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Sharp
07-01-2019, 06:07 AM
BA Summer League

Due Thursday, July 4th

Minimum - 6 lines
Max - 10 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit or match the first to drop


Cred Ryno

Sharp
07-01-2019, 12:18 PM
Cred I have ryno's 10 already

Ryno
07-04-2019, 10:37 PM
Cred aka Takem2school

Numb numb juice to the head, I’ll paint ya team & have em duckin the blitz
As for School? Boy he’s in trouble once the leads rollin out the whip like the vid
Pistol whippin ya bells, lift her soul up once we start unloadin them shells
Wishin her well, surround ya doll w/ the sticks but we ain’t conjurin spells
I’ve got no manners dawg, if I grab the handle ur gettin hit w/ the 5th
Dumpin the clips, s’like chivalry, this ain’t the 1st time I’ve had to open up for a bitch
Ya sluts vag stays in action, my homies leavin her guts limp
Dawg she’s had 3 shafts in her trailer WAAAAAY before that Samuel L film
Turn ya crib to a horror scene, ur gettin taxed for that pussy shit today
The ratchet’ll go on a tariff I let it blow...thats a SCARY price u’ll have to pay

U trash.

Sharp
07-05-2019, 01:05 PM
Cred, if you post before feedback is given Ryno has okayed an ext

Aero
07-05-2019, 01:40 PM
Cred is a scared hoe.

Surround your doll with sticks was good
Open up for a bitch could've been corny but it was pretty good. Liked how you flipped it.
Samuel line was coolish but predictable..

Blue Bayou
07-05-2019, 02:08 PM
Numb numb juice to the head, I’ll paint ya team & have em duckin the blitz
As for School? Boy he’s in trouble once the leads rollin out the whip like the vid
cool np & concept.. seems like a fresh idea, solid open
Pistol whippin ya bells, lift her soul up once we start unloadin them shells
Wishin her well, surround ya doll w/ the sticks but we ain’t conjurin spells
cool stick meta.. dig it
I’ve got no manners dawg, if I grab the handle ur gettin hit w/ the 5th
Dumpin the clips, s’like chivalry, this ain’t the 1st time I’ve had to open up for a bitch
cool 'open up' flip... wording was solid, enjoyable bar
Ya sluts vag stays in action, my homies leavin her guts limp
Dawg she’s had 3 shafts in her trailer WAAAAAY before that Samuel L film
lol pretty funny, trailer... multi is garb tho
Turn ya crib to a horror scene, ur gettin taxed for that pussy shit today
The ratchet’ll go on a tariff I let it blow...thats a SCARY price u’ll have to pay
prob the only real 'miss' in this verse... tariff been done a lot of ways for years so no feeling of freshness here makes this blahh to me


Nice verse Ryno.

Wanderer
07-05-2019, 02:51 PM
Cred aka Takem2school

Numb numb juice to the head, I’ll paint ya team & have em duckin the blitz
As for School? Boy he’s in trouble once the leads rollin out the whip like the vid
Not bad, lacked real sting
Pistol whippin ya bells, lift her soul up once we start unloadin them shells
Wishin her well, surround ya doll w/ the sticks but we ain’t conjurin spells
Ok
I’ve got no manners dawg, if I grab the handle ur gettin hit w/ the 5th
Dumpin the clips, s’like chivalry, this ain’t the 1st time I’ve had to open up for a bitch
Dope
Ya sluts vag stays in action, my homies leavin her guts limp
Dawg she’s had 3 shafts in her trailer WAAAAAY before that Samuel L film
Limp & film...? Nah
Turn ya crib to a horror scene, ur gettin taxed for that pussy shit today
The ratchet’ll go on a tariff I let it blow...thats a SCARY price u’ll have to pay
Na not feeling
U trash.

Sharp
07-07-2019, 09:07 PM
Numb numb juice to the head, I’ll paint ya team & have em duckin the blitz
As for School? Boy he’s in trouble once the leads rollin out the whip like the vid
nice all around. Good execution, feels fresh.
Pistol whippin ya bells, lift her soul up once we start unloadin them shells
Wishin her well, surround ya doll w/ the sticks but we ain’t conjurin spells
sick. Haven't said that about a stick line for awhile too
I’ve got no manners dawg, if I grab the handle ur gettin hit w/ the 5th
Dumpin the clips, s’like chivalry, this ain’t the 1st time I’ve had to open up for a bitch
God damn this is fire
Ya sluts vag stays in action, my homies leavin her guts limp
Dawg she’s had 3 shafts in her trailer WAAAAAY before that Samuel L film
funny and works
Turn ya crib to a horror scene, ur gettin taxed for that pussy shit today
The ratchet’ll go on a tariff I let it blow...thats a SCARY price u’ll have to pay
Wordplay works well. Light, but okay

Solid verse, no misses. Cred woulda had a tough time here