Cashius vs Brokenhal0[OPEN]

[Inno]

Summer Classic VII

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Due Dates:
Verses are due FRIDAY,
June 28th, 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST.
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Cashius vs brokenhal0

[brokenhal0]

16

[Cashius]

10

[brokenhal0]

Ill walk up on you with a lit stick of dynamite,throw it at you and wifey
its gonna be a fire night,body parts,ya might be smart,but these times is mighty dark
watch me cast this clay,like a mighty god,hard to find,and you might be lost
yell at your kids until they tear,then hit em with a righteous cross
mohammad couldn't even rope this dope,ali how i float and smoke,
cash is now coma-tosed,he's looking like oprah bro,a tranny with bars,
east village,hopeless joke,roseanne,how i write em off his only show,
he's hype of course,cash is cash money,pull the plug, life support,
if lil wayne and eminem mighty morphed and became wayhiminem,
you got cashius..bro,i feel bad for your kids,they look like addicts tho
little monsters,fred savage joke,savage how i smack ya folks
cash is mad..why?..i was drunk, and still wouldn't fuck his damn girl,
she look like ron perlman,if he was a cam girl ,miss piggy with a man bun
damn son,if i had to fuck that,id shoot myself with a handgun
your girls like a pizzeria..how?..cause she slice like a cutter do
toss her in the oven,all it took was 10 minutes,to cook away her love for you
he wears the belt alright,it hold's up his panty shears,he calls his van the candy lair
heard you coach youth badminton cashious..parents..you should be really scared.

[Cashius]

Are you fucking lost?! This the Classic...all you do is write topicals and babble
^THAT looks like you thought this was the AOWL and your topic was “Why I Shouldn’t Battle”
I get in a bitches ribbbzzzz...the sounds she be makin’ is way past moanin’
You’re such a geek...Only time YOU’RE fucking deep is in your gay man poems
You’ll get shot on sight, faggot...I’ll come hard with the pound and you dead
“Halo”? makes sense...cause you’ll be in heaven when the gawd put that round on your head
If a female says she wants you to smash...then the chick is undoubtedly faking, dude
Only bitches feeling a broken bone...are hurting themselves just to get out of a date with you
I can’t believe you posted 16 after I said 10...Son, Cashius was mad
But I get it...you’re just trying to get the most out of the ONE battle you’ll have
I got fingernail marks all over my back and vertebrae...Leavin’ bitches in pain, the shit is insane
Only ones putting scratches all over Halo discs are in their parent’s basement playing video games
In topicals you open up about birds and how your feelings are dark
Gayyyyyyy...but I got a bird that’ll open up and REALLY start spilling your heart
I keep one hand in my pocket...the other one will ALWAYS stay on the pound, you fake
What I’m saying is what I Draw with my Free Hand will leave you gone Without a Trace

[Sinacog]

Br0ken Halo -

Ill walk up on you with a lit stick of dynamite,throw it at you and wifey
its gonna be a fire night,body parts,ya might be smart,but these times is mighty dark

This was cool.

watch me cast this clay,like a mighty god,hard to find,and you might be lost
yell at your kids until they tear,then hit em with a righteous cross

This was cool

mohammad couldn't even rope this dope,ali how i float and smoke,
cash is now coma-tosed,he's looking like oprah bro,a tranny with bars,

This was cool.

east village,hopeless joke,roseanne,how i write em off his only show,
he's hype of course,cash is cash money,pull the plug, life support,

This was nice.


if lil wayne and eminem mighty morphed and became wayhiminem,
you got cashius..bro,i feel bad for your kids,they look like addicts tho

This was okay.

little monsters,fred savage joke,savage how i smack ya folks
cash is mad..why?..i was drunk, and still wouldn't fuck his damn girl,

This was cool.

she look like ron perlman,if he was a cam girl ,miss piggy with a man bun
damn son,if i had to fuck that,id shoot myself with a handgun

This was cool.

your girls like a pizzeria..how?..cause she slice like a cutter do
toss her in the oven,all it took was 10 minutes,to cook away her love for you

lmao, nice one.

he wears the belt alright,it hold's up his panty shears,he calls his van the candy lair
heard you coach youth badminton cashious..parents..you should be really scared.

This was cool.

Cashius -

re you fucking lost?! This the Classic...all you do is write topicals and babble
^THAT looks like you thought this was the AOWL and your topic was “Why I Shouldn’t Battle”

This was cool, lol.

I get in a bitches ribbbzzzz...the sounds she be makin’ is way past moanin’
You’re such a geek...Only time YOU’RE fucking deep is in your gay man poems

This was cool.

You’ll get shot on sight, faggot...I’ll come hard with the pound and you dead
“Halo”? makes sense...cause you’ll be in heaven when the gawd put that round on your head

This was cool.

If a female says she wants you to smash...then the chick is undoubtedly faking, dude
Only bitches feeling a broken bone...are hurting themselves just to get out of a date with you

This was cool.


I can’t believe you posted 16 after I said 10...Son, Cashius was mad
But I get it...you’re just trying to get the most out of the ONE battle you’ll have

This was cool.

I got fingernail marks all over my back and vertebrae...Leavin’ bitches in pain, the shit is insane
Only ones putting scratches all over Halo discs are in their parent’s basement playing video games

This was nice, lol.

In topicals you open up about birds and how your feelings are dark
Gayyyyyyy...but I got a bird that’ll open up and REALLY start spilling your heart

This was niice.

I keep one hand in my pocket...the other one will ALWAYS stay on the pound, you fake
What I’m saying is what I Draw with my Free Hand will leave you gone Without a Trace

This was cool.

Overall -

Dope battle, guys. I have Cashius winning..

[slecht]

Ill walk up on you with a lit stick of dynamite,throw it at you and wifey
its gonna be a fire night,body parts,ya might be smart,but these times is mighty dark
watch me cast this clay,like a mighty god,hard to find,and you might be lost
yell at your kids until they tear,then hit em with a righteous cross
mohammad couldn't even rope this dope,ali how i float and smoke,

vs

Are you fucking lost?! This the Classic...all you do is write topicals and babble
^THAT looks like you thought this was the AOWL and your topic was “Why I Shouldn’t Battle”
I get in a bitches ribbbzzzz...the sounds she be makin’ is way past moanin’
You’re such a geek...Only time YOU’RE fucking deep is in your gay man poems
You’ll get shot on sight, faggot...I’ll come hard with the pound and you dead
“Halo”? makes sense...cause you’ll be in heaven when the gawd put that round on your head
If a female says she wants you to smash...then the chick is undoubtedly faking, dude

I got fingernail marks all over my back and vertebrae...Leavin’ bitches in pain, the shit is insane
Only ones putting scratches all over Halo discs are in their parent’s basement playing video games
In topicals you open up about birds and how your feelings are dark
Gayyyyyyy...but I got a bird that’ll open up and REALLY start spilling your heart


BH was cool but needs some work with his wording. Punches were decent. Quoting those there


Cashius had a better performance. Overall, punchline packed verse.

Vote - Ca$hius

[Crash Carson]

Broken halo. Not much memorable here. The roseann was ok. That wayheminem idk if that's supposed to be kamehaha but that was pretty bad. Your structure needs some tweaking also, didn't help the flow. Closing line was a jab and the miss piggy man bun line had something going. Keep at it and use more of your time.

Cassius. Wtf. Probably only 'bad' bar was the broken bone. It was better than each line. The vertabraye halo disc. Fuck he ain't cumin back. The opener does actually seem a little weaker but it works good. Good use of wordplays and multis just overall dope. The 10/16 set up punch man you got a lot out of that one. Somebody really wanted to win, or send a message, either way mission accomplished.

Vote - Cashius

[Aero]

Broken:

Ill walk up on you with a lit stick of dynamite,throw it at you and wifey
its gonna be a fire night,body parts,ya might be smart,but these times is mighty dark
ok.. no punch though
watch me cast this clay,like a mighty god,hard to find,and you might be lost
yell at your kids until they tear,then hit em with a righteous cross
ok
mohammad couldn't even rope this dope,ali how i float and smoke,
cash is now coma-tosed,he's looking like oprah bro,a tranny with bars,
nah
east village,hopeless joke,roseanne,how i write em off his only show,
he's hype of course,cash is cash money,pull the plug, life support,
nah
if lil wayne and eminem mighty morphed and became wayhiminem,
you got cashius..bro,i feel bad for your kids,they look like addicts tho
nah
little monsters,fred savage joke,savage how i smack ya folks
cash is mad..why?..i was drunk, and still wouldn't fuck his damn girl,
didn't rhyme
she look like ron perlman,if he was a cam girl ,miss piggy with a man bun
damn son,if i had to fuck that,id shoot myself with a handgun
ok
your girls like a pizzeria..how?..cause she slice like a cutter do
toss her in the oven,all it took was 10 minutes,to cook away her love for you
lol I would've liked this even more if you said come get a slice of love or something
he wears the belt alright,it hold's up his panty shears,he calls his van the candy lair
heard you coach youth badminton cashious..parents..you should be really scared.
no

Cashius:

Are you fucking lost?! This the Classic...all you do is write topicals and babble
^THAT looks like you thought this was the AOWL and your topic was “Why I Shouldn’t Battle”
feed and not a good punch
I get in a bitches ribbbzzzz...the sounds she be makin’ is way past moanin’
You’re such a geek...Only time YOU’RE fucking deep is in your gay man poems
nah
You’ll get shot on sight, faggot...I’ll come hard with the pound and you dead
“Halo”? makes sense...cause you’ll be in heaven when the gawd put that round on your head
cool
If a female says she wants you to smash...then the chick is undoubtedly faking, dude
Only bitches feeling a broken bone...are hurting themselves just to get out of a date with you
LOL good
I can’t believe you posted 16 after I said 10...Son, Cashius was mad
But I get it...you’re just trying to get the most out of the ONE battle you’ll have
feed again.. harsh though
I got fingernail marks all over my back and vertebrae...Leavin’ bitches in pain, the shit is insane
Only ones putting scratches all over Halo discs are in their parent’s basement playing video games
nice
In topicals you open up about birds and how your feelings are dark
Gayyyyyyy...but I got a bird that’ll open up and REALLY start spilling your heart
cool
I keep one hand in my pocket...the other one will ALWAYS stay on the pound, you fake
What I’m saying is what I Draw with my Free Hand will leave you gone Without a Trace
ok



Cashius wins here.

[Answer]

eh im a bit lazy to do a full breakdown. The outcome is pretty clear, cash could've done 10 and still walked away with this clean. 16 was overkill. halo should work on integrating a bit more of a "set-up then punchline" format and integrate more wordplay into his bars. Also I'd assume halo is another sinacog alias based on all the commas.

v/ cashius

[Saint]

I've got Cashius here. Broken Halo doesn't really battle well from the looks of it Bit awkward structure imo. Lopsided victory

Broken bone & scratches were highlights.

V Cash

[BodySnatcher]

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