fuck about your stature
Crack your Jawbone with so much force the steps you take before you fall could break a calorie tracker

lmao, this was nice.

You’re a known slacker, broke as fuck and not a provider
You live such an emotional roller coaster now you’re too overweight to fit in a one person single rider

This was cool.

Have your moms and sister as an appetizer u know later me n wifey getting wild
Whenever I’m at your house I deliver the goods, no wonder she tells your kid that he’s the mailman’s child

This was dope.

Blue Bayou -

oh yeahhhhhhh the 200 loss loser that has always lacked respect
you’re the ‘douchebags embarrassed’ & whose girl refers to him that way after sex

This was okay.

sawed-off bigger than Ortiz so there’s mad distortion when i bang clips
buckshots. when he hears a Big Papi’s not gunna end up as fortunate as David

This was okay, as-well. It was a cool shot.

if this guy keeps chirping i’ma hit em til his eyes be squirting
make’em swallow the barrel – that’s a bigger Bust in Boston then Kyrie Irving

lmao, this was cool.

^^now those are fresh Boston lines. u’ve lost ya mind thinkin you can drop me dude
squad hit yaaa we cock these tools. ‘end ya set’ w/a Tommy & some Drums like we Mötley Crüe

This was cool.

we’ve squared off a lot a times in the past & i always dropped lines that dazzled
i liked our second best...but regardless you’ve been that every time we’ve battled

This was cool.

& ya you fuck your girl but she’s always left sad and in tears..
serious, if she’s askin for mojo it’s cuz she hasn’t ‘felt the magic’ in years

This was cool.

stud shooter. i pump rugers point blank & when they uncork ya headless
blood all over my mink - Deferral be Read like a judge sayin court’s suspended

This was dope.

you’re gettin’ murdered pussy it’s time you learned i was born for clippin
first shot don’t kill you, i’ll give you the whole clip like a paid for porn subscription

lmao, this was cool.

Overall -

Dope battle, good verses from both. I have Blue Bayou winning; both did really well; nice one.

[Crash Carson]

I got blue for the kyrie Irving- porn subscription. All that.
Joe I feel like you had the concepts but couldnt get the power you needed out of them for the most part. If it wasn't against this drop you might have had a better chance. The brandy line for instance was pretty decent. But you would've had to pack in more punches to compete here. The closer was kind of decent too. Not horrible just not gonna get my vote here sorry

Vote - Blue Bayou

[Answer]

We can square off or get your mans bring one after another
Bet their all pussy, you’ll tell me Mahomes ain’t showing his face like it was ripped off a Madden 20 cover

dope opener

My goons burn through rubbers plowing ur bitch in the ass we strip her for all her pride
Time you come home and asked for Bukkake we took turns cumming in her face and took the whip for a joyride

is this supposed to be boo car key? nawwww. the overall wording is well executed, but I just cant down with that wp

Blade will slide into his jugular easy I’ll laugh as I feel no regret
Have bullets from the four signing, you’d think he was surrounded by the barbershop quartet

this is alright but I feel like i've witnessed a few singing bars, especially from live battles. I wish this had a bit more of an original spin to it

Better yet I’ll dismember his arms n legs, all steel hammer to crush his phalanges
Protect his wife if I Hiram Walker to the exit, I’ll have both their brains leaking out darker than blackberry brandy

this is ok. it would've been dope but hiram is pronounced "Hi-rum", not "hear 'em"

Everyone knows how dangerous Joe can be, don’t approach when the firearms equipped
Catch you while you’re sleeping the barrel will be under your nose like a breathe right nasal strip

solid. I can nitpick about the logistics of this, but it's decent

Talk with loose lips I’ll slap ya, could give a fuck about your stature
Crack your Jawbone with so much force the steps you take before you fall could break a calorie tracker

A bit straightforward, but overall I thought this was good

You’re a known slacker, broke as fuck and not a provider
You live such an emotional roller coaster now you’re too overweight to fit in a one person single rider

Solid, but something feels like it's missing

Have your moms and sister as an appetizer u know later me n wifey getting wild
Whenever I’m at your house I deliver the goods, no wonder she tells your kid that he’s the mailman’s child

solid closer, no real complaints but maybe the wording toward the end could've resonated more

oh yeahhhhhhh the 200 loss loser that has always lacked respect
you’re the ‘douchebags embarrassed’ & whose girl refers to him that way after sex

eh wording on the actual wp seems a little bit wonky but overall it's a solid opener

sawed-off bigger than Ortiz so there’s mad distortion when i bang clips
buckshots. when he hears a Big Papi’s not gunna end up as fortunate as David

this is dope, no complaints

if this guy keeps chirping i’ma hit em til his eyes be squirting
make’em swallow the barrel – that’s a bigger Bust in Boston then Kyrie Irving

this comes up a bit shy of being a haymaker in my eyes, but still good

^^now those are fresh Boston lines. u’ve lost ya mind thinkin you can drop me dude
squad hit yaaa we cock these tools. ‘end ya set’ w/a Tommy & some Drums like we Mötley Crüe

eh, the bar itself would be fire if it were fresh but I've seen enough tommy & drum lines. The motley crue aspect of it is a fresh flip so it's cool, but the core of it is a bit played.

we’ve squared off a lot a times in the past & i always dropped lines that dazzled
i liked our second best...but regardless you’ve been that every time we’ve battled

dope

& ya you fuck your girl but she’s always left sad and in tears..
serious, if she’s askin for mojo it’s cuz she hasn’t ‘felt the magic’ in years

fire

stud shooter. i pump rugers point blank & when they uncork ya headless
blood all over my mink - Deferral be Read like a judge sayin court’s suspended

bar is solid, wp is just barely passable, but something didn't quite land for me

you’re gettin’ murdered pussy it’s time you learned i was born for clippin
first shot don’t kill you, i’ll give you the whole clip like a paid for porn subscription

eh its ok. you know clip bars aren't fresh. Even if you kept this in your verse, I wish you would've closed with the mojo bar instead



overall this is a dope showing from both sides. I've only read 3 of the battles so far, but I wouldn't be surprised if it's my favorite of the round. Joe's verse was dope, but there were a few really small things I saw in some of his bars that made the difference between being good vs. great. Blue had a couple bars that were worded really well & fresh flips, but they were still based on old concepts at the foundation. That being said, I think he had more haymakers that really landed with me. I'm not really sure what I've got for botb, I liked mahomes, mojo, and the big papi bars equally.

overall v/ blue bayou

[Aero]

JB:

We can square off or get your mans bring one after another
Bet their all pussy, you’ll tell me Mahomes ain’t showing his face like it was ripped off a Madden 20 cover
almost
My goons burn through rubbers plowing ur bitch in the ass we strip her for all her pride
Time you come home and asked for Bukkake we took turns cumming in her face and took the whip for a joyride
lol this was good... setup could've included something about him being confident in his girl
Blade will slide into his jugular easy I’ll laugh as I feel no regret
Have bullets from the four signing, you’d think he was surrounded by the barbershop quartet
nice
Better yet I’ll dismember his arms n legs, all steel hammer to crush his phalanges
Protect his wife if I Hiram Walker to the exit, I’ll have both their brains leaking out darker than blackberry brandy
almost
Everyone knows how dangerous Joe can be, don’t approach when the firearms equipped
Catch you while you’re sleeping the barrel will be under your nose like a breathe right nasal strip
a simple simile.. ok
Talk with loose lips I’ll slap ya, could give a fuck about your stature
Crack your Jawbone with so much force the steps you take before you fall could break a calorie tracker
almost
You’re a known slacker, broke as fuck and not a provider
You live such an emotional roller coaster now you’re too overweight to fit in a one person single rider
no
Have your moms and sister as an appetizer u know later me n wifey getting wild
Whenever I’m at your house I deliver the goods, no wonder she tells your kid that he’s the mailman’s child
lol whatever

BB:

oh yeahhhhhhh the 200 loss loser that has always lacked respect
you’re the ‘douchebags embarrassed’ & whose girl refers to him that way after sex
almost lol
sawed-off bigger than Ortiz so there’s mad distortion when i bang clips
buckshots. when he hears a Big Papi’s not gunna end up as fortunate as David
predictable
if this guy keeps chirping i’ma hit em til his eyes be squirting
make’em swallow the barrel – that’s a bigger Bust in Boston then Kyrie Irving
cool
^^now those are fresh Boston lines. u’ve lost ya mind thinkin you can drop me dude
squad hit yaaa we cock these tools. ‘end ya set’ w/a Tommy & some Drums like we Mötley Crüe
fire
we’ve squared off a lot a times in the past & i always dropped lines that dazzled
i liked our second best...but regardless you’ve been that every time we’ve battled
coolish
& ya you fuck your girl but she’s always left sad and in tears..
serious, if she’s askin for mojo it’s cuz she hasn’t ‘felt the magic’ in years
haha
stud shooter. i pump rugers point blank & when they uncork ya headless
blood all over my mink - Deferral be Read like a judge sayin court’s suspended
nah.. couldve done more with the wp
you’re gettin’ murdered pussy it’s time you learned i was born for clippin
first shot don’t kill you, i’ll give you the whole clip like a paid for porn subscription
lol we know you have a subscription



Bayou was more consistent here and had more lines I liked. Good battle though.

V/ Blue

[Cashius]

Barbershop Quartet

Vs

Big Papi, Motley Crew, second best

Just wasn’t feeling much from Joe. Maybe try to be more concise with your concepts. Felt like to took a whole lot of words to not say much. Everything in Blue’s verse was at least ok. I quoted the standouts. Just on a different level here.

Vote-Blue

[Saint]

Joe had an ok verse. cool concepts w/ rushed wording or overwriting at times. Blue had at least 2 of the better hits w/ Motley & Big Papi - Mojo was ok, second best was coo

V Blue, better technical verse

[BodySnatcher]

Vote Blue